New FF Pavitra RishtaPremHeer post leapUpDt Pg102… - Page 69

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Posted: 15 years ago
great update....................
can't wait 4 da next part...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice part. I get really excited when up update your fan fic. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 15 years ago
he he,...sum solid planning on the way??

lets see..how this Prem's azab prem kahani proceeds!!

and what gazab Heer is gonna do?
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sheeba
amazing update...👏👏👏 awww...the prem imaginations was so cute and funny at the same time...😆 continue soon....and thanks for the PM...😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Di
Awesome update
love it
thankz for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
what is prem gonna do now???
pooor prem is scared of Heer! 😆
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

phantabulous, i loveedddddddddddd you FF...

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
waise what will prem do now 😲😲
poor prem kitna darta hai na heer the thekhi mirchi se😆
missing the kids yar bring them back plz😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone dii has been busy lately with her OS isliye i got the opportunity to send in this verrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy rocking part atleast I found it rocking when dii told me! Hope u all enjoy it too😊
Warning--After reading it u may not be able to control ur emotions isliye make sure u r alone in ur room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
Prem reaches the hall with maya and Meher.........the all r taken aback to find Preet lying down on one sofa with harman by his side..........on another one Kirran jeeju sat holding his head..........on another Kul dii was sitting looking tired!................
The three of them look at each other confused!...........they then see Archana teaching Heer dance steps in the centre of the hall............who after seeing prem says---yeh kya jeejs...........kab se aapka wait kar rahii hoon..........itnii derr lagaa dii abb jaldi aao aur didi ke saath practice shuru karo............sabkaa dance taiyaar hai sivaay aap donon ke!.............
Prem says--haan woh toh theek hai lekin inn sab ko kya ho gaya hai?........Aur maa baujii..........Ashlesha aur manav kahaan hain?..........
Archu replies---woh chaaron toh baahar gaye hain shopping karney...........woh baahar raheige tabhi toh hum yeh surprise plan kar saktey hain............rahii baat inn sab kii toh mainney inhein break diyaa hai......bahot thak gaye the saarey isliye mainney sochaa kii jab ta yeh aaraam kareige main aap donon ko sikhaa doongii abb jaldii aaiye naa............
Prem and heer come face to face..........Kisna theme plays in the background as the two keep staring at each other...........prem remebers Gaytri's words..........MERI BAHU KO WAAAPAS LEY AA BETAA..........USSEY ISS GHAR AUR HUM SAB KII ZINDAGII MEIN HUMESHAA KE LIYE WAAPAS LEY AA...........
Prem smiles...........heer doesn't understand why on earth was prem smiling.........she just remains expressionless and Archu comes to tell them the steps..........
After a while prem who seemed to have had enough stops dancing and says---Yeh sab mujhse nahiin hogaa..........AUR ABB MUHEY SAMAJH AAYA INN SAB KA AISAA HAAL KYUN HAI............COME ON HEER SAMJHAAO apnii behen ko..........hum sab itnii jaldii aisaa mushkil dance kaisey seekh saktey hain..........
Heer looks at prem and then at Archana nodding her head in agreement to prem..........udhar Preet who was still lying on the sofa says---I AGREE WITH U BHAI!.............Aap hii samjhaao issey!..............
There Archu tells Prem--ACHCHA?!..........Toh theek hai........I will play a song and u make dii dance on it.........dekhtey hain aapko kitnii choeography aati hai......aggar aap aadhey gaaney tak bhi dance kar sakey naa toh main choegraphy chodd doongii aur aap sabko dance sikhaaoge..............
Preet smiles and harman smiles too..............Maya and Meher giggle while Kuldii and Kirran smile knowingly looking at each other............THEY ALL KNEW LEKIN ARCHANA NAHIIN JAANTI THI WHAT SHE HAD GOT HERSELF INTO!?............They all were relaxed kyunkii they knew abb shart prem hii jeetegaa aur phir unhein Archana jaisey tough dance karaaney waaley kii jagah prem dance sikhaayegaa!..............
Preet is up and harman too is excitedly watching the two..........
Maya and Meher go in to bring juice for everyone and see what little Shreshth was doing.............
Heer who was dressed in a beautiful pink saree with its pallu tied around to her waist...........stood silent.........she didn't know why she didn't protest to not to dance with prem?................May be............SHE DIDN"T WANT PREM TO LOOSE THE CHALLENGE TO ANYONE .............EVEN TO ARCHANA!............(Dekhaa guys she is still the same Heer).................
Archana plays the song teraa honney lagaa hoon...........ONE OF MY CURRENT FAVS..............i am sure u all like the song too anyways............dekho aagey kya hotaa hai...........dekho nahiin read karo...........aur plz imagine karnaa..........lekin apney emotions control mein rakhnaa kaheen koi dekh naa ley!............
Prem who is in complete naughty mood goes to stand behind Heer............then he holds her from behind and in one swift motion he moves his hand across her waist and removes the pallu Heer had tucked in!...........Heer stood stunned and shocked ............all others who were watching this ............wonder what prem was upto?!.................
Prem comes to face Heer and brings his hand forward............and dance to the complete con the way they did in their wedding dream sequence plz imagine guys donon kya gazab dance kar rahey honge............
The song ends.........prem was standing sooooooooooooo close to Heer that he could hear her breathe!............her hair flow across Prem's face and he removes them and put them back into place ...........heer ke kaan ke peechey while heer doesn't know why on earth was she letting Prem do it all?!...............She just moves her head to the other side her eyes closed!.............
Maya who had just come in with Shreshth in her arms seeing what was going on!..........she closes his eyes instantly as Meher who stood next to her with a tray full of juice glasses giggles..........
Heer was blushing hard as she freed herself from prem's grip and goes upstairs to her room quietly............
Prem thinks to himself---kamaal hai heer bhadkii nahiin...........LAGTAA HAI PREM BETAA TERA JAADOO CHALNEY LAGAA HAi..........Ek baar Heer...........ek baar palat kar mujhey dekh lo..........phir tumhey meraa honney se koi nahiin rok saktaa.............
Kisna theme plays in the background as prem sees heer leave..........just as she is about to go up the staircase she stops.............turning around she looks at prem and leaves ..............
Prem was elated and he flashes that million dollar smile of his with a triumphant look on his face!.................

Prem has that victtorios smile on his face as he looks at Archana .........Prem raises an eyebrow with a KAISA LAGAA? expression on his face.......

Archana manages to say---WOW!!!!!!!!!! Jeejs u and dii rock!!!!!!!!!!!!! U actually set the floor on fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem goes away from there..........Its night and everyone is having dinner on the dining table..........Manav and Ash r back too..........Ashlesha was busy telling evryone about the dress she had chosen for the engagement while Manav kept on gazing at her...........Ashlesha looks at manav and smiles.............Manav didn't know what kind of tings he was going to face soon and how he would witness the ULTIMATE DECEPTION................

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