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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23
nice part
waiting to knw wat happens next
thanks for pm

thnaks sanju i l continue soon

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
poor heer........didn't know u would actually make them meet sooo soon.....do continue soon.......thanks for the pm.....

haahah yeah i made them meet fast nor my frnds would have killed me

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: newt2007
wow prem back

feels pain for Heer nice

continue soon

ohh thanks selvy i l cont soon

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: sinak
Awesome. Finally they came face to face. Update soon

yeah m updating

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: premeeristry
Awesome update aishu {Superb update aishuthank u meeshti =am saba dear }yeah yeah i know u r saba u know mistake woh bhootni mujhe itna satati hai ki har jagah wahi dikhti hai
ismey awsome waali baath yeh hai k someone shud learn from chahat how to make perents dance on our fingers 😆 emotional blackmail.hahaha she is liike me
well if rhidima is not dieing then.......🤔 to phir i hav to go n read once again ur ff
well yeah u shd go and read again mne ff as ridzi is not going to die for sureeee
k wad will b ur next step 😆.....pata tha i heard that this rhidima is u??hmmm dekhna main kitna pyaar karti hun uss chehere se
ab to heer ko harshad kabhi nahi milegahahha mere hote huye to nahi 😆.on the whole i enjoyed but as its my fav ff mujhey short update laga so next time long update.yeah it was short next will be also short as m too busy with exams yaar

love
saba

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#596

AUTHORS NOTE : SORRY FOR THE DELAY BUT HERE U GO I HOPE THAT THIS UPDATE WILL BE LIKED WITH U

PART – 28

She watched him for a moment and the world seemed to have been back for her her life is back to her her love is back , she tremebled on her feet and then lump in her throat stopped her from saying but she moved ahead to touch him to see he is real
But she was stopped by riddhimas words her world shattered again
Riddhima : this is harshad my fiancee
And he wrapped a hand around her waist and moved his another hand infront of her for a handshake
Harshad : hello ms.mann
She was shocked to hear those words [he is harshad ]
Harshad was having a bit strange feeling towards her she was standing like a statue and watching him whats wrong with her and her gaze was making him feel uncomfortable
It wa s a voice from behind that broke heers gaze
Preet: heer
Preet was even shocked to see him but he was not prem he heard everybit conversation of riddhima and he was horrified to see heer standing like that
He knows heer after a long time has managed her life and now this storm can tear her up
Heer didn't said a word and ran out of the board room
Preet : riddhima u take care of pr …. Harshad I l just come
Preet saw her running out he also went after her
Harshad : ohh what happened they acted like they saw a ghost
Riddhima : I hae never seen heer behaving so strange okk lets wait for her to be back
Harshad was watching towards the way she left it was strange for him like someone he loved was in pain , he was even having a weird strange feeling after seeing ms.mann and her hideous personality and the way she left made him more eager to see her

Heer run back to her cabin like mads her legs were like not attached to her body she could not feel them , she cannot see whats ahead as her vision was blinded by her own tears , she cant hear anything as she can only hear those words like they are just rewinded and played to her

prem : main hamesha tumhare saath rahunga aankh khologi to mujhe hi paogi aur band karogi bhi to main hi milunga
saansoein ki dorr ki tarah tumhare saath rahunga main maut bhi alag nahi kar sakti hum dono ko
ye haath aur saath kabhi nahi chootega
riddhima : he is harhsad my fiancee

everything to her was like insane nothing is making sense
she cant scream her agony out as her voice was jammed with the lump in her throat
her heart was beating faster and was like a stone was pushed on her chest she tried to get a grab hold of herself but now she can hear something else she can hear her own sobs
her life was not what she wanted but still her life was there but this sudden storm is going to get everything she managed to gather , she tried to think that this is just a hallucination might be she has gone crazy or she must be dreaming but it is not so she is not dreaming it was like turning of her biggest nightmares into reality ,no no this was never her nightmare she never dreamt of this ,she never thought about something like this
she wanted him to be back but he is not back ,this is some1 else or might be he is back
there were endless questions in her mind but she felt like before all this she will die as it was like she will burst out any moment, her pain ,her anger, her love
she doesn't knows how to behave or react , she wanted to scream ,to let the one sitting above know tht this is not done ,this is so unfare

she was sitting on the floor in her cabin as after entereing her cabin her legs didn't supported her rything was like blank to her she doesn't knows what to do should she go back and ask him , face him ???
and then she found someone keeping a hand on her shoulder
as a response she jerked and then she broke off into his arms and then she realized that she was screaming her agony , her tears were continiously flowing , she was like in hysteria and preet was holding her supporting her trying to calm her

preet: sshh chup ekdam chup kuch nahi hua chupp
heer tried to say between her sobs : prem prem
preet : maine dekha lekin pata nahi main kya kahu this is not possible
heer: who ridhima ka fiance …
preet : pehle chup ho jao calm down plz heer plz
heer: hamesha mere hi saath aisa kyun hota hai
preet : dekho heer plz relax we will talk and find out everything later but now they are waiting in the conference room we have to go there nor they will doubt something fishy
heer: no I cant face him plz plz don't ask me to do this plz
preet : listen heer u have to be acquainted with ur new business partner for prems sake for his business empire plz

Preet supported heer to get up and he insisted her to come with him

Preet and heer went through the corridoor and preet was still holding her by her shoulder

IN THE CONFERENCE ROOM

Ridhima : should I go and see what happened why did heer ran away like that its weird

Harshad : may be she Is jealous that u got a so handsome boyfriend

Riddhima : just shut up

Harshad : but on a serious not its realyy unproffesional mom said so much about her and she just ran away like thse things are insane

Riddhima : I surely think that there is some problem or something there must be a reason

Harshad opened his mouth to say something but gulped back as he saw her coming with preet sharma , he can smell something was fishy , her eyes resembled that they were all red and even her nose was red

Preet opened the door of the conference room but he cant make heer move this time like she was rooted to the ground she let out a sigh and was staring
And preet know that this is only going to give her more pain he wanted him to be prem but what if not he is everything makes him to come to just a conclusion he is harsad chopra the new business partner of heer mann he is not the soulmate whom heer loved

Suddenly heera gaze was shifted when preets cell got ringing

Preet : hello
Kashsih : hey preet chah is really crying
Preet : what happened ?
Kashish : she wore the new dress and it got ruined as subh and she was playing and now she is asking for heer
Preet : no not now swhe is busy
Kashish : plz I cant handle her she l be sick if she cries this way and both the kids are fighting too well I cant leave subh right now and I cant see chah getting sick so m sending her to the office with subhs babysitter okk
Preet : ok

Preet cut off the phone and pulled heer inside with him

Harshad : anything serious we thought somethng serious happened

Preet : noo just got reminded about some work

Heer was standing their spell bounded to the beauty of his face she can say surely he is prem as she knows his scent his smell his way of looking , his voice
Preet pulled her like a robot to the chair and then she sat down

Riddhima was looking at heer with concerned eyes she knows that something is wrong the way she knows heer made her imagine many a things might be she doesn't knows anything about her but still she knows a lot about her attitude and personality and she is not the person today like she is lost

Heer didn't said anything in the conversation and harshad also watched her like a statue sitting , he found her interesting as her lostness was fascinating to him

Even preet was in utter shock but he was more tensed about heer what if she cnat control herself ??

The formalities and presentation was over and harshad and riddhima stood up to leave

Harshad whispered to riddhima : is she dumb ??
Riddhima : shut upp

Riddhima: heer I think u r not well I l like to talk to u later
Heer just nodded in agreement she was trying hard to fight her tears

Harshad : well I hope we l meet soon with a difference in ur mood and that day we l talk to Each other about our future I mean future projects

He took out one of his hand again to shake and this time heer responded she too took out her hand and touched him , the same warmth feeling was again in her head

Heer: I will meet u soon { she said in a light voice and harshad understood that words has something more than formality }

Then both of them left

On the way to harshads car
Harshad : wooh fascinating u saw how she was staring at me
Riddhima : no I didn't
Harshad: really well she was looking at me like m a ghost who came out of a graveyard
Riddhima : u really r the same

Back to the conference room

Preet : lets go plz don't torture urself just sove it off ur head he cnat be prem

Heer: leave me for 5 minutes go sit at ur cabin I l be there

Preet nodded and gave heer her time to back to normal and he left

Heer was sitting alone in the room with everything in her head she was so confused so miserable
She even didn't realized that someone knocked and when she didn't responded that person entered the room

And then heer felt a warm breath across her cheek and then she glanced sideways and he was there his body tilting towards the table and his hand was holding the back of her chair and their faces were so close

Her eyes were wide open she wanted him to say to say he is prem and a part of her mind said that might be he is back but nooooooooooooo

He bented towards the table and picked up something
Heer was still staring at him

Harshad : I forgot my cell , well well I knocked but …. So I came up to take it
Harshad waited for her to say something but she didn't

Harshad said to himself : well I thnk today she is not interested to talk so dude chill
And then he looked at staring heer : ok so bbye we l meet soon

And then he left

He was coming outside playing with his mobile and then he got bumped into someone and then he got balanced and looked
There was a small girl standing before him fuming in anger

That's all

Thanks I know it was not upto the mark nor even big but I tried actually m too busy in exams so spare me plzzz

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#597

hiii aishu

awesome update ........................

tu apne dil ki wishes harshad k through poori kyu kar rahi hai

i know u dunt like heer

but that doesnt mean ki tu uska mazak harshad ser ura wayeee😆

but i love harshad's attitude.................

its really cool...............

oh , now he bumped into chahat .......................

i think chahat will fight wid harshad

and den heer will cum and stop them pls update soon

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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#598

Awesome. Poor Heer. So Chahat has bumped into Harshad. Update soon

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saba khan

@premeeristry

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#599

mwaahst update aishu
aww that bumped girl is chah itnai
cute point pey lakar chod diyaa 😡 well exams
hotai hai to aisa hi hota hai i know but i enjoyed reading it.
my poorl heerl u again pushed her in dielama qair preet did a
nice job by handling her.so update next chapter soon

love
saba

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Mehak

@--Mehak--

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#600

great update!!!

continue soon!!😃

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