FF: Hamari Chahat-- part 9 page 10.. 10th dec 10

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
she is lying to prem...........do continue soon dear.............hope nothing happens to chahat.............do pm me when u update..........good that u have free time right now..............

ok i will surely pm you and the update will be up by saturday... i think i ll do one part per weekk now =)😛😛
btw not many ppl have replied so stopped bt glad to hear appreciation now yipppeee...i shall continue sooonn..😛😛😛

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MrsCrosby87

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Omg can't wait till the next part
Do pm me wen yu update

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Neha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

great part
update soon
do pm me when u update

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

part 3

Prem and Heer at Chahat's school

heer:prem, tumhe kya zaroorat thi usse jaane deni ki...hum pichle pandrah minute se yahaan wait kar rahe hain aur woh phone bhi nahin utha rahii..she is rejecting our calls!

prem: why are you putting the blame on me...thodi si der hogayi hai kuch galat thodi kar rahi..

heer (smiling) :Prem...tum bachpan mein itne shareef the is ka yeh matlab nahin ke chahat bhi goody two shoes hai...agar tumhe abhi tak samajh nahin aya tho she has lied to you and she is bunking her p.t.m

this angered prem ..as much as he supported chahat in evrything one thing that he could not just stand was chahat lying to him..it was just unacceptable. while thinking about all this angrily he saw chahat's best friend araina..

prem went up to her: hey araina beta umm..is chahat around because i cant really see her..i mean had she left the cafe or is she on her way because she keeps rejecting my call so i dont exactly know where she is

araina: she came to the cafe at 9 and left like at 10 30ish she said she ll come with u guys to school...

prem was super angry now that it was confirmed that chahat had planned to bunk her ptm and had lied to prem...
prem and heer had left the house at 10 30 and chahat knew abt her parents punctuality so may be she planned everything accordinglyy.
after 8 years of being with chahat ,prem never had ever felt chahat was majorly wrongg..
he had nt ever been super angry with her... just slightly strict regarding some matters but never had to reach a stage when he actually thought she deserved a good scolding for her behaviour but this time it was different

prem and heer went to the school auditorium where the meeting was taking place..every teacher questioned chahat s absence and prem's anger increased.
also,this led him to pay more attention to every weakness that the teachers pointed and same was the case with every complain...

prem and heer now in the car and prem fumingg. it was an unusual situation, heer had to calm him down but then it was not just prem s anger, he was hurt,majorly hurtt.also,even though chahat got an A in her result ...the joy it brought otherwise was overpowered by the atmosphere created by her action,
by her mistake??

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Neha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

very lovely update !

wating to know how will prem react with chahat

update soon

thx for pm

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

thanks guys..will update soon :)😛

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sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

awesome

hey i read all your chapters please update soon

waiting eagerly

please also do pm me

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427936

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

its too good....very nice keep it up...plz update soon...

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

PART 4

prem and heer in their car
prem driving just when his phone rang.
it was preet.. 😃
prem picked up the call and put the phone on loudspeaker modee

preet: hi bhayya meeting overr?

prem:yup...yours over too ?tumharee kaisee gayee

preet:as usual..meree beti bilkul mujh par gayi hai.. app ko pata hai gunn ko bilkul parhai ka shoq nahi hai but stii she got a decent B so i am pretty gladd.

prem:you should be.. itna improvement jo haii..give her my love
heer:and mine too :)

preet.: haha i surely will..oh jis ka baat ke liye phone kya tha woh to kehna hi bhool giyaa congratulationss

prem:kis liye??

preet: kis liye..PB i knoww chahat did excellent.. is she around..usse phone do

prem:(the smile preet had brought to prem's face through is absolute love and affection vivid in alll his conversations now faded away as the thought of chahat s lie came into his mind)
after a slight pausee: umm no she is nt around

preet: how come?? chalo koi baat nahi i ll be coming to ur place in like half an hour actually one hour or so then will go to work from there..

prem:aaj tera off hai.. tu hamesha bhool jata hai!

preet:thank you PB...i love you ...yaar mein apni off khud kaise bhool gaya..? such good news PB i love you alott

both heer and preet were laughing at the fact that preet s daughter gunn was 12 years old and he was still a child..but a mature child very hardworking..
how he was the same silly preet but also how he knew his duties very well.

prem:mujhe pata hai u love me..acha ab ghar aa gaya bye

preet:bye pb..see you in a while

prem back to the anger again..back to the fury..hurt more than ever..barging inside his housee almost screaming chahat..chahat..!hon...come downstaies right now!

even though prem was angry his scoldings even had words like honey sweety darling baby because at the end of the day he could not be sooo mean to his bacha.even though he was abt to scold her and was all willing he also knew how difficult the task was for him each time. 😛

Edited by rrk401 - 15 years ago