FF Heer Prem Hamesha Part 4 updated on p.5 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey nice concept do continue soon when you will going to update plzzz pme me for your next update oh jst read pt 1 awosme but it was short next time longer update and pm me ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Hi guys, Here is part 2
Part 2
Love is coming


In Hotel
Heer was going to a room by taking some file.Suddenly she pushed with someone.She shouted not seeing the guy.
Heer:Arre,dekkar nehi chal sakte?Gira diya mere mere sari files.
Guy:Sorry.
Heer:Arre,Kya Sorry.

Now Heer saw the guy. After seeing the guy she felt another feeling. The guy is a handsome young man. All the men of the Hotel have came to see the drama.Everyone was telling "Oh my god,yrh to sir hai.Aab to yeh Heer ki nokri chali jayenge." But Heer didn't know that the guy is her boss.Because she is new in here.
Heer:Kuch bolte Kyun Nei?
Guy:Sorry.

Heer said nothing.Now she reliesed that the guy is her boss by seeing the expressions of all the men of the hitel.

Guy:Hi,I am Prem Juneja.And you......

He turned his hand ffor handshake with Heer.
Heer:Sir....I am Heer, Heer Maan.Sorry,sir.I didn't know that you....
Prem:No, ot's okay.You can back to your work.(He is in no mind to let go her)
Heer:Thank you,sir.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Hi guys,Here is part 3
Part 3 Pyar Ki vaasha



The next day in Hotel
In Prem's cabin,prem is working.He needed a file.He toonk the phone.
Prem:Hello.
Oparator:Yes,sir.How can help you?
Prem:Delhi construction ka file hai na bo jara vej dena.Heer ke haath mein.
Operator:Ok,sir.
In few minutes Heer ca,e into Prem's cabin.
Heer:May I come in sir?
Prem:yeah of course.
Heer:Here is your file sir.
Prem:Thanks

Heer is about to go But Prem said
Prem:Heer.....
Heer:Yes,sir.
Prem:bo....Mujhe tumhare bare mein kuch details jan na hai.
Heer:But why sir?
Prem:Tum yaha nayi aayi ho na,isliye.
Heer:Yes,sir
Prem:Tum rahte kaha ho,tumhara ma-baap....
Heer:bo sir....my mom and dad are no more.I and my sister live together
Prem:AKELE?(He is surprised)
Heer:Yes,sir
Prem:Tum dono larki akele rahte ho,daar nei lagta.By the way it's not safe.
Heer:I know sir,but kya Karoo?Majboor hoo.
Prem:Tum chaho to mere ghar mein rah sakteho,tumhare bahenke saath
Heer:What sir?
Prem:Haa,rah sakte ho tum dono.
Heer:Leken sir aapki family.....
Prem:Uski chinta tum chhoro.Main sab sambhal loonga.Kaal chhali aana mere ghar.
Heer:thank you sir.Thank you so much.
You are really great.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

great

update soon


Kamal



thanks i will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

Hai Hai sooo cuteeeeeeeee



Thanks for telling my ff cute
isn't it first time you are reading my ff
your ffs are also cute,Ayysha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome ff
its cute....................
prem is soo helpful
pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
great part......prem is so fast!
update the enxt soon........and do write longer parts!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

awesome ff
its cute....................
prem is soo helpful
pls update soon



Thank you
We all know that Prem is helpful
I will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

great part......prem is so fast!

update the enxt soon........and do write longer parts!



Thank you so much
Next time I'll try to write longer parts

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