Premeer Oneshot: During a Game of Cards,Sequel p12

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

1st of all thnx yaar for adding me to ur pm list..........
about the os:omg it was just too hot to handle..........i wish it wud just go on n on n on..............n i wonder wht wud hv hpnd inside the room;)........the way prem directly said to heer tht he wants to make love to her was too hot yaar............ive already started seeing sapna abt thier makeout......................can u do me a favour????plz make a sequel of this part (the story inside the room)..............plzzzzzzzzz...........or make another os abt thier makeout............

it was just too gud............out of this world...........fantabulus.........amazing............a teen tali fo u👏👏👏

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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

omg.......i was blushing the whole time.................my mom is looking at me and asking whats wrong..thank god she doesn't know english much...................😳

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arshiya

@cute_san17

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

soooooooo shweet!!!!!!!!!!!

i lov reading ur os

they are jus awesome

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riyaasehgall

@riyaasehgall

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

lyk always gud..............bt it ws more hilarious i laughed alot..........do write meet nw too sumthng romantic.....i luv da way u write...............thnx

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hiiii

it was awesome

keep writing

thanks for the pm

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Alina

@sereaishitedare

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

You're on a roll! I LaLaLaLaved itt!!! <333

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

amzing Os

i cant chose my favourite

they r all awesome

thanx 4 the pm

Kamal

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fungrl

@fungrl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

WoW.....Prem is very besharm😳

Awesome OS as usual

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

🤣

I am still laughing

so became the leader this time and displayed the path to his family members for being romantic.😆

'whether he was first or last, his presence is felt by everyone', that is true😉--the way you described prem that was so good. perfect.

i still cant stop myself from laughing.😆 especially the effect prem's move had on others was so hilarious. 😛. ok really good. do consider its sequel. Amazing OS.