Premeer Oneshot: During a Game of Cards,Sequel p12 - Page 4

quiet different ....liked it .....do write more....you are very creative....

Originally posted by: nehara

it was really great!!! :)
waiting 4 ur next OS!!! :)

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

very romantic OS...

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

hiiiii wonderful shot as always! loved the way you showed prem in here.....you describe everything so well! enjoyed reading it!

and thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: nuptalie

awesome.
So romantic ya☺️
and funny too.
I loved it

Originally posted by: ahana2009

1st of all thnx yaar for adding me to ur pm list..........
about the os:omg it was just too hot to handle..........i wish it wud just go on n on n on..............n i wonder wht wud hv hpnd inside the room;)........the way prem directly said to heer tht he wants to make love to her was too hot yaar............ive already started seeing sapna abt thier makeout......................can u do me a favour????plz make a sequel of this part (the story inside the room)..............plzzzzzzzzz...........or make another os abt thier makeout............

it was just too gud............out of this world...........fantabulus.........amazing............a teen tali fo u👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

omg.......i was blushing the whole time.................my mom is looking at me and asking whats wrong..thank god she doesn't know english much...................😳