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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx PremHeer_Chahat…………Glad u enjoyed this part too…………Next part asap……….Hope u like that one too………….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx Yasu…………Glad u enjoyed this part too…………Next part asap……….Hope u like that one too………….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx Afreen…………Glad u enjoyed this part too…………Next part asap……….Hope u like that one too………….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx punjabi0624…………Glad u enjoyed this part too…………Next part asap……….Hope u like that one too………….😊Glad u could feel the emotions right..............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Its night.........Prem coes out of the washroom wiping his face with a towel............ and sees heer sitting on the d ost in her own thoughts............

Prem Heer water music plays in the background and u see Prem taking a chair and coming to sit in front of Heer..........he is about to put his hand on hers but stops.........

Heer looks up at him.............all day heer had been trying to find somone she could tell how she felt after her patch up with gaytri and that moment when she found Prem sitting in front of her.........Heer saw concern sooooooo evident on his face..........and heer seemed to have found that someone..........

Prem asks her---Kya hua Heer?..........

Heer replies--- Prem aaj main bahot khush hoon..........

Prem heaves a sigh of relief and thinks to himself---Woh toh main jaantaa hoon heer tabhi toh.....jo kuch neechey hall mein hua usskey baad bhi tum mujh par bhadkii nahiin..............

Heer says----Aaj mujhey meri maa waapas mil gayii Prem...........unkaa pyaar ...........unkaa saath.......unkaa vishwaas waapas mil gayaa...........lekin phir bhi lagtaa hai..........kii kaash.........yeh sab hua hii naa hotaaa...........toh naa hum sab Veera ko khotey.........naa Nihaal bhaiyaa jail jaatey............naa maa aur mere beech yeh galat fehmii hotii.............

Prem looks at Heer and says softly completing her sentence---AUR HUM BHI SHAAYAD..........YUN EK DOOSREY KE SAAMNEY NAHIIN SAATH BAITHEY HOTEY!

Heer looks at Prem and for the first time in all these days she felt like hugging Prem tight and hiding herself in his strong arms..........but she remembers the fateful night and Prem telling Heer at the station when she was leaving her---Galtii insaan se hii hotii hai heer..............

Heer stops herself...........and prem gets up from their silently..........he goes to lie down on the sofa and Heer too lies on the bed and closes the lights of the room............the two look up at the ceiling..............

Prem and Heer both remeber the beautiful moments the two had spent together as in the background plays the song Tum miley...........

Its sometime late in the night and u see all of the Junejas gathere in the hall with manav and Ashlesha there too.............except heer......... lalit and gaytri...........

Kuldii and maya come in from the kitchen with a tray full of hot brewing coffee for all of them..........they all drink their coffee and think...........

At last preet speaks up---mere paas ek idea hai bhaiyaa...........kyun naa aap uss ring ko ghar par bhabhi ke naam se courier kar do aur phir..........bhabhi ko wahii ring jab courier aaye toh kii kaa tohfaa keh kar pehnaa do...........

Prem glares at Preet saying---Tujhsey aisii umeed nahiin thi mujhey preet...........kaisii baatein kar rahaa hai?..........Woh kyun kisi aur ka bheja tohfaa pehnegii aur woh bhi mere haathon se?..........NEXT OPTION!............

Maya speaks up---Toh bhaiyaa aap aisaa karo kii........babhi ke paas jaao.......waheen ring giraa do......phir ussey uthaakar bhabhi ko yeh keh kar pehnaa do kii Dekho heer tumhaarii ring gir gayi thi............simple............

Prem says---Brilliant!..........Jaisey heer ko toh pataa hii nahiin naa kii woh kaunsii rings pehentii hai............NEXT OPTION PLZ!.............

Archu speaks up---Toh aisaa karo kii jab woh raat ko sow rahii hongii tab pehnaa denaa............

Prem spats back----Heer kii neend bahot kachchi hai..........Woh uth jaayegii aur usskey baad jo meraa haal karegii...........(Prem holds his hand to his cheek remebring his nightmare).........NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ashlesha speaks up this time---Toh aisaa karo kii ussey kisi dukaan par ley jaao aur wahaan par jaa kar ussey ring try karaaney ke bahaaney pehnaa do.........

Prem says irritated---Kya yaar...........Kaisi baatein kar rahii ho Ashlehsa............poori dukaan mein....sab logon ke saamney woh toh mujhey!...........Bad option!..........

Prem again sits back in the sofa holding his hand to his cheek...............

After a while something strikes Prem and his face lightens up as he shares the idea with all the others who r all smiles after listening to Prem!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Harman says---Wow Prem bhaiyaa........

Manav adds---u r brilliant yahii sahii option hai!!!!!!!!!!!!

They all plan for some more time taakii Heer ko shak naa ho kii yeh sab preplanned hai and after that they all retire to their rooms to sleep looking forward to the Big day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its morning and u see Prem making sure no one was behnd him sneka into his own room and locks it from inside............he goes to sit on his pc and u see Shubh and chahat on screen..........with Nihaal behind them............

Last night when prem had talked to nihaal it was he who gave Prem this idea as the kids were missing Prem and he too was missing them...........

Prem is all smiles and crying too...........Nihaal says---Yeh donon tumhey aur Heer ko bahot miss kar rahey the............tum teenon baatein karo main abhi aaya...........

Prem then does video conferencing with his children...........They told them evrything happening in their scoold and the Shubh shows Prem his new game CD and the borad game Nihaal had bought him while Chahat shows Prem her new stuff dog Snoopy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem is all smiles and doesn't relise that little Shreshth stood next to him watching Shubh and Chahat on screen quietly..............

The two kids notice him and Shubh asks Prem---Dad who is he?...........

Prem is shell shocked to see Shreshth standing next to him as he had locked the room before entering...........

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi bataao............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update. Wating to see how Prem is going to put the ring on Heer's finger.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx newt2007, for liking this part dear.............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx sinak..........Glad u enjoyed this part too dear and hope u enjoy how Prem puts the ring in heer's finger................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee part! eagerly waiting to see how prem puts the ring on heer's finger.....update the next part soon! and thanks for the pm!
oh and congrats on this ff crossing 100 pages!
Edited by v_nikhita18 - 15 years ago

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