New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Vey Sad!!!!!!!!!!
please continue asap!!!!!
waiting for the next part!!!!!
Prem better be alive!!!!!!!!!!
thnaks for the PM
PM me when u update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
O-M-G! Jazz Di!!! *comes running to tackle Jaz Di into a BIG HUG* 🤗 Ahh! I missed you! Its been ages since I've commented on your FF's! Im so sorry about that! *kaan pakading* It's just that sometimes I get REALLY lazy, and I mean really lazy! But from now on I promise to leave a comment every time you update...or atleat try too! 😆

Now on to the update!...Omfg! 20 FREAKING PAGES?!?!?! What...are you super girl or something?! 😆 How do u do it Di? I mean 20 pages worth of perfection! Hats off to you man! You are brilliant without a doubt! 😳

But the update was FABULOUS! Like no joke! The story, the concept, the emotions, everything was so perfect! Awesome job Di! 👏 👏 👏 Teen taalian's for you! I loved the concept of Prem and Heer being best friends since childhood and falling love! That's so sweet!

But the flashback was so heart wrenching! 😔 And I have to tell you...I HATE all three brothers and Heer's Bauji, how could they do such a sin?!?! They killed Prem?!?!..But I still believe that Prem's alive, if Heer is, the he definitely is! Right?

I really like the relationship between Maya and Heer! Its so sweet! She so nice to let Heer go off and get married! Thats really nice of her! She's so caring! I was so happy when Prem and Heer got married, but then the stupid three musketeers came in and murdered him! I was so about to cry at that moment! 😭 How can someone be so cruel!?!?! I felt EXTREMELY bad for Heer! I hope Prem comes back! One question...so did Heer have to marry Rajveer? 🤔 Im guessing she didn't but still....

Otherwise, I LOVE the story Di! Please do continue soon! Can't wait to read it! 😳 Byee! *waves* 😉 😆

Luv,
Garima 😃

Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
omg it's soo sad they killed premm...
nd thnxs for the pm
anywazz awsome part....
plz pm me wen u update the next part...
thnxs
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
omg i was about to cry.. mera prem nahi mar sakta!! is he coming back as gaurav? wat happened to rishab? wouldnt heer be a widow.. but he cant die!!

wat were u thinking?MEHER AND NIHAAL!!i know they're not bro-sis but im a fan of preet and meher so that didnt digest very well...lol and in the begining you said neha and rahul (did the kanyadaan too) and then when the bros were searching, it said neha and dev.. so is that a typo or did i miss something cuz i usually do..lol

good long part.. continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Hey Jaz
omg 20 pgz wow that was the longest part i have ever read at I-F
omg that was very sad emotional
hate the maan men but loved the relationship between heer and maya soo sweet relationship
overall stunning update
love ur story


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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
JAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I dont think i have words to describe HOW BEAUTIFUL this update was! My gosh!! I was literally in tears!!! For the first time, I hate the Maan men! How could they be SO CRUEL!!! MY goodness! I had goosebumps while reading this...It was like, I could imagine the torture they made heer and Prem go thru...it was heartbreaking..very heartbreaking!!! I could feel the pain!!!


Please update soon!! I want to know How prem survived!! I m like so anxious to know!!! Loved the update..you are so very good with writing! I love your writing style alot!!! Continue soon!

Love,
Mahrukh
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
excellent update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm the next update asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hey jaz....
commented on heer's secret aready, but seriously..... how can i get myself into troubles like reading your not yet completed FFs?? 🤣 *shakes head*.... gosh, i might just die over here if i dont read on and on.... seriously, how many times have u read this compliment, about you being such an amazing writer?? i might just have to repeat that after reading the first part... oh, you are even better than a real author... i simply cant explain how much i enjoy reading your FFs and how much i look forward to reading even more....
about the 1st part - omg, you seriously have the power to make me hate anyone!! i think if prem would've been one of heer's brother, (tauba, i'm just saying, i would suicide if it's that way 🤣) i would tend to hate him the same way i hate these 4 manns....i was literally curing them all the way... just like i had cursed manmeet in 'ek paal'... how can they be so heartless, yet u made them look so real! and maya, what a sweetie, she is simply adorable! i was so sad when the prashant story was mentioned... she definitely didnt deserve that! and the shaadi, and all the fighting ended up with my eyes wet... i am not that soft when reading - but that never applies when reading your FFs... aww, and when heer said "happy 7th aniversary prem" a tear fell, and i can totally feel the pain heer is going through... gosh, no matter how annoying she is in the show right now, i always loved heer in your FFs!
oh, and heer is married... me dont think so! and about prem... i KNOW... i just KNOW he's still alive.... he has to be... there is absolutely no other way... and yes, i trust you... coz premeer-are-one nah? if heer is breathing, then prem's heart must be beating some where in the world... coz if not, heer should've died 7 years ago right?? am i convincing enough? 🤣 *very hopeful muh*....
omg, pls cont soon before i literally faint in hopes!! looking forward to the next update.... hopefully this long... 😉... ok, chalo, even half this long would do... even 1 page, i need to read on!! 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
*OMG* that nearly had me in tears...how do you write like that ...it was beautifull to read ...i could feel Heer's pain when Prem was getting beaten up...such a sad scene and her brothers ...dont get me started there ....truly dislike them ...and iv got a very good feeling Prem is still out there somewere thinking about Heer and we will see him in action soon😉.....Awesomeee update once again!!!
Edited by *|Heena|* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
omg...that was so sad....😭😭😭 I was all happy that heer and prem got away from heer's family...but never expected Rishab to stab prem and even balraj was with him...😲😲😲
anyways...to get to the happy part...I really liked the wedding...sweet and cute.... 🤗and also heer and her family moments with her mom and bhabhis were amazing...👏 cant wait for the next part...update soon...and thanks for the PM....😊



love
Afreen

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