New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 48

Originally posted by: curledup

Oh all my tapah has come true all those wishes and dreams
thank thank thank you
and I will come back just as I finish off a essay! I am soooooo sooooo soooooo soooooo sooooo happy!

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Hey Jaz hi luv! 😃
you made my day yaar I am so over whelmed with the update I apologixe for not commenting or giving my condolenses I was stuck in the hospital my slef so sorry but I hope you are feeling alot better than omg...how are you feeling now yaar...no worries on the comment...the longer you all take the more time i have to actually get the update done 😆😆😆

before and this update was amazing like always Prem agaya!

huzzah!

perfect eid present

take care
-aashifa-

ps: sorry if my comment is short but my stiches really hurt! yaar...i appreciate that you came even with all tha thas been going on...eeks...hope you are doing much better now...glad that you enjoyed the update 😳

-aashifa-

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Hey there Jaz once again I know....editing again! lol...back...good good...that means you are feeling better 😃
well the exhilaration of Prem coming back O-M-B-F-C (not really sure what ombfc means...clarify please 😆)
have you realised I say seriously a lot when I comment on your FF most of all I am pretty sure you noticed.......hmmmm so so so Prem Prem Prem.......you did not do an ekta on us but still brang back our Prem from the dead off course he was never really dead was he? 😆 😉, and I was thinking all along that our bechari heer would have to live in widow form for the rest of her life! ya...ekta is illogical...Prem never died and everything is explained in the next chapter...no people burning to death and then reappearing or anything like that 😆😆😆...i try to keep my stuff as logical as possible...😉😉😉
You woulden't suppose prem realised that she is complete white with nothing adourning her would you? and most importantly the fact that the brothers still have no clue who he is apart from the fact that he is rich! saab kuch samaj mein aajayega aagli part mein 😉
O-M-B-F-C (again still lost 😕) I just realised.......he was building up his name and money so he could be recognised world wide then he would have to propose to the Maans....Prem Business ishtyle which I must say is soooo 😍 and then Prem would show Heer the Preet Mehta face she would recognise and la la land once again returns! 🤣 "la la land once again returns"...omg...thats too hilarious!! 😆😆😆....but ya...you are right...thats pretty much the plan...you'll see it in the next part 😉
well well well isn't this great but would the brothers come and slay him this time for sure and what will the father do argghh! update fast fast fast

have you realised that I am saying things three times?! yes...i did realize that...😆

take care
-aashifa-

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi jaz

How are you? If you enjoy my comment, then even I enjoy reading your reply to my comment, and that is what compels me to write about more such long comments for you.😃 im good yaar...tu bata...tu kaisa hai? yes...bring on the long comments...love them!! 😳😳

Hey jaz I think you are determined to erase my hatred for mann brothers. Well you succeeded in lessoning a lot, but it wouldn't have been completely erased until and unless they rectify their mistake, i.e. making prem come back in her life. I liked the way her brothers are supporting her, but still no way my hatred for them in finished completely for them jaz bcos they could still saved prem. Heer is right jaz that it was a mistake it could have been rectified, they still could have saved prem. I liked the way her bhabhis confronted mann brothers for hurting heer. haila...abhi abhi tum naraaz ho with the Maan brothers...lol...someone holds a grudge 😆😆😆 haq hai bhai...so im not complaining 😉😉...i think you havent read the full thing yet have you 😆

Ok now to the flashback, the way heer entered in the room, without waiting him to reply though first asking him innocently, I remembered doing that in my childhood days. Even I have a elder brother and he is eight years elder to me. And this flashback reminded me of my sweet moments with him, I read it all with a smile on my face. oh ho pehle heer ne bataya nahi, aur jab bataya toh rishab ke kaan ke pharde phat diye😆, I loved their sweets moments together. I loved the way Harman and nihal questioned first rishab why is she crying and then how to get the answer to this question themselves 😆, it was too good. Achha heer liked to terrorize a second grade girl, wow an idea heer ji😆 th rishab mein abhishek bachnan ka bhoot aa gaya tha ki duniya mein do tarah ke log vaali line bol raha hia😆I wish that day they supported her, and not had killed prem*sigh* Vaise heer awesome way to solve this problem, to throw up on the gal who is bothering you😆, loved it jaz. aww...im glad that you were reminded of your sweet time with you brother...that is awesome!! 😃😃😃...lmao...when did Abhi say those lines...i swear i cant remember but i knew it sounded familiar...😆😆😆...

Jaz you described heer's feelings perfectly, how she didn't forgive them fully bcos of one moment she lost everything in her life, but still they were not fully blamed for it. She is right about her brothers now, it is gud that now she is thinking looking forward to her future. The moment heer said bhaiya, it was as like a miracle they all are witnessing, so they all left what they were doing and came rushing out, jaz liked the way your are describing their feelings and emotions. The way was a bit skeptical how to address her brothers after so long, this depicted how much she felt for them. nice that she now decided to tie them rakhi revealing that she has totally forgiven them from her heart.i thought it was important to show how torn she was...it wasnt their fault entirely but still...how could she forgive the people who in all senses murdered her husband..aaisa toh nahin hota naa 😭...i think its beautiful in the indian/bengali and most languages how you respect all those that are older than you...i think we have wonderful terms for our family members...and Bhaia is one of them...its important so i emphasized it 😳😳😳

Also liked the way veera's bhabhi teased her. Good that mann brothers thought what is right for their sis future and trying to make preet say no to the deal and marriage. Good that they really care for their sister's happiness now. aab bata...do you forgive them now? 😉

I was laughing out loud, when heer blurted out that she wanted to talk about love to her brothers, and ya heer you are quite quick in coming up with lies😉 heer's love was actually strong bcos she was there not when he was alive but also stood for him when he died. Rishab words were so true and love stays with your forever, and even death can win over it. But it was a bit of shocking to get those lines from her brothers😆, ok jaz I don't hate them so much, but still 1% hatred is still left. If only they would have not behaved irrationally, today prem would be alive with heer. bechari aur kya karti...she couldnt say that she thought she was in love with a boy....they'd freak out for sure 😆😆😆...even i was shocked that i came up with those lines...after i finished i was like wait...did i write those? 😛😛...still hatred...lets see if we can resolve that 😳

I liked the way mann brothers fought with preet for their sister. And I bit shocked about preet, what does he mean he waited all this long for it, and he just want heer and no money. This is very confusing you know. I liked the conversation between veera and bhabhi, this relationship has its charm too, nahi jaz? lol...confusion thodi dehr main gayab hojayega...dont worry...you'll be doing a happy dance...😛😛 and yes...bhabi's are the best...i've got wonderful bhabis...maya is based off of my best bhabi...just love her to bits...more like a sister!! 😳😳😳

One second, what you intend to say when preet said that preet aur prem ek hue na. I can't believe it, jaz I am gonna kill you😆, I love you so much, preet is prem wow. I love your for this, I always wanted preet to be prem but when last time you described his background then I felt he is never going to come back. I love your for this update, atlast our prem is back in the life of heer. He never had forgotten her for a second. Wow I love you gain, I know I am saying that again and again, but I am sooooooooooo glad that you made him come back. Ok now that 1% hatred is finished for mann brothers bcos you no matter our prem is back. Whoopee😃, the way he entered back was soooooo gud. But I am a bit angry for mann brother it is bcos of them that premeer had to stay away from each other for so long. I loved your update jaz. It was soooooooooooooo good. aab hua naa confusion door...i told you...he he...the background was all for fooling you guys and the Maan's...he he 😉😉😉...im evil...i know 😈 i love it! 😛😛😛...what can i say...i love torturing you all 😛 *running away*...lol...good...i was determined to make your hatred for the maan brother go away...im glad it did...lol....ill take a bit of anger over hatred any day

Thanks a lot jaz, I am so happy that prem is alive and he is back in the life of heer as her husband. And ya this thing also brightens my hope for Heer's secret, even there prem will get back his love.😉 see you expected a long update from me. I guess I have not disappointed you, I have not never replied with such long comment uptil now. But thanx to you, it was required as it is such special moment in your ss. Loved this update, you know how serious I am right now saying them. waiting eagerly for the next. lol...Heer's Secret is a whole different story...even for that one...you wont know what hit you when things begins to finally get serious 😉😉😉...i've gotta update that one too...lol....next part will be up soon 😳😳

Take care

Sia

P.S. I was writing this reply while reading the update side by side. i could sense that you were reading and commenting because of the reactions you were giving me 😆😆 but i like it better that way 😉

Originally posted by: aati1429

well lovely part finally preet is prem.. just loved it as loneliness of heer was really sad

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

OMG!!!!!! Im sooooooooo happy!!!
finally PREM is back!! i had a feeling tht preet was prem, nd tht happened!!! omg u cnnot believe hw happy i am, lol yes yes yes...he is back...glad that you enjoyed that fact 😃
awesome update,
totally luved the 2 flashbacks of heer and her brothers bonding, it was very sweet, esp the meanin of love one, lol
nd really nice to see heer nd her bros bak together, nd her bros doin something fr her, totally cute
finally I am really glad tht prem is bak!!! soooooo happy 😃 everyone is happy with Prems return...lol...i knew id get this kind of reactions....😉😉😉

lol, neways i so totally cnt wait fr more
so plz continue soon next part up soon 😉

Originally posted by: *I Heena I*

OMGG..i knew i knew it ..it had to be Preet Mehta....omg hs back...loved the update it was very nice to read after sucha long time ..can't wait to read the next part...and hope your feeling better after the accident and had a nice eid

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

IM JUMPING IN MY SEAT!!!

JAZ i totally LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV u for this!!!

I just knew i knew it!!!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

He filled her mang awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

YAYYYYYYYYYYY....LOVED ITTTTTTT

Update soonnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

-Luv Pari

Originally posted by: kamx2

OMYGOSH!!!...

*rubs eyes*

OMYGAWWWD!!!...

*runs off to read the whole part again...* omg...really...twice 😲😲

Will be back...hopefully...unless I have suffered a black out thanks to the update... lol...you are too funny 😆

*edit*

I hate their dad...he doesnt even deserve to be called their father..🤢😡

He didnt even care abt his wife, let alone his kids' futures!

Those flashbacks were just...THE cutest thing on earth! The love the 3 brothers have for Heer is jsust the sweetest thing on earth man...I have always wished I had an elder brother, and the way u wrote this part just made me want an elder brother even worse!😕 It just goes to show how well u write and how well u express relationships in words...yaar ur jst tooo good!👏👏👏 ya...Balraj is one for the record books...even Lallu wasnt this evil when he didnt accept Premeer's relationship...this Balraj is in a category all on his own 😡...glad that you enjoyed the flashbacks...and im with you on wanting the older brother...unfortunately...i've got a younger one......give new meaning to "pain in the butt" 😡

The whole office scene was absolutely awesome....especially how the 3 brothers tried to stand up for Heer👏

And the Preet-Preeti scene was damn adorable!

Lekin, Preeti ke saamne toh khud ka naam Prem bata hi sakta tha😕 bata sakta tha but then you'd feel less of an impact naa... 😉

YAYYYYY!!! I sooooo LOVE u for this!

PRem is backkkkk!

OMG...the way u wrote it was just....FANTABULOUS!!!

And its sad that Maya didn't recognize him, but it was sooo cute what he said about the ashirwad...she should hav remembereddd!!! she did remember Prem after the hug and the chuha moment...she just couldnt place his face thats all...😳😳

Veera recognized him!!! Love her lol

Heer saw him! 😃He filled her maang!😳😳...and she fainted

Well, i guess its normal for Heer to be so shocked that she'd fall unconscious, but why'd u stop right there!😡

Now update soon!!! I CANT waittttt😉 glad that you enjoyed my update...next part will be up soon 😳

Kamal

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Nice loved it..............Thanx for the pm............waiting for next one..........😊

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey jaz!! how are you?? i was thinking of reading dis ff for quite sum while but always got lazy! 😆😆 wat? em too much in love wid heer's scecret to pay attention to anything else! 😛😉 anyway i finaly read the first and second chapter oni to find out tht prem is dead😭 but then i opened up the latest update and found out much to my pleasure tht he is alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can i get any more happier??? especially after the discovery tht today we are going to have a shirtless prem and bed roll! ☺️ cant wait to read more n will continue readin from chap 3 now to make sense of wat is happening 😆😆 lol...that is cheating...stop readin after two update and then read the last one when all the suspense is over...so not cool...*hmph*... 😉😉😉

i love u for making him alive!!! 🤗🤗🤗

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alright so i went through all the parts! man were they long or what!😲 how can u write such long updates? i thought we couldnt post tht long 😆 anyway coming to the ff.... its mindblowing dear!! 👍🏼 a very different story for ur other fanfictions and em loving it! lol...what can i say...once i get started...i tend to get carried away 😳....

u know for the first time an ff moved me to tears... em serious i cant believe it myself tht i actually cried while reading it so 👍🏼 to u for writing it so spectacularly! and u may think tht it was wen prem was beaten by his brothers but no i got teary wen i read heer and veera's part where veera told Heer that she wont love anyone again coz 7 years ago at tht night she had seen her sister cry for her love and beg her brothers... tht thing really moved me as i imagined a newly wedded gril slumped on to the floor of her house begging her brothers to let her go... i cried for the girl who got married and widowed on the same night!😭 everything was fabulously written jaz!👏 thanks yaar...im glad that you enjoyed that emotional part...veera was so annoying on the show...i just had to give her a heart in this story 😆😆😆...what can i say...😳😳😳 i really liked the way u told the story how Heer used to the first one in the house to wish her mother but wen prem died every emotion and feeling died with him only and she only remembered one thing of that dreaded day... her husbands death... tht point was too good! ⭐️⭐️ another thing i liked was the way you related normal things to Prem like gajar ka halwa and mouse😆 tht was too cute! i loved maya and Prem's relationship.. it was sweet although it was hard to imagine maya being so nice but i loved it! the difference between the old Heer and the new Heer had to be highlighted...just so that everyone could see what it means to lose the one person you love the most in the world...and what i means to see the "killers" in front of your eyes every day...

as for the other parts i really liked the bit abt the girls spying on veera and manmeet from the window while eating pakoras and shooting daggers at their husbands and accusing them of not trusting veera wen they themselves were doing the same thing!😆 poor manmeet! he was so embarrassed! 😳lol...that spying bit comes a bit from my real life...ask my friends...i spy on them all the time...they have no privacy 😉😉😉


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i hate the brothers for leaving prem there but the reason was good enough as they were helpless and balraj!😡 i feel like cutting him up into little pieces and throwing him out to the eagles!!😡 hes sucha moron! urgh! do such fathers actually exist??? such coldness!🤢 sheesh! he he...hating the brothers huh...i know the feeling...and dont get me started on that waste of space Balraj! 🤢

i really liked prem's entry but still confused of the father will thing and deal as if i remember correctly he died wen prem was young or did he leave prem? i really dont remember😆 but there was one teeny tiny thing tht i didnt like😳 i didnt like the part wen prem rushed abd said "Apni dulhan lene jaraha hoon" i dunt know but it didnt feel right to me😕 pls dunt hate me for this em just being honest wid u😳😳😳 else other than tht i loved the last update in which he went to Heer's house and met preeti ( tht child is cute) and and the revemations tht follwed with maya and veera were lovely! but the best of all was the part abt heer😳so the brothers "killed" prem or so they thought...who he was saved will all be explained in the next update....hang in there...it will all make sense...i hope 😳...why didnt you like it when Prem rushed off to get Heer? most people were frantic over that part 😕

it was so magical the way she stepped down the banister her eyes failing to see anyone else except the person in front of her... her words dying away in her throat as her heart tried to believe wat she was actually seeing... and then the way prem quietly filled her mang not saying anything... erasing the life of a widow tht she had been living and marking her once again after 7 long years his wife😍 😍 tht took my breath away 😍 and loads of hugs to u as it couldnt have been better!!! i loved loved loved it!😃 i really cant wait to read more u do continue soon dear! take care im glad that you enjoyed Premeer reunion...aage aage dekho hota hai kya

love

hiba

p.s: whoa tht got too long didnt it?? well as long ur happy em okay wid it as u said long updates so y nt long comments?😉 i did my bit!😛i love...LOVE you logic...the longer the better...🤗

Originally posted by: kb_war

it is just awesum............eagerly .waiting for nxt part!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it immenselyyyyyyyyy now waitingggg eagerlyyyyyyy for next part asap.

Originally posted by: brainychild92

YES ES YES YES YES YES YES1!!!! I KNEW IT.. i didnt have time to tell u but i reread this fanifc a bazillion times trying to undertand.. and when he said " "Kyun ke paisa hi aap logoon ke liyeh saab kuch hai. Kyun ke mujhe yeh status aur paisa saab aap logoon ke muh pe marna tha. Kyun ke iss mauke ke liyeh maine saloon intezaar kiya hai."i was like O YA IM RITEE!! lmao...*sigh*...you have time to read it a bazillion times but not for a comment 😕😕😕...lol...j/k...glad that you enjoyed the update 😃😃😃...thats all that matters 😃😃...

also the preet means prem.. i was like omg maybe prem is back1! u have to continuee sooon!! sorry for delay...but next part up soon

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

👏
Jaz no more BRING PREM BACK! now its PREM IS BACK PREM IS BACK PREM IS BACK
Thanks for this Jaz!
It was the first update in Tanhani wherein i'vent cried!!
Jaz the update was fabulous, amazing, phantabulous and beautifully written!!! the description of feelings and emotions very well taken care of!!! Great Job 👏 👏
I must say Jaz you are a fine writer and i love your writings
I know the fact that Maya should have recognized Prem but she didn't...don't mind it as if Heer said he is Prem then he is Prem 😊
Loved siblings unite and finally all misunderstanding between Heer and her brothers is cleared
can't wait to read the next update
waiting Jaz

Originally posted by: Pachu.P

Jazuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...........i MADE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aren't you proud babes? That i actually read ALL parts in like w/in 24hours!! 😃 FINALLY patches tu aagayi!! *woo hoo* im so proud of you...*happy tears* 😭

OMG..first thing first..i LUV this FF of yours!! Woot woot!! Love each and every character..especially the relationship that Heer shares w/her 3 bhabhis...Kuljeet, Maya, and Meher!! Actually a bit weird to imagine Meher as Heer's bhabhi..but for this FF..i'll chalao-ing it!!! 😉love karte ho issi liyeh you took forever to come...*sigh*...but you are forgiven...with your crazy...and i mean CRAZY schedule...tauba... i feel for you jaani *hug*

OMG...Prem dies?? OMG OMG OMG...why why why why why?? OMG OMG..why the torture babes?? Poor Heer, had to live w/out her Prem for 7 years!! Whoaaaa!! That's just plain torture for her!! And worst of all, her brothers "accidentally" kill Prem...now tell me, how do u accidentally kill someone...not cool...super not cool!! aare yaar...whats wht the drama...uff...drama queen much...😆😆😆...lol/....but you know naa what is going to happen...haila...random thought...your text is pink and tomorrow is bhabis' baby shower...and i told you naa...its a GIRL!! 😃😃

This father is such a *****...i swear dude...if i was in place of one of the brothers..i'd have murdered him rather than go after poor Prem!! Felt sooooooo sorry for him when he died!! 😭 ....bechara..the only fault was that he was not filthy rich like the dad!! Grrrrrrrrrrr.......... uss budha ka toh naam hi maat loh...iim planning on killing him as we speak...kuch toh karna padega iss ullu ka! 🤬

Okkk..one thing i dont get...I am sure when Prem got killed, Dad was there watching the whole thing..didn't he know how Prem looked like..b/c when the Dad and Bro's saw Preet, couldn't they be like "shocked" for few mins b/c the face resembles Prem...?? Or does it NOT resemble Prem? If not, then how does Veera figure out that its Prem and Heer as well? Confusing babes..but am sure, this confusion will be cleared in the next update...😉 Prem is still the same Prem but wiht facial hair...hey...if by putting on a stupid eye mask clark kent can turn into super man...then prem and be preet 😆😆😆...but the guys only saw him that one time...veera saw him every time he came to see heer when they were dating 😉😉 aab samaj mein aaya? 😛

Loved it..especially the flashbacks..they were super cute..especially the one's between Prem and Heer...awww..bachpan ka pyaaar...tooo cute yaar! And Prem as a kid was too cute..i can actually picture that..hehe!! i love the flash backs too...*blush*...just awesome 😳😳

Okkk..since i commented..i hope its LAMBAAAA...if not, maaf karde!! I tried...seriously...i tried!! 😳 ...aur woh bhi..sirf tere liye!! ❤️ wah wah...im so proud...this has to be your longes comment ever!! oooh...guli is gonna be so jealous!!! 😉😉😉...thats what she gets for going off and getting married without us 😆😆

Aaabbb chal...tu give an update to us now...😃 woh bhi me expecting it lambaaaa 😊...yeshhhh yeshhh..me luv u too! ❤️ update this weekend for sure...its your xmas gift naa...

Lubbbb u....Patches❤️ love you too jaani!!!

Originally posted by: nsa4657

JAZ!!!! 🤗 hello! =] naazu!! omg...so good to get back in touch luv!! 😃
im finally here to comment ahaha..
i'll try to make this long!! dont be saddened if it was as long as you expected!
anyways lets begin!!
the prologue was an awesome intro for your story!! its soo cute how you mention so many details.. like them spending all their firsts together and how he stood up for her..sigh thats soo sweet!! 👍🏼
but then when the rain was gonna come and wash away their happiness...mera dil hi..💔😭 haila...*kaan pakering* for breaking your heart 😭😭...bad jaz bad jaz!!!

now to the first part...
first part mein hi you killed him...=[
kya yaaaaaar?? sorry...had to be done 😉
haha but as you requested..i wont come after you with a belan! cause i love you ahah.. 😳
but i liked how you wrote that heer was the only one who remembered her moms birthday and everyone else forgot including the dad and brothers ahah that was funny..boys always try to make excuses!! 😔
the relationship maya and heer share i think is a very big plus for both of them!! good job! =]

SAGAAI?!?!?!? GASP.. wat were they thinking?!?!?!
i agree..they should've atleast asked her whether she wanted to get engaged..i mean come on...its her life... =|
awesome you sent maya to console her!! 👍🏼
even after she comes back down four hours later..they are going on with the planning?? thats a big no no! =[
awwww he slapped her! 😭
OH YEA!! prem has arrived!!
..but hes not gonna be here for long! thanks... =[
so touching how instead of bua she will be masi! very cute yaar! =D
they get married yay!! 👏
then he dies...not yay!! 😭
her brothers are horrible..how could they do that!! heart breaking yaar!!
happy 7th wedding anniversary!..bechari ko vidwa bana di!
danng dude that was a loong part not gonna lie ahah i had the most toughest time doing the first part...i had to make sure that everything was done perfectly and to make sure i got all the information in there...*phew*...it took me a while...lots of editing...but finally got it done 😳

okay part 2
the flashback was really cute.
how he was apologizing for hitting her and then they got into a convo and were holding hands and yea.. awwwww
it was soo innocent when she was like you make decisions without asking also just like my brothers. that was adorable when she said that aha
19 and sagaai...dang thats young but atleast they like eachother! 👍🏼
so sweet heer helped make the ghajar ka halwa for her boy!! nice one!
and the boy-friend bit..that was very innocent and cute response she gave.
rofl i love how veera tells people to help and she doesnt but ends up getting her self into it!! 😆
the lil kids are sooooooooo adorable ahahah!! this whole ff is based on flashbacks...i had to get Prem in there somehow naa...vaise pehlese everyone is mad at me for killing him...i had to give them something...or else...haila...my life would have been in danger 😳😳😳

part 3
it was thoughtful of heer to stand up for her sister and make sure she was content with was happening and things werent going against her wishes!

the sisters had a heart to heart convo again that was great!
love how kulraj uses the pregnancy to its advantages!! smart! hehe

everyone ends up in the same room to spy on their sister...as in all the guys ..but the girls were already there so yea..

i love the song its a love story!! very nice taste you there !! =]
okay that laksh boy was totally flirting with her!!... but got scared when he found out who her brothers were..daar puk

like how prem stuffed two fires in his mouth as he asked heer what was wrong!! 😉

shes happy that he claims to be her boyfriend but gets mad that he made the decision without asking!! thats hilarious..
but when they make it official and talk about going a date thats cute!

rofl when she tells maya about the date and maya is saying all the stuff and hits her head..that was very funny! 😆 ok so that "fires" thing no one else caught...lol...but our Prem is super hot...two fries toh kuch bhi nahin hai uske paas 😆😆😆...but tauba...just imagine youself in Heer's shoes...three older brothers who are notorious in your town...ek dhang ka ladka nahin milta ...but then again...if you have Prem...what else do you need!!! 😳😳😳

part 4

hahaha veera is stressin over what to wear!!
it was a good change for heer to get out of the house and go shopping..

the story maya made to go to her dads place and take heer along with her was GENIUS!!!! 👏👏

the pics that were provided were nice and the song was nice too...good idea to give us those! =] 🤗

very nice premeer scene you wrote!! props!

the convo heer had with the dadi...was touchingly sad yaar...made her think of everything during something she was supposed to try to enjoy just like every girl...Veera too has nothing to wear...i have realized that everytime somethin big is coming up...i go by myself something new...usually a dress...and then...i never wear that dress again 😕😕...so now my closet is getting piled up with dresses...nice dresses too...i think im just gonna have to start wearing them around the house 😆😆😆...j/k...sort of...lol...glad you liked the Premeer scenes 😳

part 5

nice veera and heer scene again...but it was an emotional one...veera saying sorry for being happy! 😭

loved how heer told her about her life with prem and how she would never trade a moment for anything

the chuhua bit was very sweet but painful but nice

preeti was scared
but prem was the chuhua in the flash back and how he wanted the ladoos i thought was cute and funny but the fact that hes not there anymore is saddening!

im proud that heer told her brothers that just by asking for forgiveness wont change the past and wont bring back prem!

the mehndi part was nice...her color would come dark only na...prem itna pyar jo karta hai! hehe

yeh preet mehta ka kya chakar hai?!?!!??! aare yaar...aaga aage pado...to find out what the Preet Mehta chakar is 😉😉😉...and you know your jaz naa...im nothing if not suspenseful...😆...anywho...i loved that chuha bit too...dont know where that came from...but it did...glad that you enjoyed it too 😳😳


welll jaz!!! i got to say you are an awesome writer!! so many ideas and a very unique story line!! i like!! ahah i hope this comment was long enough for you hehe...sorry i like summarized like the five parts but yea..they were awesome..now i must continue and end my suspense and find out what happens in part six!! 😉😃
FANTASTIC STORY YOU HAVE STARTED!!! its interesting and all the flashbacks are amazing!!!! hella good writer!! =]]🤗
looooove you ahah ..i cant really say continue soon cause im not caught up yet but to help the others out ill say it anyways!! waiting for your update!! ahah hurrrrry jk jk!!
i think im done with this comment!!hehe
i feel like i gave everyone a recap of the first five parts aha!!
love you =] 🤗 me totally waiting for the comment on the remaining 3 parts...kaab comment deh rahi ho? 😉😉😉

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🤣.... actually, i dont even know what benefit this would give me since i already am so awfully late, and probably last to comment!! 😔 you will be happy to know...you are not last...nor have you ever been now that i think about it 😃😃

jazu, i feel like puking all of a sudden!! what do u mean u wont update unless everyone unreserves?? 😔.... i felt sick when i read that already!! arre, not loyal fans' fault if things slip out of mind!! u cannot punish us!! *pouts*... oh as if i am so loyal and on time... *rolls eyes* .. 🤣 i loved doing this because EVERYONE had to unreserved their comments...and the did...im amazed...im going to be doing this from now on 😉 *running away*
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ok, just to tell u, umm, this is my whole comment..... 🤣.... just so if i forget, others and i (😉) wont be deprived of a next update!! u'll be nice enough no? *cheeky smile*.... nice try...but i didnt buy this 😛

ok, if i will be back... in probably a week? but feel free to update ok? 😆... and uhhh, claim that i am extremely annoying!! 🤣 you were back on time...it was me who was delayed 😆

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ok, i normally wouldnt have some back so fast to write a note, but u knew i couldnt help it, didnt you???

😲... this emo is just nothing even close to my first reaction... nothing close... i was reading, slowly... u know, taking in each and every sentence... till the point where 'preet' says that he has waited for years... i could hardly breathe... not coz i never expected it, but i thought it wouldnt be so soon... i thought u'd torture me more... 🤣 lmao...ha ha...i figured i had tortured you all enough...i was truly getting afraid for my life...i knew that people were taking Prems death too well...someone was about to break

after that, i was totally breathing in long deep ones... i felt my herat beat louder... literally!! i am not even kidding jazu... preeti and his convo was just when i thought i'd lose it officially, but when he said, "preet matlab prem" i stopped reading... i just went to get some water to calm my self...🤣.... *sigh*.... i knew this was bound to happen... i KNEW he was alive!! 😛... who better knows that than u?? 😆... u knew how dedicated i was to the fact that if heer is breathing his heart is beating.... hah!! ha ha...i know...you were a strong and adent fan...was it you that said that before...the hole heart beating thingy...if it was you...you are in for a surprise in the next update 😉😉 i am sooo relieved i didnt have to open that andolan, or wait till the sequel!! 🤣.... i made it easier for urself not to get attacked by belans... .... 🤣..... u totally made my day.... i felt even more happier than heer... ok, maybe not, but still.... u can so tell how i am feeling no?? i think i have a pretty good idea 😛 i bet when u even start reading this comment, u'd have guessed my reaction... because i prepared myself for this.... it was bound to happen... i so knew it!! i think that accident cured ur preet-heer obssesed brain!! 🤣..... kidding yaar, but uhh, i know i am taking advantages for selfish needs, but would u mind... umm, telling me if it cured ur brain in regard to heer's secret?? *pleading muh*... my bechara prem.... ooh, just to tell u, i updated my commment.. *really proud muh*... only sau dard left.... lmao...tauba...meri accident ka mazaak uda rahe ho...not cool yaar so not cool...i still miss my car 😭😭...i want it back...forget a new one..i want my old one!! 😳😳...lmao...i am not preet and heer obssessed...im simply a fan of things that are sort of hatke! 😉...as for Heer's Secret...no comment (as usual 😆) you have to stay tuned 😛

p.s. ooh, how can i forget to tell u how much i love u after this update?? hehe, mere emotional drama, and dhamkis ka kuch toh asar hua!! i know u planned the story before hand, but i would love to take credit none the less... dont u dare deprive me of that!! 😡.... 🤣 lmao...of course...all credit is yours...did i already plan the preet=prem from the prologue...no way...you are the master mind...😆😆

p.s.s. ooh, but darn, now i have to make an andolan for ppl who have not unreserve yet to do it as soon as possible, warna we will all suffer.... .... no worries.... 😉 main hoon na?? 😎... aur yeh maat kehna iski ka dar tha.... 🤣 lmao...i've heard that people were harassed by PM's to update comments...what that you? 😆😆

*reserved*.... and u bet i'd be back earlier than expected.... i am dying to comment on detail about 'preet'... and ^^ was NOT detailed!!! 🤣..... oh i know that was not detailed...that was just the tip of the ice berg 😆

p.s. (how many p.s. do i have?? ).... see, this is why i loved preet from the very begginging, prem's essence was in him... 😳..... 🤣 why do i find it hard to believe that YOU LIKED PREET

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ok, so i was just reading all the crap i wrote on top.... just ignore the stuff on top of ^^ line... i have totally lost it! really! that was sooo stooopid... my comment, and everything... uff, ... i was high, on many things including ice-cream whiipped with sundae, and my premu's return!! i seriously have no clue what got into me... i was drunk.. literally!!! *shakes head*... chalo, ignore that crap, and this is my real comment, and for the first time, i am actually writing the whole comment at once!! 😆 omg...i want some ice cream...but no...i was bad yesterday and had cake...im supposed to be staying away from sweets and carbs...we are doing a weight loss competition...there is $150 and a free lunch at stake...i wanna win!! he he...

umm... *ahem ahem*... just to inform u... i have no clue of what happened, coz i am commenting as i read- AGAIN!! ...i suppose i am pretending that way... tell me if ur convinced ok? or if my happiness 'shows and glows'... 🤣.... i think i have literally lost it!! lmao..."shows and glows"...where did you get that 😆

ok, fistly, now that i read ur response to me, i am soo 🤣... i are soo much a better actress than heer arent u?? let me quote all that u said to me.. (keep in mind, that is only to me!! 🤣 cant imagine what u said to others... *shakes head*) so here goes!! "i are soo mu ch a better actress than heer arent u??" that line had me a bit confused...clarify pls 😉

- dont knwo why you are laughing because Prem is dead 😃sure jaz, undoubtedly... .... 🤣

- i'll say one thing...the connection between Prem and Preeti...is undeniable!! 😉... woh toh main nahin janti!! *shakes head innocently*... i have not even read the update yet!! 🤣 lmao...i pretty much based the entire update on that one encounter...that one line came to mind first and i just king of went with it...😉

- lekin kya karein...Prem bangaya Balraj ki lalach ki shikar! 🤢... ok this made me rofl real hard and loud... poor poor prem, haina jaz?? 😉

- "WHEN" prem comes back...dont you mean "IF" 😆...you too are not letting this idea of zombie Prem go...uff...kya hoga tum saab ka?! 😕.... i am sure i mean 'WHEN'.... 🤣and haan yaar, kya hoga hum sab ka? 😆.... it's not zombie prem jaz, it's preet!! u should know ur character's name! 🤣... ok, i will stop...

- she is by herself...NOTHING can change that...not eve me! 😉.... surely u wont change.... 😆 u better not, warna achcha nahin hoga!! 😡.... i know u love prem too much to make him sad, that's why we love u... 😳.... maska!! achcha tha na??😆

ok, so here goes the real comment... i know u already had enough but i am just getting started... 😆 bring it yaar...bring it...cant wait 😃

i juat wanna give heer a huge hug, poor poor girl.. the person she had amired, loved and adore all her life, the person she probably even forgave knowing he was the one to cause her so much grief she attempted suicide... the person who is the main reason she is breathing that very moment, her own blood; her father, did all this..... and for what?? for what?? a piece of crappy paper which is coloured green?? he sacrificed toh kya? he 'donated' his daughter's life for money!! he is that sick, and not only this, if it wasnt for veera's great destiny, even she had to overcome these obstacles to be happy? and she'd have to fight against her own father for that? fathers give their lives away for a moment's happiness of their daughter, and he is ready to give their life away for his one happy moment?? so appauling for listeners, i cannot imagine the bearer... poor poor heer.... she is all alone in this terrible world... 😉 her "father" isnt even fit to be called that...there is no name that i can think of that will be good enough for him...all the curse words or insults in the world still manage to fall short for Ballu 😡😡😡....

Since Prem's death, if her brothers were the ones to tell her sky was blue, she would have called them liars. i loved this line because it totally summed up the relationship they shared in the past 7 years, even living with a lie, it was evident there was nothing called trust, forget that, even the love was gone... or atleast it was so deep in the heart that it was so very difficult to bring it to shalow waters...i kind of stole that line from my mom because she is like that...when she says one thing...its that way or the highway...doesnt matter that she is wrong...she will make herself right 😆😆😆

but the brothers, all threeof them are abolutely adorable... they are sure it was their mistake and they are even ready to admit it.. they knew they were the reasons of heer's pain suffreing, and all that had happened... if onyl they acted better, they'd have saved her 7 years.... maybe... but i believe it really wasnt their fault, they didnt do it on purpose, and that make a whole lot of difference, and waise bhi, they already suffered for so long, i think they desrve some peace.... but so easy for me to say, i am not heer, and i didnt lose someone who meant much more than life and god... i can never explain the pain, only try.. but even then it's never enough to really get what goes through u and how much there is to fight inside to finally accept ... living without thinking about it every single moment... it literally kills everything left inside you... i surely know how it feels to lose someone so special.. but the fact that i know the person is happy and alive keeps one's self going and takes in the power to be able to bear so much pain. but heer? she knew he's never be back, so there was just no hope, no purpose in life... how could she posibly forgive all that? there is a sister and a wife in her heart, how she tries to over come the latter is what makes most significance. i told you naa..maine kaha tha naa ke bhaiyoon ke kahani koi nahin jaanta...😉😉...aab bol...did you ever see that twist coming...that they werent at fault...😆😆...if you say yes you are destroying my writing ability so sooch samaj ke answer deh naa 😛😛😛..lol...life changes in an instant...its a message that was portrayed in my FF "Ek Paal"...and then again in this one 😳😳😳

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i know i am a baboon... 🤣... i just said i wont stop randomly but i did, i hope u dont read this before i get back,... 🤣... will be here as soon as i can tomm.

so i suck? *raises eye brows*.. when was that new news? .... i was about to update this ages ago, but u just know me too well by now no? i was planning on doing it tomm, but since it's ur b'day, i decided why not pay back for all the things i never updated? 😆 lmao...thanks for the b-day present 😉

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ok, so where was i? yeah, so i totally adored the flashbacks... i always do, but yeah, this one was overtly amazing... it's not because of anythign but the way you wrote it... there was wit, humour and what i loved was that you can always diffrenciate between ages, and sex... it's so cute how you write about how the boys reacted... so unlike how a big sister would, but perfect enough to convince me, even if tehy were not as sweet and composing, they loved heer no less than a sister would... i just loved teh interaction... so very realistic... not only sex vise, but also their ages.... thanks yaar...i try to get the right personality and maturity for the various ages i have going on in this story...its hard because one character is seen at so many different stages of their lives...i wasnt sure if i could pull it off...im glad that you like it 😳😳

the small warnign from rishab made me totally smiel inside out... realy... how cute and real that was... boys are so that way. no matter what others were feelign at the moment, but if the rules were broken, they'd correct you.... but apparently, they dont seem to remember such rules when tehy do the same mistakes nahin? 😉 dont even get me started on boys and their egos...had an incident with my cousin at my bhabi's baby shower yesterday...grr...😡😡...made me so mad!!!

i also loved how rishab didnt panic when he saw he crying... i loved it coz i know normally they wouldnt... 😆... he was more worried about his soccer practice than anything else, it just made it seem more realistic... boys and their sports... oh my, living with it, and look? i am hooked to that adicting thing as well... no, 😆 i dont play it, but i watch it for sure... how did i start? dont look at me, u wont find an answr.... 🤣.... eww...sports and i do not mix...i cannot stand any kind of sports...when ever the NBA playoff are on...my cousins have game parties...im usually the one on the laptop on IF or on youtube...im there for the food and my nieces/nephews 😆😆

Rishab was afraid that the girl wasn't breathing as she ranted on. 🤣.... ok, so you literally killed me with this line... how immature can one get?? 🤣... but but but jazu, that was nothing..... nothing compared to the english phase thing... i was rolling on my bed rolfing.... 🤣🤣🤣...... it was so hilarious, how they talked in this whole flashback.... omg, i dont know how much i laughed when i read it... seriously!! i loved the part where u said "it was annoying..." i can totally imagine... omg, how irritating would that be? i mean seriously, i'd have pulled all my hair off before i'd go along with such 'education'... 🤣.... i remember laughing so much, i can hardly tell you how hillarious it was... i can really go on about it... but i need to move on to the more important parts.... 😛 i actually got the idea from a book i read...it was so funny...of course i had to tailor it to our situation but when i read it i was lol-ing too...good scene naa...and i know from experience..just how ANNOYING younger siblings can be

"horrifying tale".... 🤣, what a laugh riot this flashback was... sach mein, i literally had tears in my eyes reading all that... but yeah, just harman and everyone infact, so very apt and realistic in my view... i love everythign about them... oh, and i understand english thing? do i really need to say anythign more?? 🤣... but gosh, those small gestures like wiping her nose with her brothers comforters and all that, i just feel sad i have no big bro.... 😔... it's so absolutely cute and adorable.... their interactions and the little incidents, they make so much meaning no? sighs... i just felt warmth inside... Tanhai has a lot of realtionships involved... many many of them.. and everyone i can totally relate to... it's just beautiful how you handle everythign.... (see, i am nice, since you know what is to happen? 😉.... but i dont, i havent even read further than this... *innocnet muh*... 🤣) big bros are good...most of the time...but sometimes...OMG...its like why God why?! need i explain about the ego thing again...i think now *sigh* 😭...he got so mad at me for some stupid pictures...and the thing is ...jaab mujhe gussa aata hai...mujhe rohna bhi aata hai...😭😭...i cant help it...he sort of ruined the night...but...since im the bigger person...i let it go for bhabis sake...it was her baby shower after all 😃😃😃
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funner... 🤣.... ok, i think i should stop rolfing...

"Are you kidding me?" Rishab asked exasperated. "The 'bully' is a second grader. She is no more than seven years old!"... so so so, someone had some brains in this chaos... rishab is quie samajhdar in my opinion.... 😆... but this.... "Like what? Go to school tomorrow and terrorize the kid?" this was classic... typical brother style... and i loved how heer had so easily clutched onto the idea... she knew her brothers would so easily win over some 2nd grader... 😆 ya...brothers will go and kick ass of anyone that bugs their sister...but they refuse to see the fact that 80% of the time...that person is them! 😉😉

"Mujhe pehla wala idea aachi lagi," Heer said as she twiddled her fingers. .... i probably think i am gonna die 🤣

the maan dialogue was totally rockign but how heer got the solution was even more rocking... 🤣.... i loved the puking bit... made me giggle.... i had a very similar incident... 😉... not that i would want to remember it... 😳.... (and that emo, isnt supposed to be smiling... 🤣) lmao...kya hua...bol naa...once...we were driving along pacific coast highway...i was like 6 or 7...or maybe 9 or 10...maybe 8...not really sure...but i was young 😆...and i started to get car sick cuz the roads were so twisted...i asked my Mama to stop the car...but he didnt do it in time...so i rollled the window down and puked outside...smart...right...NOPE!! since we were going pretty fast...the wind pushed the "stuff" back into the car...got all over the seats...eeks!! not a good day 🤢
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One moment of weakness – on single moment out of millions – had ruined everything. - absolutely a fabulous heart wrenching line... i love this one most in the whole update... made me stop reading for a second... really! yes, so very very true... so many moments of happiness, even more moments of pain, but just a single one can destroy everything... it had for heer... and sadly, the moment was caused by her brothers... he he...this is where you get caught...you said you loved that line most in the "whole update"...chori pakdi gayi...it shows you commented after readin the WHOLE update 😆😆...you didnt catch it did ya? 😉

about the comment on heer's beti, i am so sure she would have one soon enough... waise bhi, i know prem is alive.. i so know it!! .... you missed that line didnt you?? admit is jaz, u totally missed it.... 😆... what line? 😕

aww... *hugs all three brothers*.... poor poor boys... i know how much significance the word "bhaia" carried with it... so many years of pain and torture, so many times they had died to hear that one word which never came out.... i felt so good for them that moment.... i just did.... i feel so horrible i had hated them to so much extent... they really are so very innocnet in all this... really.... *narrows eyes*.... did i tell you i was khafa? well now i am!! but for the 1st time it's not coz of prem... 😆 i was telling someone else...i love how most cultures have titles for every relationship..it gives respect to the person and personalizes the relationship...i love it...😳😳😳...unlike wester cultures where you call everyone by name...at the most you add Mr. Mrs, or Ms....kinds impersonal

"Sorry," Maya said as she escaped to the kitchen - was this update intended to make us rolf so much or was it random? tell me, i demand an answr... i was getting senti and then this spatula dropping, and the sorry... i can so tell how hillarious it wouldve been if i was to watch it now... damn, i couldnt even shed a tear coz of sadness!! all tears were dried out rolfing... 🤣 you cant have it serious all the time...you should read the comic ff i wrote years ago..im thinking about reposting it here with kis desh characters...let me finish this ff and one more...then ill post the other ones... 😉😉...you will be dying of laughter...trust me 😆😆...

oh, i loved the whole 7 raksha bandhan ties.. it was so beautifully written... adn teh bear hug they had... aww,... family reunion.. 😍.... it was so adorable.... and, i had thought my tears were dried off, but wait till i read this: "Aare, aagar Heer ne bhi Chutki ki tarha lambi list thamadi hoti? Aaj ka din toh pura barbad hojata shopping mein," 🤣 i dont know if i have to comment on that, but it is the biggest fact in the update so far.... i can so picturise veera and her tissue roll of lists that included worth half the shares they had managed to get from 'preet'... 🤣 lmao...of course...beheno ka haq hota hai...raksha bandhan ke liyeh kuch toh milni chahiyeh 😛😛

speak of the devil and there she was.... 😆... i love veera in tanhai... i totally adore her... even manmeet as a matter of fact... they would look so very nice together.... 😆... They definitely didn't want to be there for this conversation, especially considering it involved their baby sister. - oh most definitely... who'd wanna know that?? 🤣 desi women are horrible...they know some dirty jokes...eeww...over heard my bhabis and auntys once...i was in the kitchen getting some water and they were all getting dinner ready...then the joke came...i was speechless...i couldnt get out fast enough...its safe to say...i stayed away from the kitchen the rest of the night

go boys... ahan... go boys... *dances*... stop that preet mehta from taking away heer!! she only and only is prem's!! no one and i mean no one dare even a think of her as his wife... forget think, even dream!! 😉... i am good no?? 😉.... 🤣 you are good...if it wsnt for that little slip above..i'd totally buy it 😆

ooh, for the flashback, i am gonna write a small comment on that.... this is getting way out of hand, and i have so much for the later parts... 😆... oh, i love the topic of love... i am a romantic buff, undoubtedly!! but i loved the various despriptions of it... the word is so vast that not anythign can really expain what i means... it is just what you believe in, and rather what you give and recieve... sighs... 😆 i love romance too..i just shocked that i came up with all that..i was like 😲...did i just write that...lmao...who knew?!

"Jaab tumhe pyaar hota hai toh uss insaan ke liyeh tum puri duniya se lad sakte ho, aapni jaan tak deh sakte ho…woh bhi, bina shikayat kiyeh. Saab log kyun naa tumhara saath chod de, lekin pyaar…pyaar tumhara saath khabi nahin chodega," Harman said.... i love these last lines... you hear them everywhere, yet every single time they mention these words, i feel a sudden belief in it over and over again.. love is just such a strong word it literally means so much... but yes, when you do anythign for the person you love, no complain, no pain and no suffering can ever overcome you... because love is stronger than any other emotion in the world... it's a fact.. and evrytime i hear it, i believe in it even more... i believe in love too...im just waiting for it to happen for me...been waiting for a while...lmao...😆😆...and you are right...on its own...its such a powerful and magical word ⭐️

and what rishab finally said about love... so darn true... love never dies... never... everything in the world has to end. there is nothing that stays alive for all eternity except for love... i believe in it so much jazu, and that's why i love reading ur ffs... they always have the essence of love involved in it.. the fact that no matter how much evil is close by, love conquers all... and even if people think i live in fairytale, i know... even in real life... love always wins, eventually, whether that win is literally a win or a loss in other's eyes, for the person, he knows that his love won... it always does.... yes...im with you that...pyaar ki humesha jeet hoti hai 😳

ok, so the most umm... interesting, i would say.... most interesting part of the update.... 😆

for the first ever time in this whole FF, i loved.. literally loved that ba****d balraj... when he said the decision remained freaked, undoubtedly, but when i read aheaad, all i wanted to do was show him a cunning smile... i felt like telling him, lets see who is the eventual winner in our little game.... 😡... kamina... ooh, and the 100 % part had me really shocked.... i had my mounth hanging thinking why would such a huge business man not just look for a random woman that would marry him for just some lakhs... but well, we very well know the answer to that. 😉 ha ha...once again you give away the fact that you read the update already...lmao...😆😆...chalo koi baath nahin...i pretend like i missed what you said 😛

Kyun ke iss mauke ke liyeh maine saloon intezaar kiya hai." do you even realise how much my pulse had increased in this one damn line?? do you?? i swear to god jaz, u know how to create suspence, and even more so, you know how to give, particularly me, small jhatkas... zhoor ka jhatka dheere se!! 🤣... i literally died!! i mean i had stopped reading for a while just to take in what i had read... i read it like probably some 5 times for me to realise there was something awaiting... but no, i hadnt expected it so fast... and i wasnt even anticipating his re-entry coz i didnt wanna give myself false hope... it would hurt so much if i had hoped!! 😆 lmao...pehle kehte ho ke you KNEW prem would be back...aab kehti ho ke you didnt want to give yourself false hope that he was back...lmao...mujhe confuse kaar rahe ho tum ... 😆

when i read u saying ur not gonna update till all unreserve, i realised something big was on the cards... but i didnt think too much coz skimming through, i realised there was a lot of preets written... i actually figured u had them married off or something... i am not that bad in guessing, i suppose?? 😛 😆 lmao...no...not bad in guessing...i'd say you were dead on! good job...5 start for you 😉

However, someone felt a change happen to the air. Preet Mehta was in the house. change of air... you know i really become hopeless when i read tanhai... all this while, i was in this positive mode of prem comming back, but as i read all these lines, i still didnt get the pinch... i dont really know why, now that i think of it... i just dont! i mean i had hoped so much probably i believed i had to just keep hoping and it wouldnt ever really happen or something... 😕... i have absolutely no idea, but noramlly i'd have got it by this time... teh fact was, i didnt!! 😆 lol...it was a subtle hint...so far you are the only one ot mention it at all...at least baad mein you understood why someone felt the change in the air 😉

"Love matlab…Prem. Toh Preet aur Prem ek hi hua naa?" you have no idea how i am writing all this now... i am soo a zombie after that!! i had died teh moment i read it.... it's like this jazu, i am always confident he'd be back, but apprently when he was, i just couldnt accept it... maybe take in so much happiness at once, or maybe i was just being stoopid, but i literally read it over and over again... then went to get a bottle of water... 🤣... like seriiously, i didnt know how to react that time... it's so surprising, coz you never gave a clue... not even in your response to me in the last comment i gave.... it was too shocking to be honest... but sach mein, i cannot believe i actually managed to stay alive! 🤣... nautanki no? 🤣... but that last line... O-M-G-O-M-G-O-M-G!! i just want to scream YES YES YES!! i have lost it... i feel an empty skull rigth about now!! .... 🤣 the best part writers is that they should be able to keep you in the dark until the truth is out there...if you get ideas...then there is no fun...the fun is in the element of surprise 😉😉😉...aab baata...how did you like this kahani mein twist? 😛

"Haan. Kissi ne mujhse kaha hai ke ashirwad sirf pair chuke nahin lejata. Ashirwad toh galle lag kar bhi lejata hai.".... believe it or not, this is the official point i had believed preet was actually prem!! just dont even ask me what the heck... coz really i just felt so slow that day... taking it in slowly, but when he said that, i just smiled so widely i had actually put both my hands on my face and wiped it.... i was that emphatic!! really! it's like you keep being engrossed into something so much that it actually makes you react as if it's real.... *shakes head*... i am that way when i read... sighs... and when it's you writing, it's even worse... 😆 it took you this long! i thought the Preet=Prem wala line would have done you in...haila...😲😲...took a while to convince you didnt it...lmao 😆😆😆

what i didnt quite get is that maya b didnt really recognise prem unlike veera.... doesnt she remember him? i know about everyone else, but what about maya b? i was kinda confused there... i actaully thought he had a plastic surgery.... 🤣.... and i swear i am not even remotely kidding... until teh very end, i was believing as though he was in preet's mask , but was prem.... i mean really! i had lost it, you will have to admit... i mean only after i read the note did i realise what exactly happened.... i have no idea what came over me?? is too much joy affecting even my empty skull?? 😕.... 🤣 maya didnt recognize prem because its been 7yrs and he looks different...and maya only saw him a handful of times..she knew about premeers relationship but she didnt always see him...veera was the one who saw him whenever he came to see heer...not maya...so veera recognized him sooner...maya had an idea but she couldnt put her finger on it 😳😳...aab samaj mein aaya? 😛

"Kya Bhabi aapse yeh umid nahin thi. Aapne Chuha ko nahin pechana aap ne?" dies.... literally....

D-I-E-S!! and veera... i love her reaction... even she didnt know what to say... what to do... how to think, or react... she was just static callign out heer... O-M-G!

and for the most imp part... 😆... (after that i am promising this is done... 😆)

It felt like an eternity went by before she found the energy to move again. - i can only imagine what she had felt that very moment... how hard it is to describe it in mere words... her world had suddenly come togetehr in this bundle she hardly knew how to react... i wouldnt too.... i would just probably stare... it's so difficult to just comprehend what she was going through that very time... how everything changes in a moment.... like one of your lines... it is a million in one seconds that takes to ruin something.... it is also one moment in a billion for one to get back what means more than mere life...sigh, i can never explain what it feels, all i can say is, it is a feelign you get once in a lifetime...for heer it was like a dream...i wanted to make sure i captured her reaction correctly...😳

She first, hesitantly, touched his him to make sure he was real. Then, gently with her left hand she traced the path of the scar that traveled from his cheek back up to his ear. - this was rockign.. this whole two lines... firstly, how she tried to believe what she had just encountered.... it was probably so many times she had dreamed of such a situation, and how all of a sudden, out of nowwhere, it was there... right in front of her... how difficult was it to react?? and after that, how she felt the scar on his face.... it was her husband... he was back, and that was absolutely stunning... how you wrote in such simple but enthrawling words.... had me captivated till i hardly believed the update was done... thanks yaar...i really tried for this update...thanks for appreciating it 🤗

and finally.... "Prem," she said with a whisper. It wasn't a question – it was a statement. - O-M-G!! I had felt so much emotions in this one line... really... but the best part was the statement... she ddint need any proof, any reason or any justification to believe it was her prem.... she knows it and that was all that had mattered!! she knew it through her heart, her soul, his eyes and his beatign heart... she could tell even if he was miles, kilometers, seas, or heavens away.. she could tell without the slightest doubt... it was the love she carried for him... i just loved that line so bery berry much!! 😆 what more proof did she need...her PRem was back, she knew it...nothing was going to change that...like you said...she knew it in her heart 😳

ok, so i am finnally done *runs to check who isnt finished yet!! 🤣*.... i am sorry it took soo much time, but i had been so very busy lately and i know it's not fair, but i had my share of stress.... ... i had to work and study at the same time not to mention the christmas madness in the place i work, and all the assignments and presentations that keep pilling up every day... i know it's not even a justified reason, but in all honesty, that's all the reasons i have anyway.... 😔... i wil try to update my SD comments, and HS is done already.... as for teh next chapter here, i hope i can do it in about a weeks time from when you write... i dont ever get laji for tanhai anyway... 😆 no worries yaar...no need to say sorry...hope all your stress is over...relax...enjoy the holidays...hehe...be merry! 😃😃😃...i know how life happens...trust me...now that im done with school...im kinda freakd out with out all the pressure and deadlines...im like huh....this is odd...not having anything to do...😕

have a rockign weekend jazu... take care of yourself, our incredible writer, and ur car too... 😆.... and no accidents, coz u were not careful enough ok? u called me dadi-amma, now suffer!! 😈... muhahaha... will see u in the next update... till then, have fun, and yeah, i did write in the thread, but again, have a happy hapy birthday!!! hope all your prayers, wishes and dreams get fulfilled! May god always be with you in all your good and bad times... and umm, give you stregnth to keep prem happy in all the FFs?? 😳...🤣😆😆 lmao...make prem happy in all the ff's...we will see about that...no gaurantees on that one 😆😆...life isnt always good...things change...things happen...sadness happpens...lmao...just you know...fyi! 😉.....

love you, and take good care... k? will do...to tc too!! 😃

cess....

p.s. i forgot to anwer one of your questions... 🤣

there is just no winning with you is there? umm, i guess you know the answer to that jazu,, but if you insist, umm... how about...... N-O?? 🤣... when it comes to prem, never.... 😈 i knew the answer already...dont even know why i bothered asking 😉

hey jaz.. wanted to give a long comment actually.. but..was a li'l busy all this time.. and am a lazy one.. hate typing actually..!! but i promise i wil leave a real long comment fr yuh..

neways..i was too happy reading the last part.. like i had said bfr in one of my comments..heer wouldnt be alive if prem was dead.. there is no existence fr heer without prem!!how can a person live when her heart stops beating..! :)))

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

Part 8

JAZ JAZ JAZ!!! OH MY GOSHHHHHH!!! Okay, i just cant WAIT to get to commenting on this part! TAUBAAA!! This is your BEST part in the whole fan fic!! Have we said that before about another part? If we have, ignore it.. forget we ever said that, because boy oh boy, this is DEFINITELY your best part! No doubts!!! I actually shrieked! Like yell urf scream! What have you doneee! Oh jaz! Tumhari kartoote kabhi maaf nahi honge! Hehehehhe! jee...i wonder why you think this is the BEST part of the entire ff...hmm...*thinking*...could it maybe be related to the fact that PREM IS BACK?! 😉

Okay okay, WAY too much bakwaas'onto your update! SIGH! Breathing in! its going to take a LOT to not virtually faint on this part! *SIGH*

Heer was so stunned at the revelation that came out that she was speechless. She cried in her brothers arms for what seemed like a life time. Before she knew it, she was sitting on the couch with Rishab. Nihaal and Harman occupied two arm chairs, one on each side of the couch. She had her head resting on Rishab's shoulder as the tried, and failed, to get her to stop crying. Eventually they stopped talking and just let her be. They didn't leave the room. All three brothers stayed and just offered their support to Heer. If she needed it, they would happily give it. AWW! Finally! Okay, yes, I hated these brothers, but secretly, I never gave up on them! Haha, yes a little too convenient but no seriously, its soo good to have them all back together, what a relief! 😲 saachi...you never gave up on them...hmm...daal mein kuch kaal hai kya? 😆😆 lol...yes its good to have them all back again naa...😳

"Ladki hoke maine aaisi kya ghalti kardi ke Bauji mujhse itna nafrat karte hai?" she asked. That.. that.. slimy messs! Ughhhh!! Balraj has officially emptied my quota of patience! The guy is terrible! No jaz, we don't care he is fictional! He is just horrible! *SCREAM!!! im with you on that one...no arguments...hes an ass...there...i said it 😃

*~* Flash Back *~*

(Heer = 5, Rishab = 17, Nihaal = 15 & Harman = 13)

OH EM G!!! this flashback was the cutest ever! Hailaaaa! So adorable! Harman and nihal's English! And heer is such a dadi amma! And a terrorist! I would NEVER hang out with her! What a sadistic little child she is! Also for the sake of my already weak ear drums! No thank you! That child is LOUD! TAUBA!!! how did you hear her...her awaz came through the computer screen kya? lol...you guys are to funny.... 😆

*~* Back to Present *~*

"Main aap logoon ko...woh...," Heer hesitated before finishing. "Main aap logon ko rakhi bhandna chati hoon." Oh my gosh! Wait no! *rubs eyes* *reads this again* really1?!? HAILAAAAA!! so sweeetttt! Jaz, this is adroableeee! hai naa...i love raksha bandhan...we dont do it in our culture since we are bengali...but i just love it!! 😳

The guys figured out that this conversation was leading up to only one thing ' the wedding night. OH OH!! GUYS!! RUNN!!! *awkward turtle* bhaagooo!! They took this hint to leave the women to do what they did best ' talk. They definitely didn't want to be there for this conversation, especially considering it involved their baby sister.

*~* Flash Back*~*

(Heer = 15, Rishab = 27, Nihaal = 25 & Harman = 23)

"Pyaar," Heer blurted out before she could stop herself.

"Pyaar?" her three brother yelled out in unison.

"Woh'English class ke liyeh ek essay likhna hai," Heer said.

"Topic kya hai?" Harman asked.

"How does your family see love?" she said. Oh hooo!!! Heer to badi fast nikli! Hehe but can you imagine the look on all their faces?! TAUBA! My brother would have a FIT! Haha! aare...when you have not one...but three bade bhais...you've gotta think on your feet...its a survival must have skill 😉 varna mara jaoge! 😉

"Pyaar woh ehsaas hai joh tumhare ruh mein baas jata hai. Pyaar woh ehsaas hai joh bina vaje tumne muskurane pe mujboor kardeta hai," Harman said. Jaz!!!! This is perfecttt! I've always said, its easy to write dialogues in English' but to write them in hindi, and also something that has such an impact as this one, is definitely a gift! Job well done! Fabuloso! both ways is awesome...but with hindi...sometimes i feel like its a bit more meaningful and tons more beautiful...kyun? 😳

"Jaab tum kissi ke bina jeene ka sooch bhi nahin sakte, usse kehte hai pyaar. Jaab kissi ko dard pouchne se tumhare akhoon se asoon nikalte hai, usse kehte hai pyaar. Jaab kissi aur ki kushiyaan aapni kushiyon se bhi zyada maine rakhte hai, usse kehte hai pyaar," Rishab added.

"Pyaar tuhme kushiyaan deta hai, tumhe takat deta hai, tumhe jeena ka vaja deta hai. Pyaar tumhe hasaata bhi hai, aur rulata bhi hai. Pyaar ek aaisi ehsaas hai joh ek baar hojayeh toh zindagi baan jati hai," Nihaal said.

*SIGH* I love this side of the brothers! It is soo good to see this side of them after the wretched souls we have read so far! *eep, too harsh* but this is perfect! lol...wretched souls...now thats a new one 😆

*~* Back to Present *~*

Humari behen koi bargining chip nahin hai jisse hum aapko deh dehnge. Woh humari behen hai, choti behen, aur uske saath aaisi nainsaffi hum nahin hone denge," Harman added. Thank you thank you! Now someone go tell that sadiyal baap too! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! bapu ko chod...usse toh main dekhlungi!! 🤬

"Aaj bhi woh faisla mera hai," someone called.uff that jerk!!! Why does he have to tapkao all the time?!? And where did he come from! Punch him in the face! he has the worst timing ever....budha kahin kaa...but now im thinking...who is worse...this Ballu or monkey #1 on the show 🤢🤢

Main aapko 100% dene ke liyeh tayar hoon. Mujhe toh baas aapki beti chahiyeh," Preet said. WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT?!?!?!?!? Okay, I think I totally missed this the first time I read this part!! No he didntttt! This was your first clueee! How on earth did I miss this?! Jaz, have we told you how much we love you?!?! We haven't? HAW!!! Well, we love you this much * stretches arms out*.. yes...this was clue #1...not many people caught it...and those that did only did after it was revealed as to who "preet" really is 😉

"Kyun ke paisa hi aap logoon ke liyeh saab kuch hai. Kyun ke mujhe yeh status aur paisa saab aap logoon ke muh pe marna tha. Kyun ke iss mauke ke liyeh maine saloon intezaar kiya hai." There was something about his voice that was menacing. Oooh ooohh!!!! Jaz, your writing is brilliant! It is already setting the mood for the rest of this update! Perfect mix of words, and just the right touch of mystery! Bravo bravo! KUDOS! you know...the name of my High School was Bravo Medical Magnet...lol...just a random thought that happened when you said bravo...thanks btw 😳

Preet turned to face the Maan men. There was a conniving smile playing on his lips and an odd glint in his eyes when he said, "Aapni dulhan lehne." YES YESS!! Go Preet! I mean' Prem! No.. preet! Ahhhhh!!! Its prem alright! WOOT WOOTT!!!! lmao...breathe girls...dont need you passing out on me now do i...😆

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Everyone was so busy that no one heard a car pull up to the house. No one heard someone come in. However, someone felt a change happen to the air. Preet Mehta was in the house. GOOSEBUMPSS!!!!! Jaz, no kidding! I have a rush of them right now.. and you know what the best part of this is?! I can actually see this play out on screen! That is how brilliantly you describe this! Bloody stupendous!! *in a British accent *thanks yaar...imagine how awesome it would be to see Harshad and Additi actually doing this story 😳...that would be just awesome!!!

"Love matlab'Prem. Toh Preet aur Prem ek hi hua naa?" he asked with a wink. HAILLAAA!!!!!! THUDDD!!!! Fall of the chair with hysteria!!!!! Jaz, you don't even know! We literally shrieked! Thank GOODNESS no one was at home! Or we'd have to find a perfectly good reason for our shrieks.. and no, going nuts over a fanfic would NOT suffice! OH MY GOOD LORD!!!!!!!! What a twist! What a twist! lmao...the entire update as based on this one line...i catered so that everything lead up to this very moment...and i have to say...your falling off of the chair is greatly appreciated 😆😆😆...thank you!!

."Haan. Kissi ne mujhse kaha hai ke ashirwad sirf pair chuke nahin lejata. Ashirwad toh galle lag kar bhi lejata hai." Im going to cry now! This is officially where we begin to loose it! Because it just confirms any doubt we had! This IS prem! Our Prem! And he remembers! AHHHHHHH!!!!! *choke over tears* this is beautiful jaz! Such a clever way to get your readers into this! Mwahs! sorry to burst your bubble..lekin Prem humara nahin hai...woh toh Heer ki hai naa? are you going to take them away now 😲...after 7yrs of seperation...shame on you girls...shame shame! ..😆

The stranger leaned in and whispered, "Kya Bhabi aapse yeh umid nahin thi. Aapne Chuha ko nahin pechana aap ne?" wait wait, jaz, maya didn't realize??!?! I mean, ofcourse she thought it was familiar..but she figure out it was our Prem?! HAILLAA!! HOWWW?!?!? Maya and Heer knew him the best!!!!! lmao...read note at the end of the last update...yeh baath bol bol kaar main thak gayi hoon *phew* 😃

With that being said he walked away and into the house. From the corner of his eye he saw movement off to the right. When he turned he saw Veera doing something in the mandir. It was then that he noticed the saree, the mangalsutra and the sindoor adorning her. He couldn't help but smile. Awwww! His chulbuli got married! I'm loving this! Totally loving this! aage aage dekho...chulbulli ke saath kya kya hota hai...Prem has never left her just like he never left Heer 😉

Walking up behind her so that she wouldn't see him he whispered, "Chulbuli zaara pooja ki thali laa naa."

Veera turned for a split second and smiled before she said, "Ji abhi''." Her sentence died in her mouth. It took her a minute to register what she had just been called. Slowly she turned back around and gazed at the figure in front of her in disbelief. "Didi!" Veera yelled. "Didi jaldi aayiyeh! Didi!"

"Aa rahi hoon baba, chilla kyun rahi hai," Heer called from upstairs.

"Pooja ki thali?" he asked again. OH MY GOSH!! EVEN VEERA KNOWSS!!! Its unmistakable no?!?!? GASP FOR AIR!!!!!! No way this is happening! We just KNEWWW our prem was going to be back! We told you na, that we refuse to believe that our prem was dead! Theres just no way he could have been! Prem was alive, isliye tho Heer bhi zinda thi.. there is No heer without Prem! THANK YOU THANK YOU! Major cool and cookie points for this! MAJORRRR, woman! lmao...i cant believe im this excited over earning cool/cookie points...lmao...thank you...thank you so much! 🤗

Heer came running and was already half way down the stairs when she looked up. She stopped dead in her tracks as she looked at the person that stood directly ahead of her. It felt like an eternity went by before she found the energy to move again. One by one, slowly, she took the last steps of the stairs. The gap between her and the man before her was closing. When she finally stood in front of the man, she looked deep into his eyes and she knew.

She didn't notice him take the vermillion from the pooja ki thali that Veera held. She did however feel when he touched her. She did feel when he filled her parting with the sacred red color.

She first, hesitantly, touched his him to make sure he was real. Then, gently with her left hand she traced the path of the scar that traveled from his cheek back up to his ear.

"Prem," she said with a whisper. It wasn't a question ' it was a statement. "Prem," she repeated as tears sprang into her eyes. "Prem," she said one last time before everything went black.

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESSSSSSSSSSSS!! SIGH!! FAINTT!!! Quick! Waterrrrrr! HAILLAAA!! Jazz! We are as happy as a darned clam in butter sauce! *umm, the visual is a little weird but OH WELL! You get the point* TAUBAA!! No he didnttt! He made her hisss! He finally did it! We would Not have expected this from you..not this soon atleast'but like we said.. we had just a little hope, and a little faith.. and dekho kya rang layi! We are sooo proud of you! You have made a LOT of readers happy! The last bit of this update was brilliant! The words you used..the description..everything was perfect! I can't wait to see what the jerk of a father has to say now! Muahahha! Oh man! Heer could tell it was her Prem just from his eyes'oiii, now we can look forward to scenes of Premeer! HAILLAAA! You have NO idea how long we've waited for them to get together! *SIGH* can we just say, we can have a great nights sleep now! Sweet dreams galore, all thanks to your update! But HIALA! You ended at the worst part possible! Now we're going to be SO restless till you next update! Very bad! You know exactly how to keep your readers interested! OH JAZ!! Thanks tonsss for this update! Totally made our day! Brilliant work! And we cant get enough of your writing! Muchos brilliante! *haha, I made that up in Spanish* 🤣 phehli baa dekh rahi hoon...the person how passed out is asking for water...yeh kaise hogaya? 😉...im so happy that you liked it...or wait...LOVED it...and thank u for the spanish...although i think its supposed to be 'muy brilliante'...😆😆😆


NOTE: i've got some ppl asking how its possible that Prem is back from the dead...and how Prem was Preet and no one realized it...that will all be covered in the next update but here's the gist...one of the brothers saw Prem in passing once...and then they saw him the day of the "death"...it was only for a few minutes and it was so traumatic that they didnt really register his face...as for Balraj...he never saw Prem...that night he was too focused on keeping Heer away from her brothers...the only people who can identify Prem are Maya and Veera...and also...no one saw Prem's dead body!! HAWWWW!!!!! You pull a fast one! We don't even realize it! Jaz, can you tell we all can't WAIT for the next update?! TAUBA! We already KNOW its going to be brilliant! Cant wait @just cant! UFFFFF!!!!!!! didnt see it coming did ya?! 😉

And oiii, see, this is the first time we didn't wait too long to comment! Arent you proud of us?! *looks around and smiles proudly* im so proud of my twinnies!! 👏👏👏 five stars just for you ⭐️...i loved reading it yaar 😃

Originally posted by: coolgal270

Oh! Oh oh..I missed this last update..And i had no idea that prem is back...oh wao...jingalala..... omg..."jingalala"...🤣....omg...when i read that..i nearly fell over laughing...and i was at work...tauba...people in the lobby were like...uh...are you ok 😆...oh god...ill never forget that one!! 😆😆😆
Its wonderful Jaz..thank u thank u....
cannot wait for the next update.

Please PM me when u update it.
BTW: how r u feeling now? im feeling good yaar...thanks for asking 🤗 means a lot!
Edit add:

I couldn't resist adding my comments for this one..
Seriously what kind of scumbag is this balraaj?🤢 Yuck...Poor poor brothers...just imagine living with the guilt of destroying ur sister's happiness and then seeing her hate them for the past 7 years...I guess, that's more than they deserve...they have repented their mistake and have suffered too...thats why I was really happy that heer decided to forgive and acknowledge them as her brothers again..I did really hate them for the 1st 6 parts but now, i just cant..they are good brothers.. you and everyone else hated the brothers...but after the truth came out they all forgave them....more or less...some sooner than others 😳
Also the love that the bhabhis have for heer is amazing...the min they see her on the floor, they want to comfort her and confront their husbands..but they dont know the truth as yet, do they?..I mean later heer ties the rakhi to them and everybody is surprised, but do the wives actually know who is the culprit..? no, right?... umm...you know...i dont know if i even thought about that...lets just say that the wives know but teji doesnt...she will find out later...hmm....crap...i gotta work that in as well huh....hmm...how to do it?
well, they will come to know in the future..
the FB of the brothers with little heer was awesome...just awesome Jaz....completely loved it..Thank u so much for that ..It was so heartbreaking..couldn't help myself but become senti over that.. im glad that you liked it...😳

And then heer calling then "bhaiya"..Sigh! I could actually feel what the 3 brothers must be feeling at that time..and this is why I love ur FFs..U r such a fantabulous writer that ur readers can't help but feel what u r trying to portray..Amazing👏 thanks yaar...you are too sweet...i love all the names that we have for various relationships...it makes them so much more meaningful and personal...nahin? 😉😉😉
It was really nice that the brothers remembered abt that night when they taught heer abt love..it was apt at this point of the story...I love ur FBs jaz..they are so real and powerful..I really love u for this.🤗thanks...wasnt sure how the fb's were gonna work...or how they could be received...but apprently they went over well...thanks to you guys...you are the best!! 😃

And then, Bam! Prem is back...Oh wao...just wao....I am mad with excitement...and I really liked the fact that he threw the papers on that 🤢😡 balraaj's face...wohoo... ive been waiting to do that forever...literally...forever!!! 😉
But what I loved loved was that prem was so..prem when he met maya and then veera...what i mean is that he was just like the old prem..as if the 7 tormenting years have never happened before... for him to feel this way for heer is one thing..he loves her and always had..but to feel the same love and respect for her family as well, who in some way contributed to the pain, is amazing..do u know what i mean?..he could have just hated the rest of the people for doing this to heer-him..but No...Because he is Prem, he does what is RIGHT...Always...hate the guys who did the wrong but don't hate the whole family...I cannot love and respect him more after this...seriously i found this part really touching.. Prem knows who is really at fault...well almost...in his mind its the men that ruinies his life and heers life...not the women...he is more logical than that...wait til you read the next part...i think you will love him more...or at least i hope so 😃
and then OMG...he filled heer;s maang...not a slightest hesitation..not for a sec..he meets her after 7 years, blink of an eye, and she is his..Awwww... * melting* lmao...melting...like the wicked witch of the west huh? 😆

I cannot wait for the next part...I love u for getting the idea for this FF and then writing all this down for us..

love,sumi next part up today...promise! 😃 ...thanks...i dont know where that thought came from...most of my ideas come as im driving...i have so many...just gotta put them down on paper 😳

Originally posted by: Innocent02

Heyy Jaz....
awesome SS.....just amazing
you are such a brilliant writer👍🏼aww...thanks so much...😳
I don't know why I started reading this SS but I am glad I did😉me too 😉
I read your FF in which Prem was Mr.Pier😃(I hope I remember it right) and Heer was married to Manmeet (sorry don't remember the name) even that FF was superb and your SS "In search of Chahat" that was also very good. This SS is very different.New concept and the idea of flashbacks in every update was great. that one was "Ek Paal"...one of my favorites...one of my earliest pieces and completely original on my part...im so happy you liked that one 😳😳 glad that you like the fact that this ff is new and unique 😃

When I read the Prologue I was like its "ok" then read the first two updates and I was like I wanna know if Prem is coming back or not if he is coming back then I'll read the rest but again don't know why I decided to read the third part😛 and I was like okay....doesn't matter if Prem comes back or not the story is interesting and I am gonna read it ...of course I wanted him to come back but him not coming back was not gonna stop me from reading this SS and in short this proves that you are a brilliant writer.I had tears in my eyes reading this SS not literally but kind of 😛 aww...thanks hun for reading...i know that stories take a bit to take off but im glad that you stuck around to find out about this one...😳😳
I wanted Heer of Kis Desh to also wear white clothes and to consider herslef Prem's widow after he dies ... ok don't think how mean 😆 I knew that Prem would be back thats why 😃
I liked the fact that Heer always used to wear white and consider herslef his widow even though they were married just for hours.... i think that a woman shouldnt be forced to wear the white...but if its her choice...because of her love and devotion to her husband...then more power to her...as for the marriage...yes it was only a few hours but their relationship was almost a life time...that means something...right? 😉😉😉
great job Jaz👏I can't write how much I like and how I felt about many scenes but I simply loved each and every bit of this SS.Hopefully my boubts about Preet being Prem or Prem being Preet 😛 would be cleard in the next update as I didn't get the intoduction of Preet quite well and I had it nowhere in my mind that Preet would be Prem.Fortunatelyt I read someone's comment that I wish Preet is Prem and I copmletely ignored it thinking how is it possible😳thsi whole Preet = Prem thing will come out in the next part...lol...i know its hard to grasp why no one knew it was him..but it will all be explained...and its logical...sort of...nothing like ekta bringing people back from the dead 😆
I loved the realtionship Prem shared with Veera and Maya and how you wrote his comeback with same lines he spoke before.....the ashirwaad and chulbuli .... it was great
and Heer's relationship with her brothers....very touching
hahah what makes me laugh a little is that I also have three elder brothers and I am the youngest and the only sister.......... maybe that is why I never had a boyfriend🤣 this ff is based all on family relationships and other relationships...as for you...haila yaar...i think u need a hug...eeks...you have 3 brothers...omg...i have only one (younger) but he's a pain in the ass!! 😕
Prem is back ...WOW !
I am excited to read what happens next...
The love Heer has for Prem can't be described......you've done an amazing job with this SS
keep it up👍🏼
can't wait for your next update 😉 next part will be up later today 😳