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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx yasu09 ……..Glad u enjoyed this one too……….Next part asap…………… hope u like it…………….a very warm welcome to u too dear……………

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx aditifan ……..Glad u enjoyed this one too……….Next part asap…………… hope u like it…………….😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx punjabi0926 ……..Glad u enjoyed this one too……….Next part asap…………… hope u like it…………….😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx stunnistar……..Glad u enjoyed this one too……….Next part asap…………… hope u like it…………….

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Thanx punjabi0926 ??..Glad u enjoyed this one too???.Next part asap????? hope u like it?????.😊

Yes, cant wait for the next part. Please hurry... ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Prem is in his office.........He sits worried..........holding his forehead with his hand.............just when his phone rings.........he picks it up.........and says--- haan rahul bolo?.............

The voice says--- Yes sir mainney pataa lagvaa liya hai............Mrs. Meher Juneja is admitted in City Hospital..........and I talked to the docs...........they say she is fine............aur unkaa bachcha bhi theek hai..............

Prem was relieved...........he thanks the guy he was talking to and keeps the phone down.............he remembers hearing Heer's voice last night...........her words still echoed in his head which ached badly!..............

Manav walks in and sees Prem lost in his own thoughts he says--- Bhaiya!...........Meeting khatam...........and guess what?............Contract humaara...........

Prem looks up and smiles............he congratulates Manav............

Manav says-- Aur abb app mere saath chaleinge..............

Prem asks him-- Lekin kahaan Manav?............

Manav says-- Woh toh surprise hai...........lekin bas aap jaldi se chalo...........aapko kisi se milwaana hai.............

Prem looks at manav confused who almost drags Prem out of his office............

The two reach the parking where Prem sits in the driving seat of his black sedan............as Manav gets into the pasenger seat.............

Prem asks Manav-- Abb toh bataa dey Manav hum kahaan jaa rahey hain?..........

Manav says-- Hotel grand Palace ley lo...........issey zyaada main kuch nahiin bataaongaa..............

Prem gives up and starts the car..............

They reach the hotel...........and the two make way to the coffee shop..............

Prem asks Manav again--- Manav dekh abb bahot hua............atleast tell me hum kissey milney aaye hain?............

Manav stops and says-- There she is..........(he then says softly to Prem)..........wahee club waali ladkii jisskey baarey men mainney aapko bataaya tha...........Ashlesha............I wanted u to meet her.............afterall main ussey jald hii shaaadi karney waala hoon.............Prem stares hard at Manav..............

Manav then calss out--- Hey Ashlesha.............

Ashlesha turns around and sees Manav...........who stodd in front of Prem...........when they reach closer...........manav moves away and says-- yeh hain mere bhaiya............Prem bhaiaya!..............

Prem stared at Ashlesha shell shocked...........as Ashlesha too stood stunned!..............

Prem remebers the fateful night.............and then heer witnessing it all............Heer leaving he at the station...........Prem stood Speechless.............wondering kii itney saalon baad.............pehley Heer.............aur abb Ashlesha..............Kyun?...................

Thre at the Juneja house everyone was gathere in the hall………..Maya……….Meher……….Heer……….Gaytri……….Kuldii and Lalit…………

Maya asks--- Kya hua maa aapney hum sab ko aisey kyun bulaaya?..........

Gaytri replies--- Darassal……….tumhaarey baujii chahtey hain kii iss baar hum Karva chauth kii pooja hum apney ghar par hii rakhein……………kal shaam ko mehendi waalon ko bulaaya hai…………aur parson kii pooja kii zimedaari tumhaari hai Heer………..

Heer nods her head and while others leave from there excitedly…………..Lalit walks upto Heer saying--- Heer puttar tu yeh vrat……..

Heer replies interrupting Lalit--- Pichley cheh saalon se jaise main yeh vrat rakhtii aayi hoon……….iss baar bhi waise hiii rakhoongii…………

Heer leaves from there………..

Gaytri thinks to herself--- Pata nahiin yeh ladkii mere betey ke peechey kyun padii rehtii hai?................

Lalit thinks to himself--- Pichley cheh saalon se tu yeh vrat binaa Prem ke rakhtey aayi hai……………bas kuch aisa ho jaaye kii iss baar ussey dekhkar hii tu apna vrat todey………………

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi bato................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

wwooowww,..nice yaar....but please i request you to take away that ashlesha from the story....please....... and gaya3...i hope she falls down from the terrace and die!!!

thanx fr the pm dera...continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
acha laga... jaldi bata dia naa???
very well written...
waiting for next part....
update asap....
thanx for the pm...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee very niceeeeeeeeeee heer in canada?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice.
Plz heer or prem ko jaldi mila do.
Ab aur intazar nahi hota.

Anyz the update is excellent.
The story is realy moving well.
And i have a feeling that there are more twists and turns.
Am i right?

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