New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 45

Part 8

JAZ JAZ JAZ!!! OH MY GOSHHHHHH!!! Okay, i just cant WAIT to get to commenting on this part! TAUBAAA!! This is your BEST part in the whole fan fic!! Have we said that before about another part? If we have, ignore it.. forget we ever said that, because boy oh boy, this is DEFINITELY your best part! No doubts!!! I actually shrieked! Like yell urf scream! What have you doneee! Oh jaz! Tumhari kartoote kabhi maaf nahi honge! Hehehehhe!

Okay okay, WAY too much bakwaas'onto your update! SIGH! Breathing in! its going to take a LOT to not virtually faint on this part! *SIGH*

Heer was so stunned at the revelation that came out that she was speechless. She cried in her brothers arms for what seemed like a life time. Before she knew it, she was sitting on the couch with Rishab. Nihaal and Harman occupied two arm chairs, one on each side of the couch. She had her head resting on Rishab's shoulder as the tried, and failed, to get her to stop crying. Eventually they stopped talking and just let her be. They didn't leave the room. All three brothers stayed and just offered their support to Heer. If she needed it, they would happily give it. AWW! Finally! Okay, yes, I hated these brothers, but secretly, I never gave up on them! Haha, yes a little too convenient but no seriously, its soo good to have them all back together, what a relief!

"Ladki hoke maine aaisi kya ghalti kardi ke Bauji mujhse itna nafrat karte hai?" she asked. That.. that.. slimy messs! Ughhhh!! Balraj has officially emptied my quota of patience! The guy is terrible! No jaz, we don't care he is fictional! He is just horrible! *SCREAM!!!

*~* Flash Back *~*

(Heer = 5, Rishab = 17, Nihaal = 15 & Harman = 13)

OH EM G!!! this flashback was the cutest ever! Hailaaaa! So adorable! Harman and nihal's English! And heer is such a dadi amma! And a terrorist! I would NEVER hang out with her! What a sadistic little child she is! Also for the sake of my already weak ear drums! No thank you! That child is LOUD! TAUBA!!!

*~* Back to Present *~*

"Main aap logoon ko...woh...," Heer hesitated before finishing. "Main aap logon ko rakhi bhandna chati hoon." Oh my gosh! Wait no! *rubs eyes* *reads this again* really1?!? HAILAAAAA!! so sweeetttt! Jaz, this is adroableeee!

*~* Flash Back*~*

(Heer = 15, Rishab = 27, Nihaal = 25 & Harman = 23)

"Pyaar," Heer blurted out before she could stop herself.

"Pyaar?" her three brother yelled out in unison.

"Woh'English class ke liyeh ek essay likhna hai," Heer said.

"Topic kya hai?" Harman asked.

"How does your family see love?" she said. Oh hooo!!! Heer to badi fast nikli! Hehe but can you imagine the look on all their faces?! TAUBA! My brother would have a FIT! Haha!

"Pyaar woh ehsaas hai joh tumhare ruh mein baas jata hai. Pyaar woh ehsaas hai joh bina vaje tumne muskurane pe mujboor kardeta hai," Harman said. Jaz!!!! This is perfecttt! I've always said, its easy to write dialogues in English' but to write them in hindi, and also something that has such an impact as this one, is definitely a gift! Job well done! Fabuloso!

"Jaab tum kissi ke bina jeene ka sooch bhi nahin sakte, usse kehte hai pyaar. Jaab kissi ko dard pouchne se tumhare akhoon se asoon nikalte hai, usse kehte hai pyaar. Jaab kissi aur ki kushiyaan aapni kushiyon se bhi zyada maine rakhte hai, usse kehte hai pyaar," Rishab added.

"Pyaar tuhme kushiyaan deta hai, tumhe takat deta hai, tumhe jeena ka vaja deta hai. Pyaar tumhe hasaata bhi hai, aur rulata bhi hai. Pyaar ek aaisi ehsaas hai joh ek baar hojayeh toh zindagi baan jati hai," Nihaal said.

*SIGH* I love this side of the brothers! It is soo good to see this side of them after the wretched souls we have read so far! *eep, too harsh* but this is perfect!

*~* Back to Present *~*

Humari behen koi bargining chip nahin hai jisse hum aapko deh dehnge. Woh humari behen hai, choti behen, aur uske saath aaisi nainsaffi hum nahin hone denge," Harman added. Thank you thank you! Now someone go tell that sadiyal baap too! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

"Aaj bhi woh faisla mera hai," someone called.uff that jerk!!! Why does he have to tapkao all the time?!? And where did he come from! Punch him in the face!

Main aapko 100% dene ke liyeh tayar hoon. Mujhe toh baas aapki beti chahiyeh," Preet said. WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT?!?!?!?!? Okay, I think I totally missed this the first time I read this part!! No he didntttt! This was your first clueee! How on earth did I miss this?! Jaz, have we told you how much we love you?!?! We haven't? HAW!!! Well, we love you this much * stretches arms out*..

Preet turned to face the Maan men. There was a conniving smile playing on his lips and an odd glint in his eyes when he said, "Aapni dulhan lehne." YES YESS!! Go Preet! I mean' Prem! No.. preet! Ahhhhh!!! Its prem alright! WOOT WOOTT!!!!

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Everyone was so busy that no one heard a car pull up to the house. No one heard someone come in. However, someone felt a change happen to the air. Preet Mehta was in the house. GOOSEBUMPSS!!!!! Jaz, no kidding! I have a rush of them right now.. and you know what the best part of this is?! I can actually see this play out on screen! That is how brilliantly you describe this! Bloody stupendous!! *in a British accent *

"Love matlab'Prem. Toh Preet aur Prem ek hi hua naa?" he asked with a wink. HAILLAAA!!!!!! THUDDD!!!! Fall of the chair with hysteria!!!!! Jaz, you don't even know! We literally shrieked! Thank GOODNESS no one was at home! Or we'd have to find a perfectly good reason for our shrieks.. and no, going nuts over a fanfic would NOT suffice! OH MY GOOD LORD!!!!!!!! What a twist! What a twist!

."Haan. Kissi ne mujhse kaha hai ke ashirwad sirf pair chuke nahin lejata. Ashirwad toh galle lag kar bhi lejata hai." Im going to cry now! This is officially where we begin to loose it! Because it just confirms any doubt we had! This IS prem! Our Prem! And he remembers! AHHHHHHH!!!!! *choke over tears* this is beautiful jaz! Such a clever way to get your readers into this! Mwahs!

The stranger leaned in and whispered, "Kya Bhabi aapse yeh umid nahin thi. Aapne Chuha ko nahin pechana aap ne?" wait wait, jaz, maya didn't realize??!?! I mean, ofcourse she thought it was familiar..but she figure out it was our Prem?! HAILLAA!! HOWWW?!?!? Maya and Heer knew him the best!!!!!

With that being said he walked away and into the house. From the corner of his eye he saw movement off to the right. When he turned he saw Veera doing something in the mandir. It was then that he noticed the saree, the mangalsutra and the sindoor adorning her. He couldn't help but smile. Awwww! His chulbuli got married! I'm loving this! Totally loving this!

Walking up behind her so that she wouldn't see him he whispered, "Chulbuli zaara pooja ki thali laa naa."

Veera turned for a split second and smiled before she said, "Ji abhi''." Her sentence died in her mouth. It took her a minute to register what she had just been called. Slowly she turned back around and gazed at the figure in front of her in disbelief. "Didi!" Veera yelled. "Didi jaldi aayiyeh! Didi!"

"Aa rahi hoon baba, chilla kyun rahi hai," Heer called from upstairs.

"Pooja ki thali?" he asked again. OH MY GOSH!! EVEN VEERA KNOWSS!!! Its unmistakable no?!?!? GASP FOR AIR!!!!!! No way this is happening! We just KNEWWW our prem was going to be back! We told you na, that we refuse to believe that our prem was dead! Theres just no way he could have been! Prem was alive, isliye tho Heer bhi zinda thi.. there is No heer without Prem! THANK YOU THANK YOU! Major cool and cookie points for this! MAJORRRR, woman!

Heer came running and was already half way down the stairs when she looked up. She stopped dead in her tracks as she looked at the person that stood directly ahead of her. It felt like an eternity went by before she found the energy to move again. One by one, slowly, she took the last steps of the stairs. The gap between her and the man before her was closing. When she finally stood in front of the man, she looked deep into his eyes and she knew.

She didn't notice him take the vermillion from the pooja ki thali that Veera held. She did however feel when he touched her. She did feel when he filled her parting with the sacred red color.

She first, hesitantly, touched his him to make sure he was real. Then, gently with her left hand she traced the path of the scar that traveled from his cheek back up to his ear.

"Prem," she said with a whisper. It wasn't a question ' it was a statement. "Prem," she repeated as tears sprang into her eyes. "Prem," she said one last time before everything went black.

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESSSSSSSSSSSS!! SIGH!! FAINTT!!! Quick! Waterrrrrr! HAILLAAA!! Jazz! We are as happy as a darned clam in butter sauce! *umm, the visual is a little weird but OH WELL! You get the point* TAUBAA!! No he didnttt! He made her hisss! He finally did it! We would Not have expected this from you..not this soon atleast'but like we said.. we had just a little hope, and a little faith.. and dekho kya rang layi! We are sooo proud of you! You have made a LOT of readers happy! The last bit of this update was brilliant! The words you used..the description..everything was perfect! I can't wait to see what the jerk of a father has to say now! Muahahha! Oh man! Heer could tell it was her Prem just from his eyes'oiii, now we can look forward to scenes of Premeer! HAILLAAA! You have NO idea how long we've waited for them to get together! *SIGH* can we just say, we can have a great nights sleep now! Sweet dreams galore, all thanks to your update! But HIALA! You ended at the worst part possible! Now we're going to be SO restless till you next update! Very bad! You know exactly how to keep your readers interested! OH JAZ!! Thanks tonsss for this update! Totally made our day! Brilliant work! And we cant get enough of your writing! Muchos brilliante! *haha, I made that up in Spanish*


NOTE: i've got some ppl asking how its possible that Prem is back from the dead...and how Prem was Preet and no one realized it...that will all be covered in the next update but here's the gist...one of the brothers saw Prem in passing once...and then they saw him the day of the "death"...it was only for a few minutes and it was so traumatic that they didnt really register his face...as for Balraj...he never saw Prem...that night he was too focused on keeping Heer away from her brothers...the only people who can identify Prem are Maya and Veera...and also...no one saw Prem's dead body!! HAWWWW!!!!! You pull a fast one! We don't even realize it! Jaz, can you tell we all can't WAIT for the next update?! TAUBA! We already KNOW its going to be brilliant! Cant wait @just cant! UFFFFF!!!!!!!

And oiii, see, this is the first time we didn't wait too long to comment! Arent you proud of us?! *looks around and smiles proudly*