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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#451

YES ES YES YES YES YES YES1!!!! I KNEW IT.. i didnt have time to tell u but i reread this fanifc a bazillion times trying to undertand.. and when he said " "Kyun ke paisa hi aap logoon ke liyeh saab kuch hai. Kyun ke mujhe yeh status aur paisa saab aap logoon ke muh pe marna tha. Kyun ke iss mauke ke liyeh maine saloon intezaar kiya hai."i was like O YA IM RITEE!!

also the preet means prem.. i was like omg maybe prem is back1! u have to continuee sooon!!

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#452

Jazz please ....Stop torturing...Update kardona PLEASE........

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#453

updated comment on page 62

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Sarah

@--Sarah--

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#454

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Jaz no more BRING PREM BACK! now its PREM IS BACK PREM IS BACK PREM IS BACK
Thanks for this Jaz!
It was the first update in Tanhani wherein i'vent cried!!
Jaz the update was fabulous, amazing, phantabulous and beautifully written!!! the description of feelings and emotions very well taken care of!!! Great Job 👏 👏
I must say Jaz you are a fine writer and i love your writings
I know the fact that Maya should have recognized Prem but she didn't...don't mind it as if Heer said he is Prem then he is Prem 😊
Loved siblings unite and finally all misunderstanding between Heer and her brothers is cleared
can't wait to read the next update
waiting Jaz

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Kashish

@..kashish..

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#455

hey jaz di..i hve unreserved my comment...hpe ur updating soon..sorry didnt realise it till now!! :)

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#456

update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

really cant wait 2 see wat happens next

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Jazuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...........i MADE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aren't you proud babes? That i actually read ALL parts in like w/in 24hours!! 😃

OMG..first thing first..i LUV this FF of yours!! Woot woot!! Love each and every character..especially the relationship that Heer shares w/her 3 bhabhis...Kuljeet, Maya, and Meher!! Actually a bit weird to imagine Meher as Heer's bhabhi..but for this FF..i'll chalao-ing it!!! 😉

OMG...Prem dies?? OMG OMG OMG...why why why why why?? OMG OMG..why the torture babes?? Poor Heer, had to live w/out her Prem for 7 years!! Whoaaaa!! That's just plain torture for her!! And worst of all, her brothers "accidentally" kill Prem...now tell me, how do u accidentally kill someone...not cool...super not cool!!

This father is such a *****...i swear dude...if i was in place of one of the brothers..i'd have murdered him rather than go after poor Prem!! Felt sooooooo sorry for him when he died!! 😭 ....bechara..the only fault was that he was not filthy rich like the dad!! Grrrrrrrrrrr..........

Okkk..one thing i dont get...I am sure when Prem got killed, Dad was there watching the whole thing..didn't he know how Prem looked like..b/c when the Dad and Bro's saw Preet, couldn't they be like "shocked" for few mins b/c the face resembles Prem...?? Or does it NOT resemble Prem? If not, then how does Veera figure out that its Prem and Heer as well? Confusing babes..but am sure, this confusion will be cleared in the next update...😉

Loved it..especially the flashbacks..they were super cute..especially the one's between Prem and Heer...awww..bachpan ka pyaaar...tooo cute yaar! And Prem as a kid was too cute..i can actually picture that..hehe!!

Okkk..since i commented..i hope its LAMBAAAA...if not, maaf karde!! I tried...seriously...i tried!! 😳 ...aur woh bhi..sirf tere liye!! ❤️

Aaabbb chal...tu give an update to us now...😃 woh bhi me expecting it lambaaaa 😊...yeshhhh yeshhh..me luv u too! ❤️

Lubbbb u....Patches❤️

Edited by Pachu.P - 15 years ago