meet mini FF - 'let's make it sensational!' part 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guys, i was missing meet terribly so thought of writing an OS on meet. i initially started of to write an OS but i ended up writing something that is a little longer then OS. maybe because it's my first attempt to write an OS i am having a little problem in managing the length of the OS. so i am calling it a mini FF. It has 4 parts.
here's the first part! hope you all love it! please comment as it will encourage a shy person like me to write more. & suggestions are welcomed as they will help me to improve.
"Let's make it sensational!"
part 1

Preet was standing near the window & staring outside; meher entered the room with the glass of orange juice.

Preet was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't realize meher's presence. Meher kept the glass on the table & stood besides preet.

Meher - preet, I didn't knew that our garden looks so beautiful in the moonlight.

Preet - meher? When did u come?

Meher - in this world?, Or in this room?, or in your life?

Smile broke at the corners of preets lips as meher replied. (He always admired secretly her way of answering)

Meher ' well, I had come to give you this orange juice, dinner preparations are on, but it will take a little while. Till then have this juice & get fresh.

(meher knew preet can't control his hunger & specially when he returns from the office.)

As meher started moving preet held her hand & said''''

preet ' meher, I need to talk to you. (They sat on the bed)

(preet avoiding looking in her eyes) meher, we have lost another contract & I am afraid that our financial condition would turn worst; so it's better that we start curtailing our expenses from now.

Meher ' don't worry preet; every thing will be ok soon. But will definitely cut down our extra expenses; saying this she started moving''.

Preet ' meher take this glass of juice & from tomorrow there's no need for this.

Meher quietly took the glass of juice & left. That night at the dinning table, she noticed that preet eat less than that he used to.

Next morning''.. preet woke up & went to bathroom for taking a bath. When he returned he didn't find his clothes in the bed. (Ideally meher would keep preet's clothes ironed & ready to wear on the bed; while he bathed.)

As preet didn't find his clothes ready on bed, he opened the cupboard to find a pair of clothes himself.

To his horror he saw his cupboard empty, with not even a single piece of clothing in it. He search all the room, a single piece of cloth that was present in the room was the towel that he had tied around his waist.

Meher '''. Meher'''''.. He roared.

Meher took her own sweet time to reach to his room; leaving preet fuming.

Meher stood in front of preet her face was calm, as if nothing has happened.

Preet's face was red with anger. Before preet could begin'..

hope you guys like it! waiting eagerly to read your responses.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Meet FF !! thnx loads !! It does really make me smile and happy as m one of their biggest fan .. loved yest epis, Preet came back after a long time na ..
ok coming to ur FF, I love I love !! keep writting more and plz try to write more than 4 parts if u can :) .. So Preet wanna reduce his expenses, so Meher did also reduce his clothes lmao .. only a towel ryte now .. I love her way of replying and making him understand the situation .. I think she did it to show him that he shd eat equally well, ryte ? anyways love the FF, update soon and thnx for the PM ..
Yeyy m the first one to comment !!
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I m alwz up for a meet ff...so luved reading this one!!!😃
plz continue.... n add me to ur pm list!
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aw poor preet... i love this jodi ... waiting for the next part
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awesomeeeeee.................
can't wait 4 da next part...........................
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this is sooooo cute!!!lol ilove the spunk you have shown in meher and preet's character is so serious and sad- i love it!!! this is supposed to be when they are still just friends right?
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awww...........poor preet................nice..waitng for nxt part...update soon............
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Originally posted by: tasnime

Meet FF !! thnx loads !! It does really make me smile and happy as m one of their biggest fan .. loved yest epis, Preet came back after a long time na ..
ok coming to ur FF, I love I love !! keep writting more and plz try to write more than 4 parts if u can :) .. So Preet wanna reduce his expenses, so Meher did also reduce his clothes lmao .. only a towel ryte now .. I love her way of replying and making him understand the situation .. I think she did it to show him that he shd eat equally well, ryte ? anyways love the FF, update soon and thnx for the PM ..
Yeyy m the first one to comment !!

hi!!!!!!!! even i loved fri 's episode. it was pleasure to see preet.
i hope the meet drought period for meet fans like u & me & many others soon get over.
& thanks for commenting. it's very encouraging. i will update soon.

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Originally posted by: Orion

I m alwz up for a meet ff...so luved reading this one!!!😃

plz continue.... n add me to ur pm list!

hi! i am glad to find another meet fan. i will surely pm u next time i write anything on meet.
thanks for commenting. i will update soon.
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Originally posted by: foxi

aw poor preet... i love this jodi ... waiting for the next part


hi! i think u have joined this forum recently so a hearty welcome to u.
i am glad that u liked my ff. i will continue soon. thanks for commenting.

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