FF: The Truth (Chap. 3 on Page 4 updated: aug 17th

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Hi guys! I am writing a new FF, actually my first. Will start the chapters tonight but so far here are the main characters:

Heer Juneja
Prem Juneja
Chahat Juneja
Geet
Jasmeet Aunty
Gayatri Juneja
Ashlesha Khanna
Sameer Khanna
Diya Khanna


The story starts from where it ended on Friday when Chahat tells Prem she would no longer call him Papa or meet him and Prem cries to Gayatri about losing his Chahat.


Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - Page 3
Chapter 3 - Page 4
Edited by Sonalicious - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
do contnue soon.............i 'll be waiting.
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Hey!! Do continue!!! PM me when u update plzzz!!
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hey do continue it sounds interesting
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Hey guys, will continue in 6 hours. How do I get a PM list?
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CHAPTER ONE

She hurried out of the car into the long breezeway to the main entrance of the school. Geet had forced her to spend the day shopping with her. She got to work at the bureau later than she expected and had to say at work later than usual to finish her work. By the time she realized the time, she was already half an hour late to pick up her daughter from school. She hurried inside the building checking the time. "Oh no! It's been more than an hour since school ended. Chahat! Where is she?" Heer thought as she looked for her daughter in the now empty building. "Prem! What if she went away with Prem??? I told her to not talk to him again!" She said to herself as she entered the playground. Chahat wasn't there either. Heer was now getting more and more worried as the minutes passed. She finally saw the security guy standing next to the main door and Heer ran as fast as her yellow sari could let her to him. "Chokidar, have you seen my daughter? My Chahat?" He hasn't. but told her to check the principle's office. As she entered the building once again, she was getting more and more sure that Prem must have come to visit Chahat again and seeing Heer late took her home. A part of her wanted that to be true. At least that would mean Chahat is safe. She knew if Chahat was with Prem, he would take good care of her. But what if she's not with him? Where is she than? Lost in her thoughts, it was a second before she realized she has walked passed the principle's office. She quickly went back and knocked on the door. No answer. She knocked again and again no answer. She was so desperate that she tried to open the door but it was locked from inside.

As she went back outside, she couldn't stop her tears from falling. Where was her daughter? Why did she agree to go with Geet this morning? It was all because of Geet that she was late to work and it took her longer than usual for her to finish work and get Chahat from school. And last night? She made Chahat cry by not talking to her. Why? Just because Chahat called her own father, Papa? What is wrong with that? Why did she make Chahat cry? But maybe she's with Prem now. Yes, Chahat has to be with Prem. Her father. He surely couldn't stay away from her and came to visit her again and seeing her alone, took her home. Yes. She's with Prem. Chahat is safe with Prem. She has to call Prem and make sure she's with him. She quickly wiped her tears away and took her phone out to dial Prem's number.....as she was about to press the call button, a little voice came from behind.

"Mama?"

Part 2 coming up later.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
nice update.
wait 4 the next update asap.
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Fatima
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