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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed
Aishu...
errrrr.... pitey gi tu mujh se... dil chhahta hai tujhe kuch maroon... but today is your birthday iss liye jaa maaf kiya....
kaissa update dia tu ne????
yeh kyon kkiya??? do you love being VAMP???
waise part was very well written but tu kab milaye gi Premeer ko???
milwa de un dono ko plz yar....
awesome work done...

regards,
Suhana.

i know main pitungi amin harkatein hi aisa karti hun

iss baar chhod diya gale baar promo padhne ke baad pakka maregi tu mujhe main hun hi villain type kya karu prem ko kisi aur ke satah dekhkar mera khoon khaul jaata hai
hihihihihi

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

two minutes my net is having some problem so wait

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

Author's note : hello friends so m back with a update
Ok so now one or two more updates and there is a shock waiting for u all I, I promise the uniting of premeer but with a gr8 jhatka so keep waiting and reading

Here it goes the next part

PART 19

Preet : kahi heer kisi musibat mein to nahi who kyun kisise race karegi

AND PREM SAW PREET AND THERE THE SCREEN FADED
HERE HEER GOT IN SENSE IN A DARK ROOM SHE WAS LYING ON CINDERS AND WAS COLD SHE WAS STILL BLEEDING AND INFRONT OF HER EYES WAS STILL SO MUCH FOG ONLY SHE COULD SEE WAS A MAN STANDING INFRONT OF HER

HEER: PREM !

THE MAN : sweetheart! Prem to gaya uski flight thi remember ok I l help you

HE TOOK UP HEER BY HER ARM ,SQUEEZING HER ARM ,THEN HE BROUGHT A GLASS OF WATER AND SPLITED THE WATER ON HER FACE

HEER COUGHED A LITTLE BIT

Then whatever she saw brought back her memory after that sudden trauma

She saw the man she hated the more infront of her eyes

Heer: rishabh!

Then she remembered what had happened
She was driving fast to reach the airport suddenlt she got hitted by a car from her right side ,then another hit
Heer tried to be fast as she doubted something fishy was around

But atlast she got hitted so hard that her car bented and she directly crushed to a tree

Then all she could remember was her head got hitted hard and then she was carried by someone

Heer: { she shouted} why the hell u brought me here ??

Rishabh: well maine bahot socha ki apni destruction ko wapas kaise thik karu so then I got an idea
Hmm what if I kill u /??// I mean tum nahi rahogi to who l complete their project to phir tender mera aur preet to kuch kar payega nahi kyunki market mein tumhari maut ki khabar se tumhare company ke shares prices aise bhi decrease ho jayega , so I brought u here to kill u

Heer: u r mad ?? { heer looked around herself it looked like a old farm house }

Rishabh: yes I am and I can do everything

Heer: dekho tum agar mujhe maroge to tumhe rbhi police nahi choregi
See I I jst let me go main kisi se kuch nahi kahungi abhi mera prem ko rokna bahot jaroori hai nahi to who chala jayega so jst stop ur drama and let go

{ heer jst tried to free her hand but all her attempts failed rishabh caught holded of her hard and slapped her hard }

rishabh: ek baar mein baat samajh nahi aati kya

heer: plz rishabh I beg of u let me go

rishabh: lets have a short talk then I l think

{ rishabh again holded her from her arm and then he made her sit in a chair and he sat right infront of her }

HERE PREET AND PREM RETURNED BACK TO AROHIS HOUSE

Arohi: kya hua heer mili ??/

Kashish: preet kuch bolo na

Arjun: prem ! heer kaha hai

Prem: uska kahin kuch pata nahi hai hume sirf uski car dikhi { and prem started crying }

Preet : aur accident spot ke logo ki baatoein se lag raha hai ki heer koi pareshaani mein fassi hai

Prem: ye sab meri wajah se hua hai nahin main who letter likhta aur nahi who jaldi mein aati aur na ye sab heer shai kehti hai uski life ki sab problems ki wajah main hi hun

Preet: prem plz be strong …police usse dhhond rahi hai na

THEN ONLY PREETS CELL RANG

Preet : hello

Police inspector : hell is this mr. Preet ?/

Preet : ji inspector sahab heer ka kuch pata chala

Inspector : nahi , humne aapko wahi bolne ke liye call kiya ki humne saare hospitals mein check kiya ,even dossre police station mein bhi pata lagaya koi accident case nahi hai aur jinka aapne description diya tha waisa koi nahi mila

Preet : to phir heer kaha gayi ????

Inspector : relax preet ji hum koshish kar rahe hai par ye case sirf accident ka nahi lagta as ms.mann bahot jani mani business industrialist hai to hume darr kki ye koi aur hi mamla hai
Waise hum apni investigation jaari rakhenge lekin hum chahte hai ki aap sochke bataye ki aisi kisi se dushmani

Preet : ji inspector sahab maine aapko pehli hi acciden spot e logo ke baare mien bataya mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai main aapse kuch der mein milne aata hun

Inspector : ok tc

Preet : ji

HE CUTS THE PHONE

Arohi : kya hua ??

Preet : heer ka kahi pata nahi air police ko bhi wahi shaq hai jo hume hai they too thnk she is in trouble

Arohi : par aisa kaun hai jo heer ko nuksaan pahochayega

Prem : who ek hi insaan ho sakta hai

Preet looked at prem

Preet : chalo prem aaj who mere haatho nahi bachega

Kashish : kaha ja rahe ho tum log arjun inhe dekho kahin ye kuch gusse mein na kar aithe

Arjun : don't worry main bhi jaata hun

RAMPAL MANSION

Preet : rishabh ! rishabh !

Prem : where r u ? bloody bahar nikal

Servant : sahab to ghar par nahi hai

Preet ccame forward and clutched the servants collar

Preet : kaha hai tere sahab

Arjun : preet chhodo usse

Prem : jaldi bata kaha hai rishabh

Servant : wo oh wo oh sahab to jab se aaye the bahot pee rahe the aur kareeb 4 ya 5 ghante ho gaye sahab ko nikle huye who apni scoda ca le gaye hai iske alawa mujhe kuch nahi pata

Prem : preet chalo yahan kuch nahi hone wala hum police station chalte hai

POLICE STATION

Prem: inspector sahab

Inspector : aayiye mr.prem juneja

Prem: inspector sahab ye sab kiya dharaya rishabh rampal ka hai ussine heer ko kahi gayab kiya hai that bloody

Inspector : aap FIR likhwa dijiye hum abhi saare police stations aur naka bandiyo pe khabar kar dete hai jahan bhi who dikhenge unhe arrest kar liya jayega

Preet : inspector jo karna hia karo par heer milni chahiye u know who she is ??? aapko special force bhi lagana pare to lagao but we want her

Inspector : yes aap chinta na kare main abhi khaabar karta hun

FARM HOUSE

RISHABH : so heer ! tumhare aur prem ke beech mein sab solve ho gaya right

Heer: rishabh dekho tum ye sab karke koi fayda nahi

Rishabh : { he slapped her again } u r my guest so behave properly ok and answer only what I asked got it

Heer just nodded in agreement with tears in her eyes

Rishabh: ok so u patched up

Heer: I need to stop him plz let go

Rishabh : oh sweetheart ! don't cry come on u have only some hours of ur life left why to waste it in crying u need to know many things

Heer: what do u mean :

Rishabh : see bcz of me u stayed away from prem for 3 hours and now bcz of me u cant even meet him for a last time heer u r so stupid !
So believed me and because of that u hated prem
Come on darling how can you believe m e

Actually why m I telling u all this but actually I want u to have shame on urself I want to see u cry

U know tum meri wajah se itni successful bani I mean tum ne prem se revenge lene ke liye itna naam kamaya par all in vain

U know prem didn't lied to u he said all truth he love u hhahha prem juneja loved u par who bol nahi paaya bechara actually uski galti nahi hai mujhpe usne itna bharosa jo kiya

Heer: matlab prem jo keh raha tha sab sach tha and I didn't believed him

Rishabh : yes u r so fool ! my god tumne kitani aasani se meri baat pe bharosa kar liya
Ok come on bahot baat kar liya humne

HE JUST TOOK OUT A CYRINGE CONTAINING SOME KINDA SEDATIVE

Heer tried to make her free ,she shouted loud but noone was there to listen to her ,he pressed the seductive to her arm

Rishabh : don't worry heer this is not going to kill u its just to keep u calm aur waise bhi tumhe itni asaani se nahi marne dunga main

ALL THAT HEER COULD MURMUR IN HER SLEEPY STATE WAS THAT RPEM I AM SORRY

POLICE STATION

Inspector: mr.juneja hume unki car ka pata chal gaya wo oh hill side ke samne ek farm house mein dekha gaya hai so lets proceed

Prem : chaliye inspector sahab

………………..
that's all friends

wait until the next part

precap : prem : heer get up heer tum mujhe chhod ke nahi jaa sakti heer get up heer

I know after reading the promo u l like to kill me and I promise that after reading the next update u l surely kill me par main kya karu main prem ko kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti hahahaah

tc

love
aishwarya gayen

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

hey aishu

tu ne acha nahi kiya

yaar tu bahut badi villian hai

i m angry wid u

yaar its a very sad update

god is rishabh ko mara kyu nahiiii

prem pls heer ko bacha loo

aishu ab yeh sahi se kar diyoo

nahi toh kabhi b tera ff nahi parungii

plss unhe mila de na

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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additi10

@additi10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

Heyyyyyyy i knownothing had happened to heer rite
plzz update asap
awesome update

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#386

arre mishi yaar tu itna excited aur gussa mat ho
dont worry na main hun na heer aur prem milenge na yaar

tu ne itni jaldi mera ff nahi par ene ka faisla kar diya

i know yaar tu thoda mar pit chahti thi but gimme time i promise u maar pit in next update ab heer ko sacchai batani jaroori thi na ki porem bekasur hai so i have to do all this aur rishabh ko marna hai ki nahi batao ?????/

note for meeshti

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newt2007

@newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#387

hope nothing happens to heer

waiting

update soon

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

awesome update
loved it
continue asap
pm me

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#389

i m angry wid u
yaar its a very sad update
god is rishabh ko mara kyu nahiiii
prem pls heer ko bacha loo
aishu ab yeh sahi se kar diyoo
nahi toh kabhi b tera ff nahi parungii
plss unhe mila de na

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saba khan

@premeeristry

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Posted: 15 years ago

#390

Noaaaaahhhh dont do this aishwarya
not atleast in false commitment listen to me heer is not gonna die
am gonna hate u if u will kill heer 😭.why this rishab is so cruel itna cruel toh woh
kis desh mein bhi nahi tha.may his hand cut off with which she slapped heer.if not prem will do that
till now by my comments u must hav known how much i like this ff so dooooo update soon.n i alwayzz forgett this 😉thankxx for pm.

love
saba

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