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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

[QUOTE=PremHeer_Chahat]Very intresting
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me
[/QUOTE]thanks for liking continue to read

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome loved pt 1 continue asap thanks for the pm me

thanks for liking dear and i l cont soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey
amazing start....loved it....👏👏👏 continue soon....and thanks for the PM...😊

love
Afreen

thanks yaar and ya i l cont soon aand pm u

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd
Hi aishu
Ab teri tabiyat theek hia na?
Ab teri typhoid'..I mean jaundice kaisa hai😆
Wow what a chapter, ya seriously u have bcome a drama queen now, jab dekho tragedy ka hi topic choose karti hia. Ab arohi arjun se pyaar karit aur tu uski shaadi aditya se kara rahi hai. Prem aur heer saath hai, do they knew they chat with each other or no. aur teesre couple ka kya haal hai, wo kab entry marenge. Liked this update, wanna know how u will get back arohi in the life of arjun. Do update soon

main thik hun aur meri jaundice thik hai tu leg pulling mat kar

hahahaah sahi hai main dramaqueen hahhaha yes ab puaar kiya to shadi jaroori to nahi well they know weach other or not willbe coming
tessra couple abhi out of order hai
well i l get back arjun or not is still awaiting as have planned tragic ends so i hope tumhe andaza ho hi gaya hoga

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

ANTAHEEN

CHAPTER – 2

Heer saw the tears in arohis eyes but she thought this were the tears of her fear of seperation from her parents
Then her thought got broken by someone standing next to her who was staring her

Heer : what ?
Prem : just trying to see that r u covering some news over here ??
Heer : well if u r searching a terrorist here then think that m too covering a news
Prem: why u always in a mood to fight?
Heer: because ur questions irritate me
Prem : arre u r always angry ? when I arres ta terrorist u angry ? When I find some clue u angry?
Heer : because everytime u fail my plan last time maine ek mcc ka interview kitni muskil se arrange kiya tha and at last moment u caught him and I cant take his interview jiski wajah se mera promotion nahi hua
Prem : r nt u happy ki maine ek criminal ko pakda
Heer: ha aur meri nayya dubo di
Prem : uska main kuch nahi kar sakta mujhe to promotion mil gayi na tumse mujhe kya lena dena
Lekin jo bhi ho tum mere kaam bahot aati ho saari information tum laati ho aur credit main hahah
Heer: meri team ke gaddar ko to mian pakad hi lungi tumhare udne ke din gaye
Prem: I l wait for that sweetheart

During their conversation meher entered

Meher : prem why u teasing her ?
Prem: aap bhi
Heer: mam isse to main kisi din aise casse mein phasaungi ki ye royega
Waise headline acchi rahegi na prem juneja founded taking money from a criminal
Ya phir corrupted prem juneja
Prem : tere dil ke armaan aanssouon mein beh jayenge samjhe ms . mann

Meher : bas bas concentrate on marriage yahan cats and dogs ki tarah mat lado

Prem: ab ye cat hai toh cat ki tarah hi ladegi na
Heer : ha aur tum dog waise saare ladke hote hai par tum bull dog ho samjhe

Meeher : tum dono jab bhi milte ho uhhhh now shut up

Prem: ha ha ye chup kaisi rahegi lamer kahi ki

Heer : u better shhh warna next time I l sue u out

Prem : piss off

Heer: u better do say that to urself

WITH THAT HEER LEFT FROM THERE

Meher : prem u know she doesn't likes you kyunki uski promotion ruk gayi last time tumhari wajah se still u tease her

Prem : hmm mujhe usse chidhana bahot accha lagta hai

Meher: u

WITH THAT MEHER TOO LEFT

Prem : app sayad nahi janti di uska sarcasm mujhe kisi acche dost ki yaad dila ta hai pata nahi usse main mil paunga ya nahi tab tak in se hi main dil behla lun

Here in all this conversation the only silent person sitting was arohi
The flames of fire was like her funeral pyre
Her bangles were like handcuffs
The sindoor which will be filled in her maang is like her blood
Her magalsutra tuging near her heart is like a knife which is ripped to her heart
Her tears are like storm which is going inside her

AND THE ONLY THING SHE KNOWS THAT THE MAN SITTING BESIDE HER IS HER FRIEND FROM CHILDHOOD SHE IS EVEN CHEATING HIM AND SHE HAS TO COMMIT EVERYTHING TO HIM ……………………………………………………..

LIFE DOESN'T GIVES A SECOND CHANCE
SO ………

JO KAL KARAYE SO AAJ KAR JO AAJ KARAYE SO AB
PAL MEIN PARLAY HOYEGI TO BAHURI KAREGA KAB

ANTAHEENNNNNNNNN……………………………………..

LOVE
AISHWARYA GAYEN

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RjUSInkuF10

guys the song jap pakhi which i have written is in this video do watch it its amazing then u l know what m i writing actually

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago

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meeshti jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

hiiiiiiiiiiiii aishu

awesome update

its damn funny

i love the way of writing dialogues

specailly wen heer sayz meri naiya toh dubb gayii

ehehehehehehehehe

han bachi main bhi teri tarah pagal ho gayi hun

hihihihihhhiii

update soon

Edited by meeshi. - 15 years ago

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saba khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

nice update aishwarya
omg prem is so naughty 😆 ,kitna tease kar raha hai heer ko
but y arohi is not stopping this marriage.i guess she or som1 else might be in other part
so update next part soon

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

hey Ashwarya,
first of all forgive me for reserving a place and still not commenting on PArt 1...
see i am holding ears...
i know i have done this for the second time... but plz understand... galti meri nahin teri hai... itni quick updates de rahi hai tu aaj kal...lolz... see me very ishmat... apni ghalti tere sar laga di...😉

acha enough bak-bak...
abhi update ki taraf aate hain...
comments will be mixed for both the parts...
haila!!! Arohi ki shaddi??? kisi aur ke sath... ruk de yeh shaddi... you vamp...

and my my... Premeer are cute beyond imaginations...
loved the way he was teasing her...
can actually imagine Heer bari set lagti hai chirte hoye...
oh poor baby... promotion nahi hoi uski Prem ki waja se...
aur Prem ji kissi aur ki mehnat pe maze le rahe hain... wah... very smart...

kehna tou bohat kuch hai per tu bore ho jayi gi iss liye baqi discussions agli baar...
acha sun dosri FF baad mein parhin gi mein... naraz mat hona...

bubye jaan,
love,
Suhana.