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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: sinak
Awesome. Poor Heer. So Chahat has bumped into Harshad. Update soon

yes thats chah who bumped tohim kaash main hotiilolzzz
thanks for the comment

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
awesome update loved it do continue soon thanx 4 the pm

thanks forliking dear and i lcont soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: newt2007
emotional part

luvd it

waiting for their next meet.

i l updt soon but next updt wont be a mett that l b a cute one but then we l head to the story

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: premeeristry
mwaahst update aishuthanksssss yarr saba
aww that bumped girl is chah itnaiyessss
cute point pey lakar chod diyaa yeahh next will be a cute segment😡 well examshaaa pagl ho gayi hun main
hotai hai to aisa hi hota hai i know but i enjoyed reading it.thank uuu
my poorl heerl u again pushed her in dielama qair preet did a
nice job by handling her.so update next chapter soonahhhshhah heer ne mere prem ko pakda to main usse kaise choor duun
i l updt soon

love
saba

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: --pie--
great update!!!
continue soon!!😃

i l cont soon dear thanks for liking

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: sonia7
hey great part i feel sorry for her
please update soon
thanks for the pm

i l cont soon thanks

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal
Awesome. Poor Heer. So Chahat has bumped into Harshad. Update soon

yes chah bumpef into hi,m and ya i l upt soon

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#619

Authors note : hey guys here it goes u guys expected many a things like hheer will stop their fight or chah is gona ask her father why he left and all but its not like that

Ok this will be my last updates till 11 tth march I hop ei l try but don't keep hopes and if I l update then I l update antaheen only as I need to buck with that ff
So I hope its fine with u all

PART – 29

He was coming outside playing with his mobile and then he got bumped into someone and then he got balanced and looked
There was a small girl standing before him fuming in anger
Prem was disbalanced on hitting her but when he was stable he saw upwards and no one was there and then he felt someone was pulling his trouser from downward and he looked down

There she was styanding a 2 or might be 3 feet girl well he doesn't knows has he never had an encounter with a kid
Her eyes were brown and cozy and she was holding a dress in her right hand and she was staring at him with her another hand on her hips
She was standing like she is going to burst into crying any moment

Harshad : sorry I didn't watched and walked

Chahat started sobbing with tears in her eyes

Harshad is tensed now he doesn't knows what to do he knelt down before her and holded her and brought her closer and tried to calm her

Harshad : what happened ? baby plz don't cry see mere ko heart attack aa jayega agar aapki mumma aake daategi mujhe too

Chah yelled harder this time

Harshad : oh sorry sorry joke pasand nahi aaya ok plz don't cry

Chah : meli buttelflyyyy

Harshad : buttelfly ?? oh oh I got it butterfly right so maine kya kiya

Chah meli buttelfly aapki wajah se udd gayi

Harshad : ok ok so why ru crying comeon chill

Chah : mujhe buttelfly do abhiiiiii

Harshad : kya ziddi ladki hai aaj sab panautiyan mil rahi hai ek who heer mann aur ab ek nayi musibat ab yahi bacha hai harshad chopra butterfly catcher yaar maine jindagi mein titli nahi pakri ab kaise pakru

Chah : aajjj ssab kuch khalab hai pehle meli dless gayi abb meli buttelflyyy uuuuuuu get me nowwwwwww

Harshad saw in each directon and he can see few a butterflies so he launched himself towards them
He moved but cant get even one in his hand first time he fell on grass and got a few straws in his hair
Then he got few flower petals over his shirt
And then he was in mud ruining his dress

Chah was watching all this and lastly she got fed up and went beside harshad

Chah : aap kisi kaam ke nahhhhi ho rehne dooo mere paas poora din nahi hai aapke saath buttelfly butelfly khelne ke liye

Harshad saw her in astonishment like he thought that which kinda kid is thia I mean a girl ruling him and ordering and now even not appreciating his efforts

Harshad said to himself : ha ha iske paas bhi ab time nahihai aur mian hun bekar admi jo din bhar ek bacche ke saath titliyan pakar raha hai what is wrong with me ??

Chah : now u get uppp nahi to aur flowers clush hoo jayengeeee

Harshad : yeah yeah

Chah was noticing him from so long he really looked so similar to him to the person she always wanted to meet

Chah moved ahead and sat on lap of harshad on ground and with her small palm touched his cheek

Harshad was irritated but this action of her made him replied in an automatic way he also touched her cheek

Chah : papa

Harshad : oh oh yeah ur papa must be waiting for u can u search him or should I search him for u

Chah didn't responded she was looking into his eyes

He took chah in his arms and got up and he was going to settle her down when someone called from behind

Preet: chah

Harshad turned to look and he saw preet sharma there

Chah was not ready to leave him but still as preet called her she got down and ran towards preet giving a small kiss on harshad cheek
In return harshad waved his hand to her

Preet was shocked to see chah with him but later he got explained
Chah ran to him and told whole story
They were walking down the corridoor to reach heers cabin when chah asked something to preet
Chah : preet uncle who papa the na

Preet was shocked as chah never use to ask about her dad

Preet : nai beta

Chah : he looked the same

Preet : apne unse kuch kaha

Chah : nai I know ki mumma will bee hultt so I dddint told anya thing plomise

Preet : don't tell mumma about this she is already tensed okk

Chah : uncle aap ghar jake subh bhaiyu ko scold karna meli dless kharab kar di bhaiyu ne

Preet : yeah jo hukum princess

PREET AND CHAH ENTERED HEERS CABIN

Chah went ahead and hugged heer but heer was quite she didn't even responded and then chah started her blabbering all about dress and all and heer just stared at her

Chah : mommy preet uncle bhaiyu ko scold karenge maine unse kaha

Chah noticed her mom not responding she shooked her

Heer: ha bolo
Chah : itni der se bol hi to rai hun
Heer: chah aap aaj preet uncle ke ghar jaoge will u stay the night over there
Chah : mommy today the whole dayy I wass away
Heer: plz sweety
Chah : okkie

Heer called preet to her cabin and asked him to take chah , preet knows that she needed her time so he left her alone

Preet : I am leaving u and taking her but don't do anything stupid it will be worth of nothing
Heer: I wont

Preet took chah and heer came outside for moving to her home she wanted to be alone, to cry ,to think, to equalize ,to know what is happening ?

She drove her car back to her home
Her mind was blank and when tomorrow he will come how she will gather herself
She knows somethings wrong can he be her prem
But how can it be possible ?

Doorieeee doorieee doorieeeee
Sahi jaye na sahi jaye na
Sahi jaye na sahi jaye na

She drove her car in darkness with tears in her eyes , she fought back the lump in her throat and concentrated hard on driving as only his face was flashing infront of her

Khamoshiyan ye seehe na saku
Awaaz deke mujhe tu de jaa sokkoon
Khamoshiyan ye seehe na saku
Awaaz deke mujhe tu de ja sookoon

It was dark and cold and silent outside
She stopped the car in the darkness and got out of it as she cant drive now she need to get herself in control
In this situation she wanted him to be there standing near her to support her to say those three words again [I love u ] so that she can find her will back

Hey hye heyee
Doorieee doorieee
Sahi jaye na sahi jaye na sahi jaye na sahi jaye na

Heer felt cold and it was dark so heer ssat back in her car again and drove
Now the only thing she wanted is to reach home that's it
If she can she would have let the feet took her where they can but she cant even do that she is so miserable she hs a daughter to think about

Addhora hun main ab tere bina
Adhhori meri zindagni reh jayegi
Addhora hun main ab tere bina
Adhhori meri zindagni reh jayegi

She clutched her locket with all force to never let it go
She wanted him to come to touch her once for a lifetime so that she can feel him , she can knmow he cares for him
She can feel complete

She wanted him to come and tell everyone that she is his wife , she only belongs to him
She was frustrated of her life to be a single mother
He married her but she cant tall anybody there is no legal proof
But how can she deny her soul which belongs to him

Yeyeyyeyeyyeyyeye heyyeye
Doorie doorieee
Sahi jaye na aaa sahi jaye na aaa sahi jaye naaaa sahi jaye na

Heer fought back all her tears to see the road

Har raah mein tu aaye nazar
Katt ta nahi ab akele tanha safar
Har raah mein tu aaye nazar
Katt ta nahi ab akele tanha safar

As she was moving she felt images of her hallucination
She can see him standing on the road like he is waving to her with an angelic smile and the next moment as she blinked he wasn't there
She can see him sitting on his knees with a ring
She can see him everywhere
But they were just images which are disaapearing

Doorie doorie
Sahi jaye na sahi jaye na sahi jaye na sahi jaye na

As she went inside her house she ran to her bedroom and took out prems photo frame she held it in her hand and then sat on the ground

Heer : mujhe pata hai who tum hi the I felt u lekin kyun kyun tum chup rahe why u behaved like u ont know me ? I know its insane I mean I don't know what to do ? mind doesn't let me believe this but my heart knows u

I know what I have to do ? I l find out u prem juneja or harshad chopra whoever u are ? I know u r prem but I want to know why u r behaving so absurd ? I cant let go of u I l seek the truth

I didn't said anything to preet as I don't want him to thin m mentally overstressed but I lfind out
I know u prem and I l get the truth
U will be mine I promise

But her inner soul has a question what if he is harshad chopra then what will she be able to accept the truth to be away from him ?????//////////

Love aishwarya gayen

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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#620

WOW wonderful

Harshad Chahat is so cute.

Heer's feelings are expressed so nicely.

why you didn't express feelings of Harshad after Chahat calling him Papa?

waiting.. update soon

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago

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