Premeer Oneshot: During a Game of Cards,Sequel p12 - Page 3

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome as alwayz dying 2 read more one shots nd u r an awesome writer so do write a fanfic it wud b gr8

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aaminaman

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Posted: 16 years ago

loved it superb and add me also in the pm i like your writing svery much

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Sunshine

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey dear

again a very beautiful os, but mature content don't let children around to read it😆😆.

Okay jokes apart intersting concept prem is potrayed as wild lover but i think tht he should'nt be reacting lyk this in front of his whole family, so embrassing fr heer☺️, but don't u think tht ravish ws a wrong word😕😕 as in it mns forcefully................................ but i m disappointd wth u so less of PH i want more of them, can u just wite 1-2 more parts of ths, i really hope tht u won't disappoint me😃😃 n if so thn think bout childrens also🤣🤣

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -fsn-
sooo beautiful OS

Thank u.........................😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Casssp
as always i loved it. U are really a good writer. Awsome

thank u soooooooooo much 4 da compliment.............😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sarah--
nice shot

fnx.......................😳😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: stunninstar
ohhhhh...it was very mature n ronatic....😉...loved the way prem was potrayed..!!!lovely...

thanx sandy..................
glad u liked it.......................

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Deizy
hi .wonderfull shot ...
love ur writting ..keepp writting more shots!!!!!thankssss

thank u sooooooooooo much............
and more OS coming up soonnnnnnnnnn.......................

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer4rever
hiii
a great relief after an adventurous day

it was awesome

keep writing

thanks for the pm

Thank u sooooooooo much 4 reading and commenting.........................😃

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

awsome oneshot yaar!!
do write more of these!!

thnx for the pm

well i culd imagine heer and prem

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