hey jaz....
commented on heer's secret aready, but seriously..... how can i get myself into troubles like reading your not yet completed FFs?? 🤣 *shakes head*.... gosh, i might just die over here if i dont read on and on.... seriously, how many times have u read this compliment, about you being such an amazing writer?? i might just have to repeat that after reading the first part... oh, you are even better than a real author... i simply cant explain how much i enjoy reading your FFs and how much i look forward to reading even more....
about the 1st part - omg, you seriously have the power to make me hate anyone!! i think if prem would've been one of heer's brother, (tauba, i'm just saying, i would suicide if it's that way 🤣) i would tend to hate him the same way i hate these 4 manns....i was literally curing them all the way... just like i had cursed manmeet in 'ek paal'... how can they be so heartless, yet u made them look so real! and maya, what a sweetie, she is simply adorable! i was so sad when the prashant story was mentioned... she definitely didnt deserve that! and the shaadi, and all the fighting ended up with my eyes wet... i am not that soft when reading - but that never applies when reading your FFs... aww, and when heer said "happy 7th aniversary prem" a tear fell, and i can totally feel the pain heer is going through... gosh, no matter how annoying she is in the show right now, i always loved heer in your FFs!
oh, and heer is married... me dont think so! and about prem... i KNOW... i just KNOW he's still alive.... he has to be... there is absolutely no other way... and yes, i trust you... coz premeer-are-one nah? if heer is breathing, then prem's heart must be beating some where in the world... coz if not, heer should've died 7 years ago right?? am i convincing enough? 🤣 *very hopeful muh*....
omg, pls cont soon before i literally faint in hopes!! looking forward to the next update.... hopefully this long... 😉... ok, chalo, even half this long would do... even 1 page, i need to read on!! 😆
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