Losing u hurts ONE SHOT... UpDt........ Pg7....... - Page 2

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P.Kamaljit.Sean thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hey di
awesum wow that was really goood
loved it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn to all of u..............for reading............liking ..............and replying...............the second part is coming soon............and shaayad I will have to put up another one too..............Hope u enjoy it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
yay can't wait tooo read it
yes u have to put another part tooo
I need to survive this long boring weekend
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
that was amazing. do continue it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here's the next one..............Hope u all enjoy it too............and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments................😊

Lalit asks Prem—Kya hua Prem………yeh faislaa…..kyun beta?............😕

Prem sobs silently and says--- Sab kuch khatam ho gaya baujii………sach toh yeh hai kii naa main achcha pati ban sakaa……..naa ahcha insaan…….aur naa achcha pita…………abb ek achcha beta toh ban hii skataa hoon……..Maa jo chahti hain…………mere bhaley ke liye chahti hai………..vo jaisa kahengii abb waisa hii hoga……………😭

Prem walks away leaving every one in the Juneja house stunned…………..

There u see the scene in Heer's office………..

She is sitting in the same way showing Prem loads of photos spread everywhere on the table………….😆

This time Prem is in no mood of any masti or mazaak….................

He keeps on staring at Heer sternly………….

Then all of a sudden like he had had enough………….Prem stands up………..

Heer too gets up and is face to face with Prem…………😊

She notices for the first time since the time Prem had walked into her office that he looked tired……….worn out………..his eyes red…………like he had not slept whole night………….(U guessed it right Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja!............see u know him sooooooooooooo well!............😳)……………….👏

She says--- Abb kya hua Prem?.................

Prem give Heer one of his tough looks and says controlling hard to not to cry he begins---- Cheh saal pehley tumney ghar chodkkar………..meri zindagi ko mujhse durr kar diya Heer………….aur kal tumney meri Chahat ko bhi mujhse cheen liya!................Jitni nafrat mainney tumhaari aankhon mein apney liye dkhi hai………kal utnaa hii mainney apni beti ko khud se durr jaatey dekha!😔...............Jaanti ho Heer (Prem's sad music plays in the background)…………abb ehsaas hota hai…………kii shaayad…………meri galti kii yahii sazaa hai………..kii zindagi bhar main apni heer aur humaari Chahat ke liye tadaptaa rahoon…………..😭💔

Heer looks at Prem who felt sad and dejected…………she realized Prem must have met Chahat who pukka would have told him about her promise to her mom…………..😕

Tears well up in Prem's eyes as he says further--- Kal tumney meri aakhri khushi ko bhi mujhse durr kar diya…………aur usskey saath hii………..vo Prem jissey umeed thi kii usski Heer apni Chahat ke saath usskii duniyaa mein laut aayegi…………..marr gaya……………😭

Kisna theme begins to plays in the background……………..😉

Prem then looks at Heer sternly and says angrily--- Heer!..........Aaj tak tumney meri zindagi ke bahot saarey faisley liye hai naa………… Meri zindagi mein aaney ka faislaa…………..mujhey khud se pyaar karaaney kaa faislaa…………..Phir Khud ko mujhse iss tarah durr karney kaa faislaa…………phir humaari bachchi ko bhi mujhse durr karney kaa faislaa😭…………..abb YEH FAISLAA BHI TUM HII LOGI HEER!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tum Jahaan kahogii…………. Jab kahogi…………Jissey kahogi………….Main shaadi karney ke liye taiyaar hoon………….phir chaahey vo ladkii meri Heer kii tarah ho yaa na ho!..................👏❤️

Prem leaves from there…………leaving Heer completely speechless………..like he has been doing in the show these days……………..🥳

He opens the door of the office…………and sees Geet in the doorway……………who was shell shocked to see her Ajnabee standing in her mom's office!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh really nice dear.....yeup like you said you might have to do another part...man Prem's sadness is killing me.....I hope the next part is even more interesting....you made this OS really good....u put a lil suspense element to it which is quite nice...keep up the good work1!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Hey Di
wow awesome update
loved all the dialouges of prem
loved it

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Hey its awesome...!!
Loved all the dialogues of prem...
i think next part is more intresting...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
my spot
very good exellent upadate loved it 😉 and dialogues were too good
update soon and pm me if u can
Edited by noor arshad - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
loved it
plzz update soon

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