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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx pooji...........Glad u enjoyed this one too dear............next part asap.............hope u like that too...............Thanx once again.................

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx yasu………….Glad u enjoyed this one too dear………..Next part asap………..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx curledup …………a very warm welcome to the FF dear………….😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the PM dear...... its a very nice FF i loved it...........😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone.............first for intros I am PremLeoManav's younger sis...........a hard core Prem heer fan and a silent reader of the forums.............😊
I have posted this update my sis mailed me as she is busy with her presentation this week...........she said she is sorry for the delay and that she was sure this longggggggg update would make for it..............😊
There u see Prem ……….Ashlesha and manv all three r seated on the tale and talking…………within Prem's heart was in a turmoil……….and Ashlesha too was shocked at the turn of events……….she had never………ever imagined coming face to face with Prem………..like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They order their stuff and talk on general things………..when Manav's phone rings and he excuses himself………… Prem and Ashlesha sit awkwardly……….. Ashlesha realizes she had to look uncomfortable………..isliye naatak kartey hue she gets up to leave……….when prem stands to stop her………… He says—Rukk jao Aslesha……….. Ashlesha stops and turns around……….lowereing her eyes she says--- Who Prem………..main………. Prem interrupts saying---- Tum kuch matt kaho Ashlesha……..(Prem's sad music plays in the background)…………..Jo kuch mainney kiya usskey baad mujhey naa tumsey aur naa Heer se maafi kii umeed hai………..Lekin aaj tumhey ek waada zaroor kartaa hoon…………..kii humaarey attet kii kaali parchaai koo tumhaarey aur manav ke rishtey par kabhi nahiin padney dooonga……………main jaanta hoon Manav tumsey aur tum ussey bahot pyaar karti ho……….main khud tum donon kaa rishtaa karaongaa………….aur………… Ashlesha says--- Bas Prem tumney itna kaha mere liye bahot hai………..Manav aa raha hoga……….just forget it……… They both sit silently.......... Prem thinks--- Yeh donon ek doosrey se bahot pyaar kartey hain...........aur Manav...........Manav mere liye sab kuch hai...........usskey siwaa abb meri zindagi mein hai hii kya?.............main apni zindagi key andherey ko Manav kii zindagi mein aayi iss roshini par nahiin padney doonga......... Ashelsha thinks to herself---- Tumney sab kuch sahi kaha Prem sivaay ek cheez ke.........Main Manav se pyaar nahiin kartii.........aaj tak mer zindagi mein itney ladkey aaye aur gaye..........he is just one of them.............jab main issey bore ho jaaongii.........I will leave him too...........yahi socha tha mainney..........lekin abb yeh dekh kar how much he means to u...........bahot mazaa aayegaa Prem usska dil todney mein..........kyunkii jitna dard ussey hoga..........utnaa hii dukh tmhey bhi hoga..........aur main yahii chahti hoon...........(she smiles devilishly)................ Outside u see Manav talking on the phone--- Theek hai Rohan..........get three tickets booked for tomorrow for Ludhiana..........haan likho.........Manav........Ashlesha Maan.......... and Prem Juneja............. Manav keeps the phone down and goes inside.........sees prem and Ashlesha sitting quietly.......... They all get up to leave after a while and Prem says to Ashlesha--- Nice meeting u......... Ashlesha smiles replying--- the pleasure was all mine............ Outside in the parking lot..........Prem goes to get the car...........when Ashlesha stops Manav and coming closer to him she whicspers in his ears--- Manav...........jaantey ho parso karva chauth hai..........aur mainney dicide kiya hai..........iss baar main bhi yeh vrat rakhoongi tumhaarey liye........... Manav is all smiles and he says--- i love u Ashlesha.......... Ashlesha replies--- I luv u too Manav............(jhooti kaheen kii)............... Prem waits in the car for Manav............ They leave and inside the car............Manav asks Prem excitedly--- Kaisi lagii aapko meri pasand bhai?.......... Prem smiles and replies--- She is a nice girl Manav..........approved..........u both r made for each other...........(Prem didn't know how terribly wrong he was!).............. Manav says-- Prem bhaiya hum log kal Ludhiana jaa rahey hain.......... Prem stares hard at Manav saying-- Lekin kyun?........... Manav replies-- Kyunkii wahaan par jaa kar hummein Ambala waali deal karnii hai..........aur main Ashlesha ko bhi saath ley jaana chahta hoon........hummein kuch time toh lagegaa.........aur woh parson Karva chauth ka vrat rakhnaa chahti hai.........isliye main chahata hoon..........I should be with her naa?........... Prem didn't know what to say..........aggar ussney kuch kaha..........yaa manaa kiya toh he knew he would have to reason things out with manav..........aur pichley do dinon mein itney jhatkey khaa kar............Prem was not in a position to argue wih Manav isliye he says--- Theek hai..........kab jaana hai..........

Manav tells him the time............he thinks to himself--- Kamaal hai...........bhaiyaa khud hii maan gaye.........lagtaa hai kismet bhi yahii chahtii hai..........

Kaisa laga?😊
Jaldi batao.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks dear.
Waiting for the next one
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part
so they are all going to ludhiyana............
now there will be some show..........
I want everyone to know the truth about Gayatri and Ashlesha.....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part as ever...
thanx for updating....
will be eagerly waiting for next part...
thanx for pm...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey........

great update.............👏


ashlesha is such a...............🤬


nywys can't 4 premeer to meet so plz update sooonnnnnnnn....
..😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great part and thanks for the PM will wait for the next part and
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