New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 47

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Omg jaani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Guess who is here!!!!!.... Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well duh.... cuz i am 1st!😆 yeah i better be.... cuz no one can take my spot.... its always me me me!!!😳😳😳... after all its my right!! omg babe...im so missing you right now...you wont see this til next year but omg...😭😭 I MISS YOU!!!

Anyways.... finally..... u updated!! man it took u long enough to update.... and no... my bridal shower is not an excuse becuz u had days before that.... but did u do it?? no!!!😡 and the last update i even commented on the same day!!! but that didnt help either!😕... i even forgot wat i had written!!!!😕😕 re read it.... but then... it lost its meaning!!!!! lmao...your bridal shower is the perfect excuse...but omg babe...wasnt it awesome...i have to say...the look on your face when you saw Pachu was priceless...make it all worth it!! 😳😳😳 love you!!!


Haila wat an update it was!!!!.... wow!! so much happened!! all the siblings are all reunited!! i think thats soooo cute!!!👏 now she knows the truth that they arent bad after all!!!😭😭 its all the dads fault!!!!😡 uff hate him!!...... aww it was cute with the whole her tying the rakhri on them!!!.... i love raksha bandhan...too bad we dont do it...i gots to find myself a brother so i can tie rakhi on him...he he...he better be rich so i can get good presents 😉😉😉

The flashback was soooo funny!!!😆😆 the 1st one... i was getting a kick out of that! Poor Heer...... had a bully on her back!! but then.... throwing up is the trend these days!!!!😆what do you mean "throwing up is the trend these days"...who did you throw up on 🤢🤢🤢

And the 2nd one.... yup thats the way... lying that ur writing an essay about love!!! man.... i never wrote an essay on that!... Did u?😆 I write FFs but thats a whole different story!!!!!.... awwww... the way they were all describing their loves for their wives are soooo cute!!😳😳😳... whats funny is that when im writing my ff's i tell mom im working on an essay...one time mom was like is that all you do in college...write essays...😆😆 im like ya...sure...why not 😛


Haila but the best of the best part was at the end..... Guess who has come!! Omg!!!!!!...... Omg... Its the little mouse!!! Prem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haila.... babe...u left off at the worst part ever!!! and the bad part is.... i am leaving this weekend!!😭😭😭 soooooo not cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!... u have to update once before i leave!!!! plz plz plz plz plz... i beg u!!😭 ha ha...twist kaisa laga? 😃...see how much i love you!! 😳 you know me naa...he he...i wanna finish this one so i can start a new one...but ill wait for you to come back before i start a new one




plz cont soon babe!!!! ha ha...clearly that didnt happen😆


luv u!!😳😳 you too!! 🤗

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

me! Gudiya!! 🤗

*edited*

Nearly a month and like 6 pm's later *growls* you know who you all are...I had exams! 😔 😲 6pm's...tauba...someone had too much time on their hands...i cannot believe you got harassed on IF 🤣

Anywhoooo I'm here now for my Jaz! *hugs* So let the comments commence (get it?😛 I'm high...forgive me) happy to see you here!! *woo hoo*...😃...i get it...and your are always lovely when you are "high"...😛

I love the brothers!!! 😃 The way they're being so supportive of Heer and owning up to their mistakes! 😃haye haye...aab itna pyaar bhaiyoon ke liyeh kahaan se aa raha hai 😛😛

omg! The whole flashback was incredible Jaz!! It was sooo perfect! 😳 I love the whole relation between them😃hai naa...i always wanted older brothers who were like that...but never did...ive got older cousins but didnt get close to them until i was much older...and i have one ANNOYING younger brother

I can't comment on the rest of it Jaz....I'm in shock......I'll have you know the whole rakhi bit with Heer and her brothers was really touching anddd the flashback that came after was sooo shweettt haila...someone is cheating...itna comment...baas...im going to cry 😭


But the lines that have me 😲 Are..."Preet aur Prem ek hi hue na?" I mean omggggg 😲 I knew you'd pull something like this! 😃he he...you know me too well...but be honest...did you see this coming 😛

I honestly....don't know what to say tho...and omg he filled her maang *sighs* mujhe khushi ke asoon aa rahe hain! *sighs* I know it's not as long as they usually are...but the day my exams finished I had to read and comment😳its not long...not long at all...but but but...im expecting you to make up in the next update 😉

Love you, as always! 😃 me too me too!! still watching your b-day mix every chance i get 😳

Gudiya😳

Originally posted by: premeer928

omg jaz....are u serious 😲....I am dreaming...no wait...I am not...PREM IS BACK!!!....😳😳😳 wow....that was amazing...awesome....fantastic....I have no words to describe how much I loved the update....👏 The way heer and the brothers bonded....the flashabcks...everything was just so cute....😃 but wait...I am confused about one thing....if he is prem...then why didnt maya recognize him....has he like done surgery and changed into preet...so now is prem harshad or is he sushant...😕 can u plz clarify that....😛 I am loving your ff....keep up the great work...continue soon....and thanks for the PM...😊 ha ha...everyone seems to have the same "😲" reaction...ha ha...kyun...twist kaisa laga...and yes...its true...no dream here...😉😉...Prem still looks like Prem with minor changes like the cut on his face and facial hair...Maya didnt recognize him because she only really saw him a handful of times...the only other person who would recognize Prem is Veera because she saw him regularly when he came to see Heer 😃😃 aab aaya samaj mein 😛😛...next part will be up this weekend


love thanks for the comment 😊
Afreen

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

OMG JAz what OMG...kya hua? 😉

you know i always love your writing ... it soo reall and awsomeeeee

The way you describeee things iss great, i swear i can see the scence in fornt of my eyes

I love that ... for this updateee this is sooooo Gooooooood.

OMG you brought PREM .... hehe *Blush*

Thankyouuuuu for such and awsomeee update yaaar ... it rocks

Loved ittttt

Keep rocking

Love Ayysha 😳 im so glad that you are enjoying my work...comments like this make it all worth it 😳😳😳...im happy that i can paint the picture for you all to see...i think that is very important when reading...creating the image for the readers 😃😃😃...and yes...prem is back...aab aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😛

Originally posted by: Happy_pretty

OMG PLZZZ UPDATE FAST PLZZZ

Originally posted by: anu142

OMG!!! He's Prem!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....thanks dear!!

Originally posted by: Sonalicious

But but but but *speechless* But he was DEAD!!! How how how how how?? HOOOOWWWW???? He was DEAD!!!

*does Maya's snake dance*

BUTTTT how can this beee? BUTT!!

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

You want me to let you in on a secret of mine. I haven't read this story yet!!😃 lmao...then what are you doing here...lmao 😆😆

What happens is that whenever I read your stories..I end up spending the rest of the day thinking about the next time you update..and usually rake my brains out!

So this time..me being the smart me that is..I decided that I won't read this SS till you put up atleast 6 chapters. ok aab...im so waiting for a loooooong comment...you have not 6 but 8 parts to read...so...aab batao...kaab pad rahi ho aur kaab comment kaar rahe ho 😃 im dying to see what you think

I think it's that time that I start reading this SS.

Soooo...I'm reserving this spot right now. Watch out for a big comment cuz I have 8 chapters to tell you about! 😆 yes yes...me waiting 😳

Luv ya!

Nitya :)

-edit- haila...back so soon...disregard the above comment 😆

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG!! JAAZZZ DII!

I'm finally getting to updating my comment. I completely forgot about reading this story till I read the little comment you wrote in the KDC issue. Am I the one keeping you from updating?! *smacks self on the head* Bad Nitya!!😆 Hehe. So..I have a lot to comment on, to be specific; I have 8 chapters to comment on and that too all at once. Ohh yea, the prologue too! Be prepared to read! *evil grin* yaar...bring it...i've been dying to read your comments 😳😳

Prologue:

WOOOWW!!! What can I say?!! Your story has like a magnetic effect! I read it and at first I was like "what the heck?!" and then I re-read it like twice'I think 🤔 There's tons of foreshadowing and I LOVE it!! I hate them in any other stories I read but this FF has a different kind of foreshadowing!! It's the kind where the reader doesn't know what's going to happen but dies to read the rest!! I don't really know what I'm saying right now..(high on candy!) but just know that I'm complementing your writing! It's like a drug that leaves the reader wanting for more!! im a huge fan of prologues and epilogues 😆😆...all of my stories have them...he he...the prologue gets you readers hooked...especially the way i leave everything up in the air 😉😉😉...so glad that you liked it 😳😳

I'm guessing that the couple is none other than our beloved Prem and Heer. And it's sad she had to leave her family for 'him' but I'm very proud! He's garib?! And why is her freakin' family against him?!! Stupid parivaar waalo! ha ha...i loved the way you put it..."stupid parivaar waalo!" 🤣 no one else put it quite so eloquently 😉😉😉 and of course...they are our Premeer...who else would it be 😛

"They were their love and love was their lives" OOOMMMGGG!! Best sentence ever!! It's so sweet to read about their relationship maturing with their age. I LOVE that line!! thanks yaar...there are other one liners you'll come across that im sure you'll love 😛

Awwwiieeeeee! 13 years! They've been in love since 13 years! That's the most adorable thing I've ever read!! The kids in her school were freakin' meanies! And poor girl! She had to bare their nautanki!! Her savior! Her angel! He came to save her!! Shooooo shweeeet!! hai naa...*swoon*...mere school mein saab ladke idiots the...chi...eeks...well...there was one...omg...he gave me his juice at our x-mas party in the 2nd grade...i swear...i fell in love with him 😳😳😳

Haila! His mother's dead?!! Phew! Atleast now there's one less villain in their lives! 😆 😆 LOL'But I feel sad that she died when he was so young though! At least he had his love to console him! I'm proud of them! They were with each other through thick and thin! And I'm extremely proud of you for writing about them!! 🤗 his mother was nice...she loved Heer...so she wouldnt cause any trouble...😳😳...thanks yaar...😳

I'm going to take my time in reading the story! BUT don't wait up for me...can you please just update the story already...I don't want everyone to run after me..cuz I'm pretty sure your not updating because of my reservation! 😆 chalo...because you were nice enough to comment on the prologue...ill let you go and ill update..but...that doesnt mean that you are off the hook...im still waiting for 8 more comments...you've got 8 chapters to go...and jaz is DYING to read...so pls...jaldi karo naa 😳😳

Originally posted by: harshaitixoxo

Finaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem is bck!
Thanks for bringing him back!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Can u pm me when u update?
Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: sinak

Awesome Update. How is that Heer's brother did not know that Preet is Prem. Have they not see Prem since they knew that Heer loves Prem. Plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesome

how did the brothers not recognize him


loves the ending


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

OMG PLZZZ UPDATE FAST PLZZZ
Finaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem is bck!
Thanks for bringing him back!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Can u pm me when u update?
Thanks!

Originally posted by: riks1

jazz...i just love it...

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

prem is back!!!!!!!

i'm waiting for the next update!

Originally posted by: newt2007

prem back

lovely

waitng for the next part.

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

right anyone near by to pinch me..cause i thinkn i need it! first she forgives them, ties rakhi, they go to stop wedding and for the final boom...PREM IS BACK..

haila.... lol...what can i say...i love SURPRISES!!! 😉

di ur plannin on killing us right!! :)..wow..is the only way n word i can say!..

ofcource i am doing the *happy dance* *faints* *screams*..thnk that shud express my feelings!! ha ha...not planning to kill you...just torture you all and then make you guys love the torture because it led to having Prem come back...im evil...i know 😆😆😆

back to the part..haha

jaz di seriously that was a great part..loved to see the bondingbetween the three brothers and heer..when they were little n even now..esp whens he forgave them..and tieing them the seven rakhi's that she had missed.. im glad that you liked the bro-sis bonding...after all this hate and resentment...i thought i'd give them a nice scene 😃

hai and the bhabhis are also so sweet!!! thinking that their husabnds made her cry..but glad to see that the family is getting back to normal..thoda slow..par effective hai na!! =D

hahahha..the teasing has started..poor veera..no wonder a bride blushes so much after her wedding..esp when she meets her frnds..wonder if guli will have to go thru the same..

hhahahaha...guli beware!! think this is the clue that jaz di is giving out to all her frnds, who are going to get married..teasing will always be there..no matter what... oh honey...guli will go through much worse...tum hume jaante nahin ho...aur main toh sirf ek hoon...humare gang mein kam se kam 8 ladkiyaan hai 😈 she will die of embarrassment!! 😛😛😛

OMG...they actually went to Preet and asked him to stop the wedding..thats good to see..ahah...where did balraj tapak from?? balraj is like a...well...hes like...ok so i dont really have a word for him...but he's just the worst 🤬

had a feeling that Preet might be Prem..but aaj toh yakeen hogaya...hmm..wonder if balu also knows..thats why he is so adamant on getting them married..or maybe he is just after the money.. Ballu doesnt know anything...dont give him too much credit...he wants the money and thats all 😡😡😡

hai..loved the tlk between Preet and Preeti..oopss..Prem and Preeti..Preet matlab Prem..haii..love that line of his.. ha ha...this entire update was based on that one line 😉

ahhhaha...both maya and veera in shock...and heer toh...black out!..a bit like me i guess when i read the part..hai..they are married! finally... what do you mean finally...they've been married for the past seven years...they just didnt know it 😆😆 they are married again 😊

par ab story katkham nahi hui hai..so lets see what you have planned..hai..kya bombshell di...

cant wait to read the next part....now you have to update soon..

please please please *folds hand* *hopeful face*

thanks for the PM and will be waiting for the next one.. pm will be sent out soon enough...😉

hope you hve fun in Guli's wedding..n hope she njoys it too =P 😭😭😭...she is having a blast while im not...im stuck here in Los Angeles and her butt is off in India getting married...so not fair...im the best friend and im stuck here...stupid car accident...took all my money 😭😭😭

by the way..how are you feeling now..hope ur better... yes hun thanks for asking...im doing much better...just have some scars that refuse to go away 😡

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

O. M. G.

WHAT THE HELL!

*deep breath*

wow jaz, what a twist!!! im infamous for my twists...readers get mad...because they think one thing the entire ff and then..BAM...whole story changes in an instant 😆😆😆

prem is alive!!

oh my, i was just thinking about how heer would live the rest of her life cause prem was dead..

and i was SO overjoyed when prem turned out to be alive!!!

eeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but what happened?

how did he survive? aare aare aare...itne sare questions...thoda diraj rakho...everything will be explained in the next update 😉

hurry, hurry update more!!!

and the sweet bonding moment between heer and her brothers was so cute..

so were the flashbacks..

the were so touching =) glad that you enjoyed them 😃

heer's brothers are so sweet..

they really love her alot..

and the one where heer was 5 was hilarious..

harman and nihaal with their english phrase!! ya....i thought that was hilarious myself 😆😆...boys are so stupid 😆

aahahahha, LOL..

that was the only place where i understood everything LOL..

and when they explained the meaning of love..

aww..i felt all mushy =) you know...even i was shocked at how i came up with all those explanations 😆😆...after i finished...i was like wait...did i do that?

and dang, i just wanna kill bauji..

stupid old man..

he took away his daughter's happiness!!!

what kind of man uses his daughters as bargaining tools?

sick twisted man.. see...you answered your own question 😉

anyways, whats gona happen next????

is prem gona avenge his "murder"???

this is amazing!!!

im speechless, in a good way!!!

i love this update!!!!!!! =D glad that you liked it...next update will be up soon 😃

Originally posted by: suryavni

owwww....was waiting.....preet aur prem ek hai!!!!u gave us a treat!well enjoyed all ur flashbacks....do update soon😊.and ur other FFs HS and SD tooooo...(well its a bit demanding request😳PLEASE😭😭

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hiiiiii jaz

it was such a awesome update

very lovingg thanks...glad that you liked it 😃

yupieeeeeeeeeeee prem returned back

preet is prem is the most shocking part i had this part figured out from the very beginning of the ff...even before i killed him 😆😆 weird...i know 😆

but i m happy

ur flasbacks r very loving

pls update sson

really want to know

how prem saved dat night

and how he changed his identity

pls update soon everything about Prem will be explained in the next update...hang in there...ill be posting it soon 😆

Originally posted by: bd670816

hi jaz, hope u r fine. awesome update atlast.finally prem is back!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
tc.

Originally posted by: masin

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haila...shh...kya karte ho...kan ke parde phat gaye 😳 he he...just kidding...im happy to see my Sammy Baacha happy

kk caps are not even nearly strong enough to describe my feelings..and nor will words be! but kk..its 2:30 am rite now...i still need to straighten my hair for school, and obv. i need to sleep! but i culdnt resist checking out the update and reading each dialogue literally 8 timess!!!!!! if not moree!!!! and the last part..well i read tht lets say............A GAZILLION TIMESS!!!!!!!!!! i read ur reply to my comment, and u nearly had me believing tht prem won't be back...but then i was like no...that's exactly wht u want us to think.....and then i started thinking he's prem after he said he has to have tht deal cuz he's been waiting to slap tht money and status on the maan's faces! and then wen u explained the scar, and the Preet = Prem......well that's wen things went haywire! u will def. not believe me but i was smacking my fists..whispering screamsss (considering the time of night, i couldn't scream with all my voice!) and smacking the comp. screen! and simply covering my mouth to try my best to stop any sounds from escaping! obv. i failed!!!!!! but honestly....i shall have amazing dreams tonite!!!!!! i will def. comment more on the part later...cuz i realyl gtg but i have to say THIS WAS A JOB AMAZINGLY WELL DONE (sorryyy......sammy bacha still hasn't looked in the thesaurus for better vocab to describe ur writing!) I LOVEE YOUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333333 ok sammy baacha...kahaan ho...me waiting for you awesome comment on this part..especially this part because you got what you anted...you got your prem back...aab jaldi se aapna comment update karo...pls...is that too much to ask after all i have given *blush*...he he...how are you liking the emotional atyacha 😆😆😆

goodniteeee

ur extremely elated, (hey..haven't used tht word yet!) good job...new word 👏👏

Sammy Bacha

Originally posted by: stunninstar

ohhhhhh...my senses were telling me the first time.. but then..i had brushed away that thinking how can preet be prem...but now... everything fits in....muaaahh..i love yuh...

Originally posted by: Additi...

Mauja He Mauja
Jaz if you were infront of me i would have surely give you a TIGHT HUG.......🤗 omg omg...me so dancing along with you...i love that song!! 😳😳
You cant even imagine that HOW much i am happy....😳😳😳 i cant express it
in words...........MY prem returned .........WOW...Wohooo 🥳
It was toooooooooooooo GOOOD......Loved it...i just loved his every Statement......
specailly when he said " Apni Dulhan ko Lene" 😍.......YOu are too GOOD.....😛 Le jayengi Le jayenhi, Dil Dulhanya Le jayenge
Reh jayenge, Reh jayege, Gharwaale dekhti Reh jayenge
perfect song for the situation...because is so true...Prem has come to take his dulhaniya while her family watches 👏 wah wah..kya selection hai!! ⭐️⭐️
Ab zara jaldi se update karna.....Mere raato ki neeend ziyada HARAm mat karna....
PLEASE.............😭 lol...how goes the rathoon ka neend!? 🤣

Uffffff.............What should i say MORE..................as you know i am speechless
i really dont want to know that how he is alive because all that matters to me is
that HE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳.................... i think that is all that matters to everyone else 😳....you all wanted Prem back and he is...how much do ya love me now 😉😉😉

With so many updates you made us Cry.....😭 But you actaully Made me happy
with this part.....I hope there are also some romantic parts ☺️ glad that you didnt cry this time... 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I KNEW IT! Somehow, I just knew it! oohhh, remind me to come back to this.

*edited*

Okay, no long comment from me this time. I swear, my brain switched off after the exams. 😆 chalo...ill excuse you...my brain too has been switched off after exams...im just afraid it wont turn back on because i have no more school 😕😕😕

I love the way you built everything up. I had a suspicion when you brought in Preet that he would turn out to be Prem, because it was dark and about to storm the night he was 'killed' so I doubted the brothers would have seen him properly. I love how you wrote it though. Heer's life is falling into place, properly. And her father will get his dues, and Heer will tell Prem everything, and it'll all work out. you are the only one to logically analyze the situation for why the brothers didnt recognize prem...you are right...they didnt get a good look at him 😉😉...so proud of you Radzzie!! 🤗

Ahh, i cannot wait for the next part! soon yaar...soon....im trying 😳

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

reserved.........

me back.... hello! 😳

haila... Jaz...........
Prem wapas aa gaya!!! yupiiiiiii
i was literally jumping on my seat.....
wow wow... haila..jumping on the seat...that cannot be safe...aab saach saach bol...did you fall 😆😆😆

i love you love you so much for this FAB update....

all i want to say is thanx a million....
awesome, fabulous, mind blowing update.... lol...glad that you enjoyed it...😳😳😳...


see i have edited my spot....

now you better update asap.... still have two spots that need to be updated...so me is waiting 😆

regards,
Suhana.

Originally posted by: maha_k

😲

😃

you put the best icons to describe your emotions now...he he...👏

i knew it i KNEW itttttttt.prem is alive.

sorry dear i forgot to unreserve my comment. no sorry needed...hota hai...but aab bolo...how did you remember...were you harassed as well 😆😆😆

awesommmmmmmmm update like always.👏👏.flashbacks were too cute and good specially firstone.😊.and u wrt it really really well they way you described brothers love was awesomm and so natural.

but their father 🤢🤢 he is too much 😡😡 but i liked him in this part😉 bcz of him our prem is back in heer's life😃 yes...ill admit...lallu had a big hand in bringing prem back to Heer's life...how much do you think he hates himself now 😆😆😆

PREM IA ALIVE OMG i knew it but you will do this in this part i wasnt expecting this from you😆😆.thanks jaz🤗 i always tell my readers...expect the unexpected 😉

3 bro are so sweet they wanna fullfill their sis wish but what happened😆 preet want his dulhan on anycost.😃.but i am confused why maya didnt recognis him😕.or she was not beleiving on her eyes😆 she didnt recognize him fully because she only saw him a handful of times...she knew he looked familiar but she wasnt sure why 😛

.waiting for next part eagrly dear.cant wait to read their proper meeting after so many years.😉

but again awesomm lovely part.👏👏 thanks luv...im glad that you enjoyed it 😳

continue ASAP plzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
omg awesome update
love the way u describe it
Prem is back yay
thankz for pm

Originally posted by: nadia.s

Hey!

Whoa!!!Looks like somebody is back with a bang! (You and Prem)

Awesome update. My wish finally came true. lol...glad that you liked it 😃

Seriously, how come nobody manage to recognise Prem? Except Heer of course, I am sure she can make out even with her eyes closed. I guess I'll have to wait (patiently) for the next update to find out more. I totally love Prem's entry, talking to his favourites,(Meher and Veera) and straight away put the sindoor on Heer. Wah! Kya style hai!! lmao...ok...so Maya has only seen Prem a handful of times over the course of a few years 7yrs ago...so she wasnt sure who he was...as for Ballu and the brothers...they have seen him only twice so they didnt know Preet was Prem...hope it makes sense...😆

Another thing I can't wait for is Bauji's reaction when he finds out that Preet is actually Prem!! So much for killing him!! Lol oh...bauji wont be a happy camper...ill tell you that much 😉

Its nice to see that Heer forgave her brothers. It was really sweet of her to want to tie them Rakhi after all these years. Very touching. Now I'm sure if anyone were to object Prem marrying Heer, Heer's brothers will support their beloved sister. *Fingers crossed* no worries on the marriage objection...heer's got her entire family on her side...besides Ballu but no one care for him 😃

continue soon

Nadia

P.S. How's the hand? Hope its fully recovered. hand is good yaar thanks so much for asking 🤗...just have some scars that refuse to go away

Originally posted by: -fsn-

reserved *promoise i'll edit this*
edited
hey jaz
firstly i m realy sorry for not editing my spots dont remember how many times.
i always forget sorry *kaan pakding* lol...hota hai...ill excuse you...😆
*back to update*awesomeeeeeeeee update
oh maan brithers were not evil oh i curse them alot
main culprit is heer's dad.but her brothers can atleast try to save prem but whatever
flashback where heer was with her brothers was really awesome
it shows soo cute love bond.really adorable.i wish i also have one elder bro.but nevermind.
it was really great that maan bro's stand for heer.
preet is prem 😕 .soooo happy prem is backkkkkkkk im so glad that you enjoyed reading the flashbacks in this update...i wanted to show the relationship that they once shared...so that people could appreciate the importance of the relationship being repaired 😳😳😳
really cant wait to read next
update asap.
luv
Fatima
p.s:its my first ever long comment on any update.& i think its my 2nd unreserved comment on this ss 😳 lol...2/8... he he...its kool...thanks for the looooong comment 😃

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

OMG Awesome Update

*speechless*

too good

I am dancing around my house in happiniess!!!

OMg Prem is alive I knew it!!!!!

I hope this time Balraaj doesn't create any problem or I am gonna come and shoot him!!! lol

please continue asap

thanks for the pm

pm me

Originally posted by: yasu09

OH My RABZ..............*doing the balle balle dance.........* ha ha...you sound like DJ#2...lmao...that lady was funny!!

ok calm myself.......deep breaths................... yes...the last thing we need is you passing out

Firstly ....Heer throwing up on her bully...........hilarious..........🤣

Secondly..........all the brother-sister bonding scenes were amazing.......... glad that you liked the bonding...i wanted to add some bhai-behen love cuz so far all you've seen is the hate and anger 😳😳😳

BUT most impoetantly.................i knew it.............i just freaking knew it.........Prem is alive................his ALIVE..............*ok i sound just like Dr Frankeinstein...........😆* ha ha 😆😆

Jaz this was a PHabulous, PHantastic and PHawesome chapter.......each and everyword was truly captivating......... good...glad that i kept you hooked 😉😉

I am so glad Prem came back to reclaim Heer............. of course...usse toh aana hi tha...just took him a little while...thats all 😛

Can't wait for the next update...........
Can't wait for Balraj's and the brothers reactions.............. aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😃

But most importantly..............can't wait for premeer romance scenes...........after all they do have alot of time to make up for..........😉 ha ha...what if i told you that story was over and there was no romance? taab kya karti? 😛

Originally posted by: fungrl

Jazz i take back all of my Jallad comments......

Will post my POV soon....Thanks you are awesome

Originally posted by: NIMMY

awesome update