New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 6

hey really nice update.........first of all a really long one i just cant imagine myself writing it n that too so fast..........with so many emotions............really u r brilliant writer.................n thanks for the pm.plz update soon eagerly waiting for the next part

Hey
Thanks alot for the pm for this wonderful update
Prem better be alive, you can't kill him.

And the couples you madee
haha meher and nihal
and kulraj and rishabh :D

That was a long update, but sadly it wasn't 20 pages :(
anyway it is a really gud concept
Prem heer should be together in the next part. Please
Will be waiting for your update
lots of love,
resham

beautiful and amazing update Jaz...you are such a brilliant writer...
beautiful concept...and story line..enjoyed reading it...
it is great to see maya and Heer share a strong relationship at least in your story...
how cruel are heers brothers...poor heer....
you can't kill Prem..and if Heer believes he is alive then he is surely...
can't wait for their reunit...and prem can be with a bang..i mean a big business tycoon..even richer then Heer's family....
waiting for the next update

oh.. it was so painful and so sad.. waiting for next update... Is prem really dead

i have no words...seriously..your update simply took me into a new world...man..i just loved the story...oh..i cant believe .. prem is no more...? i know he must have been saved by someone..poor heer..and a different set of chararcters..i can really feel prem n heer slove..as if they are living with me..oh god...i cant wait for your next part....

omg...

Wow.

That was really...wow. 😆 20 pages? How do you guys have the patience for all of that? Meera once wrote something that was like.. 30 pages. Even like 5 pages is long enough for me. 😆

So much information to take in, I don't know where to start. Her family first sounded so nice, three brothers, a younger sister, loving bhabhi's, playful parents and than you had to throw this twist in. Well, I kinda expected this (not what you wrote - I expected something drastic) to happen, but how it happened, really just...wow to read. 😆

I think Maya has got to be my fave because she was the only one that made an effort to help Heer. I think I felt worse for her that I did for Heer, when her story about Prashant and all was revealed. Unexpected, but from you, that's what I expect. :)

And when he died. I loved how it started raining the instant that life leeft his body. Such a good part, and how can her brothers be so, so cruel? God. I don't even have words for them right now. SIGH.

Continue soon,

--shabz

alright lets gussa you over hurting my Prem😡😡😡, I hope nothing major has happened to him and if you killed him which I am pretty sure you didn't b/c story would cease to exist l..... Prem will come back b/c after all everything is possible in hindi stories....you cruel inhumane person and beechara Prem sooo hurt


all better after venting this out....now back to good part, brilliant writing, your story telling capabilities are superb, I mean the whole update went from happy, sad, happy and ultimately sad routine but it seemed so natural.....will wait for your long update next week, until then let me figure out some torture techniques for the Mann man

i dont have words to describe yar it is just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good amazing lovely etc...........👏