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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn guys………….i am soooooooooooooo glad u all enjoyed this one too……….Here's the next part……….the last one……..hope u enjoy that too………….and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz send in ur valuable comments……………..

Geet shakes hands with Prem and she says--- Arre aapko toh bukhaar hai………..

Heer looks up startled and worried…………

Prem replies ---- Main theek hoon……….ghar jaa kar davaayi le loonga………..nice meeting u………..Again…………

He leaves from there………and a super excited geet goes to Heer to tell her that this is the guy she was talking about………Lekin she asks Heer what was he doing in her cabin?...........aur yeh hai kaun?...............

Heer was worried about Prem………she doesn't react much and says--- He is Prem juneja…………He is finding a girl to settle down………..

Geet replies--- Oh toh abb toh pukka ho gaya main he banoongii………Mrs. Geet Prem Juneja!...............

It was then that heer realized what geet said!

She stares at her shell shocked!

After a while………..Geet is gone………..Heer keeps on thinking what to do?...........She calls up gaytri and says---- Maa……….vo………Jasmeet aunty kii beti hain naa………Geet……….vo Prem ko pasand karti hai……..mainne socha seedha unheen se baat kaisey karoon isliye aapko pehley bataana theek samjhaa………

Gaytri was more than elated to hear her own Best friend's daughter had fallen for Prem!

She tells Heer--- bataaney ke liye shukriyaa Heer puttar………abb tu chintaa naa kar………main kal hii jasmeet se millkar baat karti hoon……….

Heer keeps the phone down……….somehow she felt sad……….Lekin Kyun?..............

There Prem reaches home late that night………..by the time he comes back……….everyone was fast asleep……….he makes his way to his room when he hears gaytri's voice…………..

Prem moves to where the sound was coming from………….

There u can see Gaytri standing in front of Veera's portrait and saying--- Aaj main bahot khush hoon………..aaj heer ne khud hii Prem kii zindagi se jaaney kaa raastaa mujhe bataa diya……….abb kal subah……….main apney Prem kii shaadi kii baat Jasmeet se karkey………..uss heer se humeshaa ke liye apney Prem kaa peecha chudvaa loongii………….Bahot waqt lag gaya yeh sab karney mein……….pehley vo Sameer………ussney kuch kaam kar diya aur abb mere iss maksad ko anjaam tak heer ne khud hii pahonchaa diya……….vo ladkii Prem ka kaabil hii nahiin hai………..Main ussey bahot nafrat karti hoon………aura bb usska saaya bhi apney Prem par nahiin padney doongi!..............

Standing in the doorway…………stood Prem listening to all this stunned!............

His reflection falls on Veera's portrait as he makes his way towards Gaytri…………and Gaytri notices it was Prem…………she turns around and stares at Prem shell shocked!.................

Pakdii gayi BOL……………..

Prem has tears in his eyes…………he wa at a loss of words………..not knowing what to say?..................This was the ultimate Deception he had witnessed………….and that moment……….Prem felt alone………all alone!!!!!!!!!😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Hey Di
Awesome update
oh so prem found out abt gay3 yay
loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Wow that was amazing
but last part i want to know THE PREM'S reaction.
Do write more. i just cant get enough of reading your stuff.
Great job.
Hina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
thanks for updating. I really enjoyed reading it. continue to update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

hmm nice update gaytri's truth ha ha i ope soon ash truth also reveal

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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Very nice ....
i just liked it...
do write more next time..
i wanna c prems reaction to it now...
pratsy thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
omg..i loved ur ff...........itz amazing ..............plz pm me whenevr u give nxt ud
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
really nice
poor prem.and plz pm me when you update
Edited by maha_k - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hey sheeba
loved the part...it was awesome. 👏 cant wait to see what heer is going to do....continue soon. 😊




love
Afreen
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
that was amazing hopefulllyyy the G3 truth comes out sooonn

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