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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note : heya friends m back with the installment lets see u like it or not!




PART – 32

Harshad to himself : she is quite interesting , eager to know u more ms .mann …

Heer left from there and came in, whether in other hand harshad dialled a number
Harshad : hey ridz well I would like u to invite personally heer for the get together , I think she will surely come if u insist and I know u want her to come as she is ur good friend now so I think u will do it

Saying this he disconnected
Harshad thought : so ms mann u have to come and I need to see how much u can hate me and how much I can know u through this …

Saying this he left

Here heer came inside and bumped into preet

Preet : hey sorry !
Heer: no its ok
Preet : I saw him , did her left
Heer: preet I had enough of this , jitna maine dekha I can say he cant be prem so we are stopping this discussion here
Preet : but heer !
HeeR: plz and that person is so cheap I don't need any kinda deal I just dial up to neena ji and will ask her if she can handle then its ok otherwise I am not interested
Preet : u know what u r saying , we have a big share of money invested to this our market reputation will be nil
Heer: preet !

She was going to say something but got a call in between
Heer: I will talk to u later preet

Saying this she moved forward with the call
Heer: hello !
Riddhima : hey heer this is riddhima here

Hearing her name she felt a sharp stone crushed on her chest , the girl she got as a best friend is now making her jealous
But heer fought the pain and tried to soothed herself again saying herself that riddhima is not in fault nobodys on fault nor even harshad

Riddhima: hello heer u there
HeeR: yeah
Riddhima: hey well we got a small get together tonight I think harshad has told u even u gonna sign some deal right so I want u to make sure that u come plz , even ask preet to come with his wife , don't worry its not a big thing just some friends of Indian embassy here

Heer was now again in confusion should she say yes because she needs to sign the deal and even riddhima was her good friend she doesn't wants to say no to her

Heer: hey I l try no promises
Riddhima: nope u gonna come or I will come to pick u up from home u don't know me
Heer: yeah I do but still I l try no promises
Riddhima: I know u not gonna break my lil heart u l come bbye
Heer: tc

Heer was s confused to take a decision but finally manage to think what is better to do …



AT PARTY ENTRANCE

Heer was wearing a white churidaar with golden border , no high makeup just two earrings
And preet was wearing jeans with blue high neck

HEER :preet ttumharee aur ridhhima ke kehne pe main yahan aayi to hun but I don't feel this good
Preet : oh heer plz u talked to neena na she will be there next week ek hafte ki toh baat hai

Heer was going through an inner fight she wanted to ask him to know morre about him but whenevr he comes near to her she end up being more far from him , but still she has a feeling which caan lea to destruction of many happy lives

Her mind has agreed that the guy cant be his prem but her heart wanted him to be hers
But in all these kashmakash all heer could think after consulting is she should be practical now as losing of this contract wont result into something good so she have to be strong enough to face this , this running wont going to work

Heer was thinking when riddhima arrived there wearing a pink saree
Ridhhima: hey heer hi preet thank god u both appeared on time and hey preet where is kashish u didn't brought her
Preet : well the kids are alone at home so she didn't came
Heer moved forward and gave her a small hug
Riddhima: so come in

Heer and preet entered and heer could see as riddhima told it was a small party with few people some in casuals , some in business suits .
And then my eyes searched for him but he was nowhere in sight and then her sight fell on a muscular figure coming down from stairs wearing a white shirt , and blue glazed jeans , his hair falling on his forehead , just dried not gelled and his sleeves folded showing his precious watch , his one hand was on his pocket and with the other he was holding his cell on his ear , he was talking to someone

When heer was busy staring at him , suddenly her pair of eyes met with his pair of warm eyes when he looked at her direction , she ccould see the hint of mischieve in his eyes and a shine and awkwardly like a small kid whose theft was caught she removed her eyes from his contact being a little bit embarrased at her own behaviour

Harshad slowly moved toward them and greeted them
Harshad : hello mr. Preet sharma and hi ms.mann nice to see u both here
Preet : hello

Heer didn't responded to it she just stayed there quiet looking towards the floor

After shaking a hand with preet prem started moving towards heer and that just caught heers breath , she was horrified as well as anxiety started beginning inside her
Once she use to just ache for his closeness and now being close to the same face leads growth of many dead emotions within her

Heer kept standing there without moving a inch and even she didn't take a breath she was like rooted to the ground
But whatever heer expected didn't happen he wasn't coming close to her , she saw him brushing her off and moving past her to the person standing behind her
First she was relieved that he didn't meant any closeness to her but another shcok and wave of emotions passed through her when she turned behind to look and her gaze followed to something which ached her heart , a fresh wave of jealousy , pain , grief passed through her
There he was hugging riddhima and then he placed a soft kiss on her forehead
And then her concentration was broken by sudden roar of cheer that followed their hug , their friends were cheering for their love
Harshad and riddhimas love
Or is it
Prem and riddhimas love
Or is it
Prems face resembler and riddhimas love

That's it she had enough of it she cant go through this torture anymore heer faced back to look for preet and saw tht in the farthest corner preet was talking to some people

Heer moved forward to say hm that she needed to leave but was stopped on her way when suddenly harshad blocked her way

Harshad: don't u think someone said to me she wont come here

Heers throat was dried and even she doubted that her voice will come as a whisper if she tries to speak , she was numb

She cleared her throat
Heer: well please m not in a mood to fight
Harshad: well who wants to fight and u and ur mood swings I doubt a preagnant lady would not even hav these kinda mood swings
Heer: will u stp ur nonsense
Harshad: really u know u r not the first person to say that I talk no sense
Heer: that shows and still u r not ready to change

Harshad was about to say something when he was cut off at middle when riddhima took his name loudly
He saw I n her direction and there she was standing at the middle of the crowd

Riddhima: well harshad will u please come here

Harshad gave a quick glance towards heer and hurried to take his place beside riddhima
And heer watched them

Riddhima: guys so here he is mr.perfect back after so long but he is still running away from me and u know to whom he is running and then she pointed her finger to heers direction

And everyone looked towards heer awkwardly , even harshad didn't know whats going on
Preet even saw towards heer
And there heer was standing dumbstruck feeling awkward with so many gazes towards her

Riddhima: oh chillax I meant to say heer is my new friend and harshad new business partner yaar heer isse kaho business ke satah zara yahan bhi dhyan de din bhar office ke chakkar plz mere baare mein koi socho to

Harshad looked towards riddhima and let out a small chuckle

Harshad : ho gaya tumhara

Saying this he started moving and everyone started back to their previous converstaion
But riddhima didn't let go of his wrist
She holded his wrist and harshad looked back



{Riddhima - }Ram ram tera naam pukare
Ek huye din raiyen hamare
Humse hum hi chin gaye hai
Jabse dekhe nain tumhare


Ridhhima holded of his wrist andd started singing and evryone again cheered and many joined to the dance floor
Harshad first looke dat her and smiled oddly then riddhima jerked him back making her hands a way around his neck

But harshad took her hands back down and started leaving

Riddhima : how unromantic tum kabhi nahi sudhroge
And riddhima said this purposely to provoke him
And there it goes harshad looked back and came near riddhima


{harshad }Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tez dauru sapno se aage
Ab jaan lut jaaye
Ye jahan chut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe main rahu na rahu
Sajda tera sajda din rayen karu nahi chain karu
Sajda tera sajda harbaar karu mari jaan karu


He holded her from her waist and made her come closer and then went ahead and kissed her both the eyes
And then took a circle around her and riddhima blushed like a mad woman , he then took both of her hands in his hand and made her spin so that her back hitted his chest and he can get a place to keep his chin on her shoulder


{Heer }Ab jaan lut jaaye ye jahaan chut jaye sang pyaar rahe main rahu na rahu


heer was watching all this from so long and her eyes were now ful of tears , she cant see anymore , she didn't know why she was feeling jealous , he is not the man she loved , her love wasn't limited to his body , she loved his soul , his heart and he is not the same but still its enough for her
it felt like her heart is been teared to several pieces she felt like the lips which were meant to only brush through her body is now appealing someone else
those hands which ran through her parts of the body are now carresing someone else and she could not tolerate her
she felt like yelling on her lungs but that wont help she even don't have that right
heer tried to leave , she pushed through the crowd to make her way



{Harshad }Raanjhra nainon ke teer chal gaye saajna saanson se dil sil gaye
Palko mein chupa lu oh tera sajda karu
Seene mein sama lu oh din rain karu
Palko mein chupa lu seene mein sama lun tere ang ang and mera bole


Heer tried to leave when she again came face to face to him he was just standing infront of her looking at her and heer froze
Harshad saw her leaving , well he doesn't have that right to stop her but he wanted to know whats killing inside her because he can surely tell its not her normal behaviour he wasn't so eager to know anyone all his life that eyes has something a deep secret which he wants to know
He was deep lost in her gaze when riddhima suddenly hugged him from behind and his concentration got diverted
He tought "stupid mind what the hell I was thinking"
And he got all his attention focused back to riddhima


{riddhima}Ab jaan lut jaye ye jahan chut jaye sang pyaar rahe main rahu na rahu
ridhhima opened her palm and asked for a dance and harshad and she moved towards the dance floor and on her way she shouted
riddhima: everyone join there , heer preet plz come on
and there she was heer again got struck , she madly wanted to be alone but destiny is not even letting her get the peace of mind
heer was trembling at the middle of the crowd she never found herself so cold in all her life
when suddenly a hand on her shoulder made her flinch
preet : heer what happened
heer: just take me out
preet : no we cant go now plz heer itni der rahi ho kuch der aur plz
heer was helpless
preet : lets get out of the crowd to the dance floor see riddhima is calling us and why r u so damn cared according to u he is not prem na
heer looked at preet then at ridhdima she was laughing and then she made a indication for both of them to join there , she didn't wanted to ruin the mood but what about herself she l go insane
and preet looked at all the emotions playing on heer face he was sad to torture her this way but this is the only way only jealousy can make her strong and demand her what belongs to her , he wanted her badly to confront him , he wanted her to make eager to know is he prem or not because if he is prem only she can bring her back
preet took her hand in his and headed towards the dance floor

{heer}Beliya kya hua jo dil kho gaya mahiya ishq mein khuda mil gaya


heer put one of her hand to preets hsoulder and then started moving slowly to the beats and then she got all her courage to atleast look at him once and to her amusement he was already staring at her , heer fastly removed her gaze

{harshad}Jara ankh se pila de zara khwaab saja de
Mere hoton pe mal tera bole


Harshad spun riddhima and preet did the same to heer at a very fast move and the partners criss crossed each other but inspite of moving to the person that heer has thought will be her next partner she get strongly pulled by a hand on her waist and she landed on someones arm
Heer looked upto see and there she saw the same brown eyes again with a glint of mischief
Harshad: well this is fate u all run away from me and I always run after u hmm u know what u r like some antique museum piece very very interesting to observe
Heer saw to the other side and saw riddhima with preet dancing and giving smiles to them
Heer: u r so double faced I am disgusted
Harshad: lolz did I flirted with u a dance ofcourse didn't matters andd well well u steal glances at me and u r calling me double faced

{heer}Ab jaan lut jaye ye jahan chut jaye sang pyaar rahe main rahu na rahu

heer gave him a push and got the hell out of his grip and was about to go when riddhima came back there
riddhima: ulala the business partners suit each other and this idiot never leaves to flirt right heer
heer didn't aid anything
harshad: oh come on u know suabh ka bhula akhir kar shaam ko tumhare paas hi aata hai
and saying this he pulled riddhima from her waist and gave her a small peck on her lip , it was justa brushing of lip
but it set heers heart to fire

Sajda tera sajda karu main tera sajda
Din rayen karu nahi chain karu
Sajda tera sajda harbaar karu mari jaan karu


Heer stormed out from there and harshad looked towards her back
He excused himself and came out with her

Heer was moving towards her car speedily , even it was raining outside and she was drenched but she didn't stopped to gave a look back or search for preet , she just needed to get out of here
But she was stopped by a strong hand grabbing her wrist

Ok
That's all
Love aishwarya gayen

I know u guys are up with juttas and chappals and u can shower them on me because I made prem kiss riddhima s I invite u all '
And I know it's a cliff hanger because next part will be the one u all were waiting for so long



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Posted: 15 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE AISHU..........POOR HEER IS SUFFERING SOOO MUCH.........OMG HARSHAD KISSED RIDDIMA 😡 ........
U HAD TO STOP IT HERE ITSELF????NYWAYS PLS DO CONT ASAP..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

aree aishu .............😡

ye kya kiya..😕
prem aur ridhimma = kiss.................😡
no way................
tu chapal , jhutiii aur belen khaaa..........😆
aur next update mein kuch acha likh................
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was heart wrenching....why are u hell bound on making heer cry always....poor soul...has never had happy time in her life ever since she loved prem...why are torturing her so much...this Harshad is such a jerk...
i want heer to be strong and face him with all the courage when she finds out that he is prem....and Prem kissed ridhimma, eeeeeeewwwww yuckkk.....i want this prem to suffer, thadappaoo him for heer's love....wonderful update btw, preet's such a sweetheart
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
plz continue soon
458742 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
prem kissed ridz
i tell u
i jst wanna kill u fr this
par jo bhi ho
update mast hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesme update........i luvd how heer was jealous.....bt harshad or prem kissd ridhimb.....nooo.......premeer scenes wer good......bt plz plz plz update soon.......waitinggg eagarly 4 next
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Posted: 15 years ago
feel really bad for heer, she is undergoing a torture.
plz make prem go crazy on her.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi aishwarya i'm new here so just read ur whole ff its just fantastic . luved it . ur storyline is just gr88. 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantabulous update Aishuu👏👏...Poor Heer has to go through so much😕 and urghhh Why did he kiss Ridhima??😡😡Is he in his damn senses??😡 He needs to get a peice of mind!!😡😡

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