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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: heer193

pls heer ko mat marna

waise u wnt do ths
isnt it
pls update soon

arre tu dekhti jaa aage agae hota hai kya and i l updt soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note : guys I know after my last update many of u have given the dhamki that they will stop reading my ff so hers the next part and I know after this u guys will really stop reading my ff but I cant help it bcz my story line goes this way but I rpomise after one or two updates there will be comedy and romance to its top so keep reading ………


PART 20

Heer: matlab prem jo keh raha tha sab sach tha and I didn't believed him

Rishabh : yes u r so fool ! my god tumne kitani aasani se meri baat pe bharosa kar liya
Ok come on bahot baat kar liya humne


HE JUST TOOK OUT A CYRINGE CONTAINING SOME KINDA SEDATIVE

Heer tried to make her free ,she shouted loud but noone was there to listen to her ,he pressed the seductive to her arm

Rishabh : don't worry heer this is not going to kill u its just to keep u calm aur waise bhi tumhe itni asaani se nahi marne dunga main

ALL THAT HEER COULD MURMUR IN HER SLEEPY STATE WAS THAT RPEM I AM SORRY


POLICE STATION

Inspector: mr.juneja hume unki car ka pata chal gaya wo oh hill side ke samne ek farm house mein dekha gaya hai so lets proceed

Prem : chaliye inspector sahab



HERE IN THE FARM HOUSE

RISHABH was sitting in his drawing room with a glass of french wine and a gun in his hand when he hears the police siren outside the house

He peeks out through the window and the scene he saw was fearful to him he saw that police forces were coming out of their jeeps and even prem and preet and arjun was there

Rishabh : oh my god they founded me ab kya hoga
No I cant let me get arrested like this I have to get damn out of here anyhow . this bloody prem juneja isse to abhi apni flight mein hona chahiye tha ye yaha kya kar raha hai ??? my god I cant let my plan fail this way I have to do something he cant caught hold of me I have to do something ????

He saw heer who was sitting on the chair in half unconsciousness state

He went to her and splitted a whole glass of water on her face

Rishabh : come on get up I didn't bought u to sleep here It fells like ki main tumhe abhi marr dun lekin tumher marr diya to main yhan se niklunga kaise gosh ! its all happening due to u small disusting creature
I wont let u win this time u have to die u have to come on get up
He pinned her solder and poked her soft skin harshly


Heer was still in a state of unconsciousness so she was too weak to move so rishabh just hold her arm and pulled her to the back door but as soon as he opened the door there he was prem juneja waiting for him

Rishabh : prem

Prem : so there u r u bloody rascal how dare u touch her ???

Rishabh : don't move I have the gun I l kill her ???u cnat do anything if u want ur love to be alive just stay away

Prem : ha u want a revenge right have a man to man fight why to include her agar usse ek kharoch bhi aayi iske baad to u don't know tumhara main kya karunga, u l have to beg for death and I promise u that

Rishabh pulled heer to his side more clumsily and with holding the gun he started moving towards his car . he took all his steps consciously and kept heer to his gun point

Inspector : mr .juneja uske haath mein gun hai aap plz peeche aajaiye

Prem : ye kuch nahi kar sakta, bloody just let her go

Heer was so Unconscious that only she could feel was a man pinning her hard to her arms and some one was standing infront of her and with much effort she finally could understand that it was prem

Heer with many efforts spoke up finally

Heer: rishabh ! let me go , prem plz tell him to let me go


Prem : don't worry heer tumhe kuch nahi hoga ,come on u moron let her go

Rishabh : u wanna see now what I l do to her if u don't stop giving ur expert opinions

Rishabh brought heer to his car and hit her forehead hard on the bonnet of the car which started bleeding and she cried with pain and that was which made prems rage flame more

Prem ; rishabh
He was moving ahead with aggression

Preet: prem plz stop he is mad he can do anything
Preet went ahead and caught hold of prem

Rishabh : good preet so u understood well next time if u speak mr .juneja then I wont use the bonnet this time I l just make her fall from the height u can see ts so dense down the cliff , u would never ever even find her dead body


Inspector : listen mr . rampal aap yaha se bachke nahi jaa sakte so ye band kijiye aur apne aap ko kanoon ke hawale kar dijiye

Rishabh was going to sit in the car when heer just forced her hand to move away the gun and his gun fell down and that's the ultimate moment, prem came ahead and caught hold of rishabh and gave him a loud punch on his face
He clutched rishabhs collar and hitted him hard on his stomach
Prem : u bloody u hurted heer now u gonna beg for ur senses

He hitted him hard on the bonnet as he did to heer

Prem : now can u feel the pain ha

Preet : prem leave him let the police do his work

Prem ; isse to mainnahi chorunga he have to pay

Preet: heer ki halat dekho lets take her to home


Arjun : inspector sahab u take rishabh plz isse pehle ki baat bigad jaaye take him

Prem : throwed rishabh on the ground and there he got a chance to escape, his gun was lying just beside him and the least he could do was to pick it up and shoot and he did that

He tuned onto his foot got up and the three shots were for the policemen who were coming near to him and the fourth one for heer which hitted her right down the collarbone

There was a silence for a moment after the shot

And the next shot was for rishabh by inspector to his stomach and there he goes he backed off a little and was right down the cliff


Prem ran to heer holding her to his arms even preet and arjun ranned

She felt right to his arms with blood all over her arms


Prem : heer heer

HeeR: m sorry m sorry prem

Prem : no I am I am sorry ye sab meri wajah se hua na main tumhe who lettre likht aaur nahi tum airport ke liye aati aur nahi ye sab hota


HeeR: shh kuch nahi hua tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua , its all the fruit of what I did to you ye kismat bhi ajeeb hai when I wanted to stay away with u it brought me near u and now I want to be urs and I have to go its taking me away

Prem : someone call the ambulance shh kuch nahi hoga tum kahin nahi jaogi we l be together just don't close ur eyes preet aur arjun ambulance ko call kar rahe hai it will be here any moment just just stay calm

Heer: prem I love u , I love u in hearts mujhe chhod ke kabhi mat jana prem I love u miane jo bhi kiya who gusse mein kiya I cant see the truth m sorry I love u I don't want to leve u I have to say many a things

Prem : get up heer I love u too get up

And with that heer closed her eyes lying silently in his arms with her breathe decreasing and hearbet skipping a beat

Prem : heer get up damn it, tum mujhe chhod ke nahi jaa sakti get up

It was like she is leaving but prem didn't lost his hope
She was growing colder so he used hi palms to rub against her palms and he was shouting to call for the ambulance

Preet : pick her up prem ambulance is here

Arjun : prem be fast comeon tum ambulance mein jao main car mein police ke sath formalities complete karke aata hun it's a criminal act hume waha police ki jarrorat paregi u guys be fast leave

Prem picked her up in his arms with her head resting on his shoulder


IN HOSPITAL

Prem was moving along with the stretcher holding her hand

Their hands got seperated when she was taken inside the intensive care unit

They were waiting restlessly outside the O.T

An then the doctor came

Prem : doctor howz she ? can we meet her ? she is ok na ?

Doctor: relax mr.juneja have a sigh

Preet : doctor who thik to ho jayegi na

Doctor : humne bullet nikal di hai , par she had bleed a lot as well has the anaesthesia given to her previousl has caused us a lot of problem

Prem : problem ??


Doctor: we have kept her under observation but we doubt she has slipped to coma aur main aapko false hope nahi dena chahta our experts think she cant survive through the night , she is still slive due to her life supporting system
Its only 10 % chance but still miracles happen lets see if she gets back her senses through the night………

Hearing this prem got broken

Prem : she cant survive through the night preet what is he saying she she ,………………..






That's all

Love aishwarya gayen




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Posted: 15 years ago

hiii aishu

nice update
thank god
woh rampal toh gaya
chal ab jaldi se heer ko acha karr aishu
plss ab unhe milwa de
warna ...............
main villian ban jaungi
hehehee
pls update soon
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
this is just not right..................anyways its ok since from ur words i can see that u r not going to let heer die................so do continue soon..............thanks for the pm.........what about the other ff? when r u going to update that?
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Posted: 15 years ago
this is just not right..................anyways its ok since from ur words i can see that u r not going to let heer die................so do continue soon..............thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome
u better asap otherwise i m coming after u!!
continue asap
hope heer is okay!!
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
nahiiiiiiiiiii heer can't die..................
awesomeee update........
can't wait 4 da next part............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very tragic update aishwarya but loved it
yes aur maro prem uss rampal k bachey ko 😆
Arey yaar tujhey ja ja kay heer ko coma mein bhejna tha
bichari heer aishwarya kai gusse mein ussey coma mein bhi jana
pardh raha hai.sahi yaar frends ho toh arjun aur preet kai jaisai
jo waqt pey kaam aaei.i really appreciate the way u potrayed them.
aur tragic math bada jaldi sey next part update kar.

love
saba
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

this is just not right..................anyways its ok since from ur words i can see that u r not going to let heer die................so do continue soon..............thanks for the pm.........what about the other ff? when r u going to update that?

well ya jst wait and watch its going to be fun yaar and i have my exams so i l take a bit of time and i have updated the other ff
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

this is just not right..................anyways its ok since from ur words i can see that u r not going to let heer die................so do continue soon..............thanks for the pm

thanks dear i l cont soon

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