||We Will Never Part|| Premeer one shot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey im back...and i got another one shot..id like to say that i have wrote all these one shots as i have been inspired by all the writers do enjoy

We will never part

She couldn't believe her eyes. What was she seeing?. Prem and Ash together in one room. She looked at him infront of her and then at her lying on the bed with a smile on her face and then back at him. How could he?. Water came out of her eyes, she couldn't digest it.

Prem?...she said looking up

What is all this?

He just looked down, not being able to face her

Please prem tell me what I am seeing isn't the truth please prem she took a step forward and put her on his shoulders and shook him

PREM!! ARE YOU LISTENING

What is this?.. how could you?..tell me..answer me please

At this point she broke down and fell on the floor near his feet

He quickly sat down near her.

Ash was listening to everything.

Im glad everything is going according to plan, poor prem and heer, little do they know this is not the truth.

This is what you get heer for taking my love away from me, taking my preet away from me

She thought and smirked

He sat down next to heer

Heer what can I say, I cant say anything, I was drunk and I made a mistake please heer I know my mistake is not forgivable.

He said with tears in his eyes. He put his hand on top of hers

She moved it away. She couldn't believe what he said, her prem drinking.

Prem this was the only thing that was left wasn't it?..how could my prem do this?..how?..

She got up and went to the door. Prem got up

Heer where are you going?

Somewhere where you wont be ..

I love you heer please don't go please don't leave me..he said while walking towards her

No prem she held her hand up signalling him to stop

please don't make it harder for me than it already is please ill always love you prem but I cant live like this im going, please don't try to stop me please

And off she went right in front of his own eyes and he could do nothing

He went out and ran trying to find her he couldn't.

Where has she gone?.. I cant let her leave like this

He started looking for her every here but couldn't find her

Back in the kausali house Ash got up from the bed and was happy that her mission was accomplished

Finally I have got my revenge, finally I can live in peece, that's what you get heer for messing with my life and taking away the only thing that ever mattered to me, now you can feel the same pain that I went through when I lost preet to meher, you'll feel that pain everyday of your life and every night. You'll always think about him and why he did this deed but what both of you don't know is that he never did anything with me it was all an act a drama that was produced by me, all he did was that he got drunk and went to sleep on the bed and then I saw you coming and I quickly lay next to him and then after that I saw some entertainment

She went over to the bed and lay down

Now I can sleep peacefully and then she slept

Little did she know that someone was listening to everything and found out the truth.

In the train station

Where are you heer? He searched every place but couldn't find her and then came to the station thinking that she would go to ambala from here. He pushed the crowds in front of him away to find her and that's when he saw her sitting on the bench crying. He went over to her and sat down near her.

She could feel his presence and looked to her right to find him sitting next to her. His eyes were moist from all the crying. She couldn't stand it and hugged him.

Im sorry prem, I misunderstood you, im so sorry, how could I even think that my prem could betray his heer, im so sorry please forgive me please

Prem was confused, why is she saying sorry? When I did the deed when I was wrong?

Heer why are you saying sorry when I am in the wrong he said when they came out of the hug

No prem you didn't to anything

Kya said prem you saw me yourself with Ash and her on the bed

He said with a confused expression

Heer was smiling and told him about Ash and how she forgot her paayal in the kausali house and went back to get and then heard Ash talking to herself and how she just acted like prem did something with her when actually he didn't do anything

Prem you didn't do anything nothing at all

Prem was so happy that he couldn't express it with words

Sach heer he said while he cupped her face with her hands

Haan prem you didn't do anything wrong

They both hugged each other, both happy that their relationship is still joined and has become stronger.

do enjoy and comment and critisize or just press the like button😃

Edited by cute_bear - 16 years ago

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P.Kamaljit.Sean thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sonia
that was very nice
i loved it

Edited by -Pooji- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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As you know I totally loved it! 😃 Thanks for writing such a wonderful idea Sonia!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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VERY CUTE!!
Wish this had happened...
Ekta ji..This is what we want!!

Keep it up

nikita
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey sonia
that was very nice
i loved it

thank u pooji

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

As you know I totally loved it! 😃 Thanks for writing such a wonderful idea Sonia!

thanks so much meera means a lot for me

Originally posted by: nikitaic

VERY CUTE!!
Wish this had happened...
Ekta ji..This is what we want!!

Keep it up

nikita

thank u so much and yes i wish they showed this or something better
Edited by cute_bear - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice os.....hope dis happens in our show too
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sonia

Thanks for sending me link of your one shot somewhere as I am not visiting this place I don't know what is happening, You will not believe I have read anything after month or so on this forum as my all interested is finished. Today I came here just for you

Now coming to your one shot

Very well written . as the part you wrote for me . keep it up and I can say you can make this a ff is you try to write it's next part . It will be very interesting

do share with me your work in future
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aawww this was greaT!...ekta mai needs to learn sme lessons from u abt not seperating premeer!..excellent work!

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