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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks sanju ,yaz and pooji for ur comments keep reading tc guys
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeeristry

nice update dear 👍🏼

deikha i was right abt tu hi re song.yah wad prem did is right,jab ghee seedhi ungli se na nikley toh ungli

teydhi karni padhti hai.but waiting for ur next step dear plzzz update soon.

hihihih thanks
hahahayes darlingu were rghtya ab heer mann nahi rahi thi to kuch to karna hi parega na so maine ungli i mean prem ne ungli tedhi kar li hai
ya i l update in a day or so

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

hiii thanks sweetheart well u like prems dialogue thnak u unhelikhne mein mera sar kharab ho gaya
aur heermanegiyaar manegipakka

well
i must say tumhari mehnat rang layi
hehehehehehehe
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

awesome
speechless
loved it
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

thanks yaar

yai lcont asap and pmu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meeshi.

well
i must say tumhari mehnat rang layi
hehehehehehehe
update soon

bachci se acchi aadat sikh li hasne ki hahahahaah tum bhi mere jaisi hasne lagi ab hum huye dono pagal barabar hihihiih
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

OMG jst loved it do continue soon jst read it form pt 1 and was awesome continue asap thanks for the pm me

well thanks for having so much patience and reading it from 1st part i l cont soom
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

finally after a long time...............thank god prem explained everything to him before leaving now she will sit and think of everything that happened to her............hopefully she will come with a good decision.........do continue soon...........thanks for the pm...............

hahah ya finally i gave prem a cance to explain lets see in next part whats the decision of heer
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Posted: 15 years ago

AUTHORS NOTE : hello the bak bak machine is back
Ok friends now from here its going to be the win of truth
Everything will be in favour of premeer
So keep reading
Tc



PART -17





upstairs in the balcony

heer : was wiping her tears when suddenly she got pulled by some force and she was about to shout when someone putted a hand on her mouth to stop her from shouting

heer was stunned to look into those familiar pair of eyes which were red with anger
she tried to move but was again pinned ot the wall

her body frame was fitted in his frame and she was looking into his eyes
on the other hand he was holdong her one shoulder and other hand on her mouth he was so angry that he even didn't realized that he was poking her

heer tried to say but
prem : sshh no heer not now
now m going to speak and u l listen jst listen
you accused me of cheating u na right yes I did cheated u and I admit that but why don't u think about my feelings which I told u
that day on cliff u didn't even gave me a chance to prove myself and u blved whom that rishab
{ this time heer made herself free and turned her back towards him }

heer: I don't want to hear jst go

{ prem again pulled her and making her face him he holded her through her waist }

prem : u have to damn it u have to listen me
that night when u slept with me u don't remember anything but u slept with ur wish I didn't raped u damn it
and if u think so then why didn't u filed a police complaint ha
I l tell u the answer bcz u love me and u too know that but u cant admit that bcz ur so called ego is making u suffer '

Heer: prem u r hurting me let me go

Prem : m hurting u hun and u don't u remember how much u hurted me u tried to kill urself ha if I don't loved u why would have I gone to save u hun if I was only concerned with lust then why would I needed to save u after completing my desires ha bcz I love u

Heer: u don't u don't love me

Prem : yes I do 'and u too love me

Heer: r u deaf I hate u I don't love u

Prem : yes u do the tears in ur eyes says everything jst think jst think { with that he forced his lips to her and gave her a small kiss flavoured with butterscotch }
Heer: what the hell jst let me go

Prem : And ya m leaving tomorrow I wont be back to u to convince u bcz u r not the one I know and I don't convince strangers
{ with that prem left her }



preet was standing near the door of balcony when prem left

preet : heer

heer: now what wasn't that enough for today ?

preet: heer see I also thought that prem was wrong but after knowing the truth I realized everything kam se kam let him say the truth to you

heer: see now I don't want to discuss anything just we will talk later after tomorrows meeting

preet : fine do what u want ?

with that preet left too




NEXT DAY IN THE BOARD MEETING
Heer : so mr . rishabh rampal get ready to loose today

Rishabh : I wont

Heer: I will tell u one thing last tiime u cheated me but finally u came up with the truth today I l also do you the same favour actually I bought the deciders for 18 lakhs rs u know
They r now puppets in my hands so I hope u understood

Rishabh : u r lying

Heer : m not test me

Rishabh : we will see

Heer: yes we will

RISHABH WENT INSIDE TO THE MEETING

Heer : preet everythings ok

Preet : yups

Heer: so what you did ?

Preet : hmm I didn't bought the deciders either I brought his associate who gave his quotations to me

Heer: ok lets go

Preet : heer wait who prem is leaving

Heer: I said lets go in





INSIDE THE
BOARD MEETING

Host : ladies and gentlemen seeing and judging every tender ,presentations and quotations we give the tender to ms . mann and mr.preet sharmas company

Rishabh : what the hell
Guys this is cheating , this judges are corrupted I used all my money in this presantaion and they
{ he went and clutched the collar of the host as he is a looser now }

host : mr .rishabh rampal control urself or we will call up the police

rishabh : jst shut up this heer she did all that I l kill her
{ he went ahead to hold on heer but preet came in between }

preet : somebody call up the security guards

THEN THE SECURITY GUARDS CAME AND CAUGHT HOLD OF HIM

Rishabh : I l see u heer we will meet soon I wont let it like that u cant destroy me last time also I won and this time also I will win

Heer: chchhchcchch u wont rishabh u wont ahhh I said u a lie actually ur associate got sold tumhare apne ne dhokha diya ,deciders ne nahi like tumne mujhe mere apne se dhokha dilwaya tha now u r finished

Rishabh : { in rage rishabh told the words which he should not say } jo bhi ho heer mann phir bhi tum haar gayi prem juneja jaa raha hai ur love aur iska revenge to main lunga tumse in 24 hrs just see

Heer: guards throw him out


Preet : so we won

Heer: yes we did

Preet: bechare ki shakl dekhne layak thi par heer u need to alerted he said he l revenge u

Heer: he cant do anything who sirf ghayal hai isiliye par kate parinde ki tarah cheekh raha tha

Preet : arohi ka phone aaya tha we should leave for her home

Heer: why arohis call ?

Preet : paya nahi she said urgent

Heer: ok




AT AROHIS HOME

Arohi : ye heer abhi tak aayi kyun nahi
Arjun : cool down

Arohi : cool down my foot yaar flight mein kitna time baki hai

Arjun : 1 hours

Arohi : ye dono itne jiddi hai ki dono nahi sunte ek heer aur doosra prem dono ko to main

Arjun : chill

Arohi : ab tumne mujhe chill kaha to main tumhe fridger mein dl dungi

Arjun : maine kya kiya

?

AND THEN PREET AND HEER ENTERED

HEER: arohi r u ok ?

Arohi : thank god tu aagayi

Heer: whats the matter ???

Arohi : ye letter

Heer: took the letter and started reading




Dear heer
I know u hate me so much still this is the last time m trying
I know u don't like to listen me so this letter is a medium it contains everything, which I wanted u to know
First of all I agree that I took a bet on you but that doesn't means I cheated you I really love u in hearts.
The moments I spent with u were the luckiest ones even maine rishabh se bhi kaha tha ki I love u but I didn't know he will use this as a weapon even I didn't know that he is revenging u believe me heer believe me

That day on cliff I was about to tell you the truth and then commit my love but that brat mixed up everything aur usne har cheez ko ek alag shape and size bana ke dikhaya

I was so happy ki u returned back from canada so that I can explain
Even I did explained u everything but then also fate betrayed me and next morning u even didn't remembered anything not my commitment ,nor my truth , nor my love nothing
And again I was the criminal


I know u wont believe me but still I love you and will always love u m leaving m levaing to makee ur life easy as I know u think ur every problems are based on me m levaing……………..


Love u
Premmmmmmmmmmmmmmm




AFTER READING ALL THIS A TEAR ROLLED DOWN HER CHEAK AND SHE CRUSHED ON GROUND
Arjun: heer please go heer I know u still don't believe him completely but give him a chance go heer go we don't have time go heer

Heer: I m so confused

Arohi: heer this is the last chance

Kashish : heer we all know he loves u atleats once for our sake please heer

HeeR: ok I l go I l stop him but this will be his last chance I l let him explain atleast once

WITH THAT SHE RANNED TO HER CAR



HERE AROHI CALLED PREM
Arohi: prem ! she read ur letter and she is coming to the airport don't leave plz
Prem: don't lie
Arohi: m not
Prem: is she really coming
Arohi: yes just don't leave this golden opportunity wont come again
Prem: ok
Arohi: all the best
Prem : yes thanks



THIS IS THE LAST CALL FOR PASSENGERS GOING TO DELHI

Prem tore his tickets

Prem to himself : I l wait for u heer I l wait for u ………
…………





that's all

Next update will be shock whatever u r expectng is not going to happen so keep readin

Tc
Aishwarya gayen



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Posted: 15 years ago

hiiiii aishu

awesome update
loved it
finally heer maan gayii
prem,s dialogues r awesome
rishabh ka acha haal banaya heer ne
hehehehehehhhee
update soon
Edited by meeshi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
suppppeeerrrrrbbbb update aishwarya 👍🏼
but again u finished it on a end point which makes me get anxious for next update
so do update soon.

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