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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi friends! i am very sorry for the delay in the updates................ i hope you like this part ahead.
here's part 6............................
part 6

(ash & daljeet were arguing on the door)

Daljeet- I have told u so many times that don't be in kitchen but u'''' arey,U have to become queen of this house & u r always busy doing work like servants!

Ash- mom, relax, I know what I want to do, haven't u heard that a way to man's heart is through his stomach.. I was preparing breakfast for preet'''

Daljeet- oh meri jalaan! First make u'r place in preet's room & then think of preet's heart. If u want to do something for preet '''''''' instead of cooking for him '''''''.. Remove his clothes'.

Ash- mom'''. What r u saying?????????????

Daljeet ' (hitting on ash's shoulder)jab hi samajti hai, kuch ulta hi samajti hai''..I mean at this time preet must be in bathroom remove his clothes from cupboard & keep ready''''. Let preet wear clothes that you have selected for him.

Ash opened the door which was unlatched ''''''' & started calling out preet'''' preet'''.

Preet (from the bathroom) ash what r u doing here?????

Ash ' (said in a very low voice) soon I will share this room with u ''' her heart was dancing on the thought that she will see preet coming out of bathroom "may be bare"!!!!!!!!!!!!

She further thought-- preet & I alone in the room & even meher is not there here. Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arey, aaj to mein bhagvan se kuch aur bhi maangti to woh bhi mil jata! (ash was still lost in thoughts.

Meher ' why the hell is ash not replying??????? (meher sounding very irritating)

Preet- say little softly''' otherwise ash will hear u & than she will learn that u r sharing this bathroom with me''''.. & may be she will think us having a bath together. (He said teasingly)

Before meher could answer'''''''

Ash heard preet saying something so she said'.. preet what r u talking? Ash was just near the door of the bathroom. meher was really shocked & little afraid too.

Preet- ash I asked what r u doing here? He said while enjoying the looks on meher's face.

Ash- well I thought that meher is here'''''. This sentence horrified meher''''''''.

Preet ' quickly replied''.. oh yes, meher is here! While saying this he held meher very close to his chest' then he whispered in meher's ears ' "in my arms, "

Ash looking confused! Meher is here???????? Where?

Preet (replies to ash) - in u'r thoughts''.. Still looking in meher's almond shaped eyes'' (Continuing his sentence further preet whispered to meher) - '''''''. & in my heart'''.

Meher couldn't help blushing, her cheeks tuned pink. But she really wondered how preet could manage talking to 2 girls at the same time with so ease.

Ash- preet!!!!!!! Arey, I think meher has not removed you clothes today! She said noticing no clothes on the bed.

Preet ' (touching meher's forehead with his '''' his lips at the distance of half inch from her's whispered) (meher gasped) - well, today she doesn't need to do that hard work'.. I am already bare.

Meher ' pushed him away (not too much though) she wanted to reply but had to stay mute as ash was standing near the door & could easily manage to hear even a small whisper made by meher'' & preet was talking full advantage of it.

Ash said in the mean while ' not a problem preet today I will remove your clothes'..

Preet ' (in panic) what?

Ash - ohfo! Preet'.. I mean today you wear clothes of my choice, saying this she moved towards the cupboard.

Meher- preet stop ash because ash will find no clothes!

Preet & meher both panicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




too be continued...........................

hope u all like it................ waiting eagerly for your responses...............

Edited by addiction - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
hi this part was soooo cute ....continue asap ... thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love the panic that meher is experiencing and Preet is so calm. I also like that preet realizes he is in love with meher. You made it so interesting for both of them to be stuck in a bathroom!😆 And Daljeet chachi's love hotline advice to ash is hilarious. If I were preet, I would never eat anthing ash made or he would be stuck in the bathroom forever. 😆
I also love the irony that you added by Ash indirectly causing Preet and Meher to come closer.
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yayy.............this part ws shoo shweet and romantic..luvd it......continue soon....and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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edit :
Daljeet and her daughter, no comments .. "remove his clothes" lmao ..
Loll Preet'z vey naughty, and kudoos to him; he's handling 2 girls at the same time very easily lollz .. SO Meet'z relation went to another level of cozyness, that's great !!
"and in y <3" how cute and romantic ! Loll Poor Mehr .. Ash is such a besharam !! 😳
oh and by the by, does Preet only have one pair of clothz in his cupboard ? So what's the point of choosing ? 😕😛 just kiddin

amazing part, can't wait to know what happens next, update soon !!


Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
nyc work yr!!!!!!1........do contni soooon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
omg...........that was awesomeeeeeeeeee...................
can't wait 4 da next part....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi..plz wen you update the next part..pm mee..thanks!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update!
plz cont. soon!
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
Loved how Preet was teasing Meher
Go away Ash!
Cant wait for the next part
Thanx for the PM

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