FF Heer Prem Hamesha Part 4 updated on p.5

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@sweetanu2314

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

kamal hain..........bus chal pade..........don't u think she should have said no sir it is ok or something............do continue soon............do pm me when u do.........nice ff.........

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@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Ur FF is so cute
loved it
umm can u make it a littile longer next time
btw i loved it please continue asap
thanks for the pm
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cuteangelgirl95

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

awesome loved it such an awesome part continue asap thanks for the pm me so cute ff

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
kamal hain..........bus chal pade..........don't u think she should have said no sir it is ok or something............do continue soon............do pm me when u do.........nice ff.........

Thank you so much
I will update soon
And you are added in pm list

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@Heerbeauty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat
Ur FF is so cute
loved it
umm can u make it a littile longer next time
btw i loved it please continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

Thanks
I will write long next time

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome loved it such an awesome part continue asap thanks for the pm me so cute ff

Thanks for comment
I will update soon

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@Heerbeauty

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Guys,Here is part 4 I know that i write small part that's why i am writing quickly

Part 4

Heer is in now Prem's house.Everyone excepted her because she is an orphange.Heer is in her rrom.Kulraaj came into her room.
Kulraaj:Heer
heer:Haa,Kul di?
Kulraaj:Bo Heer...Maa ne kaha ke tum yaha nayiaayi ho issliye tumko puri ghar dekhane ko.Agar tumko koi kam nei to aao mere saath,main tumko humaara ghar dekhati hoon
Heer:Jee.

Kulraaj started to show Heer their house.She brought her onto kitchen.
Heer:Kitne bara kitchen hai aur kitna sundar bhi hai
Kulraaj:tumhe pasand aaya?
Heer:Bahot.
Kulraaj:Aab chalo tumhe Prem ki kamra dekhati hoon.
Heer:Chaliye di

They came into Prem's room.Prem is in bathroom.The room is not clean.Prem's shirt,pant ,other things are not in their place.
Kulraaj:Yeh Prem bhi na! Kya halat bana rakha hai kamre ka.
Gay3:KULRAAJ......
Kulraaj:Maa mujhe bula rahi hai.Main chalti hoon Heer.

Kulraaj went away from the rrom.Heerm thought that she can clean the room.Then she started clean the room.there was some water on the floor.Heer slipped for the water.Prem came out from the bathroom wearing a towel and saw Heer.He caught her by her waist.
Heer closed her eyes that she will be on the floor in few time but when she reliesed that someone caught her she opened her eyes and saw that it's Prem.Prem made her stand.
Prem:Tum yaha mere kamre mein kya karrahi ho?
Heer:bo...main.....Kul di...bo....

This time Preet came into the room and saw Prem and Heer so close.
Preet:ahom.....
Bothof them looked on Preet.
Preet:PB maa ne aapko khane mein bulaya hai aur aap ko bhi(He pointed to Heer)
Prem:haa,main araha hoo.
Preet and Heer went away from the room.
*Prem's Pov*
Yeh mujhe ho kya rahi hai.jab bhi Heer ko dekhta hoon mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai.Kahi mujhe Heer ke saath pyar to nehi ho geya.
NAHI........shayed main pagal hone jarara hoon.
*Prem's Pov end*

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In dinning Table:-

Gay3:Heer beta tum parai kaha karti ho?
Heer:Jee aunty bo main Delhi City University mein 1st year mein hoon
Gay3:Aur tum?(She told to Maher)
Maher:Jee...Main....College....bo....akum....(She is busy to eat a piece of chicken that she can't talk)
Preet:Yeh kitne khati hai maa
Lalit:Aise baat nei karte hai
Lalit:Waise Heer beta aagar tum bura na mano to ek baat pucchu?
Heer:Haa pucchiye na uncle.
Lalit:bo....tumhara maa-baaoji ka maot kaise....
Heer:bo....uncle....car accident mein.....(Heer is crying)
Gay3:Aapbhi na bacchi ko rola diya.Heer beta rou maat.
Lalit:Haa beta main to baas yuhi pucchraha tha.waise tumhara baoji ka naam kya tha?
Heer:Jee..Bo..Balraaj Maan.
Lalit:Kya...tum ballu aur teji ke beti to nehi ho?!
Heer:Aapko mere maa-baoji ka naam kaise pata?
Lalit:Iska matlab tum ballu aur teji ka beti ho.

Lallu just crying.
Lalit:arre Heer beta tu aapne Lallu chacha ko nehi pahchana.Main teri Lallu chacha hoon.
Heer:Aap Lallu chacha....mujhe to yaakin hi nehi horaha hai.Aap ko pata hai chacha aapko main kitna dhuna maa-baoji ki maut ke baad.
Lalit:Leken Ballu aur Teji... kab hua yeh sab?
Lalit started crying.
Gay3:Aap shant ho jaiye.Sab theikh ho jaye ga.Aab humere bahu jo ghar mein aayi hai.
Heer:Jee chachi main samjhi nehi.
Gay3:Heer beta tujhe pata nehi,tere baap aur inone wada kiya tha ke tere aur Prem ki shaadi karway gi.Balraaj bhai aur Teji to hai nei leke yeh kaam to aab hume karna hoga na.
Prem and Heer are shocked and also blushing.Heer went away from there to her room.Maher also went there.

Maher:Kyun di itna sharma kyun rahi ho?(She teases her)
Heer:chup kar,Maher.
Maher:Kyun chup karoo ,Haa?(She pushes her and laughed loudly)

otherwise Prem is in he room.He is thinking that a unknown girl has come to his life and he have to marry her.He is smiling.He is feeling that he is in love.He thinkd that god made their jodi.Preet came into his room.
Preet:PB,kya soch rahe ho?(He is smiling)
Prem:Kuch nahi.
Preet:Kuch to jarroor soch rahe ho aap.Heer bhabhi ke bara mein soch rahe ho na?
Prem:(He looked on Preet)Heer Bhabhi matlab?
Preet:Mere matlab hai ke shaadi ke baad wahi kehkar bulana hoga na to abhi se kyun nei.
Prem:Preet....tujko to main aaj....(He is running over Preet)
Suddenly he pushed with someone,it's Rafi.
Rafi:Arre Prem,kya hua?Why are you running?
Preet:Arre,PB ki shaadi hai issliye bhagrahi hai.
Rafi:What?Shaadi?Prem ki?
Prem:PREET...........(He then started running again)

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Gay3 and Lallu's room

Gay3:Kitne acche lagrahe hai na.Ghar mein apni bahu aa geya
Lalit:Bahu kyun kahe rahe ho Gay3,hone wale bahu kaho.
Gay3:Baas ek hi baat par chinta ho rahe hai.
Lalit:Kaisi chinta Gay3?
Gay3:wahi,ke prem aur heer raji honge ya fir........
Lalit:Gay3 tum bhi na.Bacche kabhi ma-baap ke baat taal sakte kya.Bo dono jaroor raji honge.
Gay3:Main baat karti hoo na un dono ke saath.

Prem's room

Prem was sitting on the bed and thinking about Heer.Gay3 came here.
Gay3:Prem.
Prem:Haa, Maa(He stood up)
Gay3:Baith yaha.Mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai
Prem:Haa kahiana
Gay3:Phale baith to sahi.

Both of them sat on the bed.
Gay3:Tujhe to pata hi hoga ke main aur tere baoji tere shaadi pakka karli Heer ke saath.
Prem is silent
Gay3:Tu sunrahi hai na mere baat?
Prem:Haa,Maa
Gay3:tujhe koi aitraz to nehi hai iss shaadi mein?
Prem:Nahi maa,mujhe kya aitraaz hoga.Aap dono mere liye jo bhi larki dhunenge mujhe wahi pasand hoga.
Gay3:Yeh hui na baat.Leken tera koi pasand.......
Prem:Nehi maa,Aap to jaante hai aap ki bete ko.
Gay3:Haa janti hoo(She is smiling)To main Heer se baat karoon?
Prem said nothing.He is blushing.
Gay3:To tum dono ek dusre ko jan neke kousish karo.Main aur tera baoji shaadi ke taiyari karti hoon.

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Heer's room

Gay3:Heer beta.
Heer:Haa,chachi
Gay3:Beta jaara idhar aana.Yaha Baitho.
They sat on a sofa.
Gay3:Beta bo mai tumse yeh pucche aayi thi ke iss shaadi mein tumhe koi aitraaj to nehi hai?
Heer:Nahi chachi.Jo rishta mere maa-baoji ne tai kiya tha bo rishte se mujhe koi aitraaj nehi hai.Mujhe to khusi ho rahi hai ke main apni maa-baoji ka wada nivaungi.
Gay3:To rishta pakka.Main Prem se bhi baat ki hai.Usse bhi koi aitraaj nehi hai.Aab to shaadi ki taiari karna parega.
Heer is just blushing.

The next day on dinning table

Lalit:Tum saab keliye ek bara saa breaking news hai.
Harmaan:Breaking news?
Lalit:Haa,Breaking news.
Preet:Kaisi Breaking news?
Lalit:Wahi ke main Prem aur Heer ki shaadi tai kar liya.Kuch samey mein pandit ji ane wale hai.Unse tarikh pakka karke jald se jald shaddi kaway denge.
Preet:Oye kya baat hai....(He said dancing)
Preet,Harmaan,Kulraaj,Maher all started dancing with joy.
Prem and Heer are just blushing.
Gay3:Shant ho jayo sab log.Aur bhi ek news hai.
Preet:Accha?Kya?
Gay3:bo hai ke aaj shaam Prem aur Heer Humara outhouse mein ghumne jayenge.
Preet:oye...balle...balle
(All are very happy)
Prem:Leken maa............
Gay3:Chup kar tu.
Heer:Chachi...
Gay3:Kya chachi maa kaho.
Heer:Maa?
Gay3:Shaadi baad to wahi kahogi na.Aab bolo 'Maa'.
Heer:Maa,hum kaise jaa sakte..........
Gay3:Maine kah diya so kahdiya.Jana to paregai.
Heer is little scared but Prem is so happy.

Prem and Heer in car

Prem:Maa bhi na.........
Heer:Chaliye hum ghar laut chalte hai
Prem:Kyun?Baas pauch hi gaye hai.
Heer:Leken,Sir.........
Prem:SIR?Sir kahke yun bularahi ho?Aagar maaa ko maa bula sakti hoo to mujhe sir kyun?
Heer said nothing.
Prem:PREM bolo.
Heer said nothing.
Prem:Bolo PREM.
Heer:P...R...E...M
Prem smiled.

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