FF: Hamari Chahat-- part 9 page 10.. 10th dec 10

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Hajra Khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

VERY NICE N YUPP PM ME WHEN U UPDATE DONT 4GET THAT

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rishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

come on yar update

waiting for ur update

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

PART 5

Chahat came running down the stairs knowing she was in for trouble.
she was now standing right in front of a rather angry prem and a majorly upset heer.

chahat superbly scared:woh pa mein umm..

heer:woh kya chahat? how could you infact why would you want to do such a thing? hum donon to tumhare parhai ke baare mein itne strict bhi nahin hai then why are you acting so foolish? haan your percentage has fallen but agar tum aa jatee to zyada se zyaada kya hota??

prem:is se sawaal puchne ka kya faida? hamein kya pata ye phir se jhoot bol de? how are we suppose to believe what she says now that she has started lying to us on such big matters?

chahat: (At the verge of crying) par pa, i am verry sorry listen i..i..promise nothing like this will ever happen againn..!!

prem: i know nothing like this will ever happen again and you dont need to worry about that because i ll make sure it does nt .for one entire month you will only go to school for socialisation.. no parties no get togethers.. no nothing..do you get that?

chahat: yes i do and i am very sorry

prem was still angry hurt and upset and heer was too the same
prem barged out of the house and headed towards his work
prem: heer mein tumhe phone karoonga
byee
heer:byee take care
chahat: bye pa, love you loads (whispering to her selff )

prem and heer did not ask chahat for an explanation because they knew chahat couldnt ever do something wrong.they were sure abt the fact that from the cafe chahat came back home and bunked the ptm because she thought her over all percentage even though was an A, it had fallen down a considerable amountt and.during the process she ended up lying to prem and heer which was unacceptable by them and hence both were upset and cross with herr.
they were extremely fond of chahat like most parents would be and just thought that chahat should nt lie abt anything to themm but then this time chahat just had to lie..heer might but prem would never understand,
even though her plan had worked and prem and heer were right under the impression she was not at the p.t.m because she was at home for the one hour hey were there, chahat by the end of it was sad too.
filled with grief and sorrow chahat rushed up to her room and heer headed towards the kitchen just when the door bell rang..

Edited by rrk401 - 15 years ago

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

NOTE
deshians!
pleasee just dont like my posts
send your repliess too
detailed ones if possible.... =) they really make me feel happy and do tell me what has been your favourite part as yettt
loads of love
rrk

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Neha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Hey
Nice Awesome Loved it. Plz continue soon 👏
Thnx for pm !

Edited by crystall - 15 years ago

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rishi

@Rishi87

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

nice update👏

all ur updates are gud

i am waiting for ur next update that shd hav lot of surprising twist

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sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

hey overall awesome part but it was too short

i hope prem and heer forgive chahat

update soon

and thnaks for the pm

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rrk401

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

hey guyss
i know it was really short bt then i had nt updated in so long and i felt badd so this one was a quickiee.
a lonngg one coming your way this weekend hopefully
and yup with twists and turns
loadss of love
rrk

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MrsCrosby87

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

luved itt

thanks for the pm

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anumol

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

premeer shouting at chahat..........😭 loved where prem said bye to heer even when he was in an angry mood........what is wrong with chahat......i understand that she has diabetics........but why does she bunk ptm and come late at night??........................do continue soon........do pm me when u update......add me plllllsssssss.........👍🏼

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