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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx pooji…………… Glad u enjoyed it dear………..Next part asap…………Hope u enjoy that one too…………..yaa Heer meets Jzoo!..............Hope u like Prem Heer meet too when it happens!................😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
It's the next morning in Delhi…………..Manav gets up and is ready to leave for office……………he comes downstairs and goes into Prem's room to make sure he felt fine…………..to his surprise Prem was not there! He comes out and checks every nook and corner of the house ut doesn't find Prem anywhere……………. He then calls up on Prem's mobile…………he doesn't pick up the phone…………Manav gets worried………… He dials at the office………..where at last he gets to talk to Prem………..He says relieved to hear Prem's voice--- Bhaiyaa aap kahaan ho?............Phone kyun nahiin uthaa rahey?...........Aur itni subah subah office mein kyun…………who bhi tab jab aapko chot lagii hai………..mainney socha tha aapko aaj ghar par araam karney ko kahoongaa………..aur aap ho kii mujhse pehley hii office pahonch gaye?!...........this is not done bhai………… Prem smiles and says--- Manav main theek hoon………..aur abb baateih chodo aur jaldi se office aa jao…………u have a meeting in less than an hour………..speed up dear……….. Manav keeps the phone down…………before he leaves he decides to check the voice msgs on the phone………..He clicks the button……… The voice says---- 10 voice msgs………… After a beep Manav hears Ashlesha's voice--- Hi Manav!..........Missing u……….. Another one says--- Manav phone to uthao naa……….can't wait to hear u darling!................ Manav makes a face ……….smiling he thinks--- Ashlesha bhi naa…………meri voice machine ko bhi nahiin chodtii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just as he is about to turn off the machine deleting all the msgs………..Preet's msg begins to play………………….. Manav listens to Preet sobbing startled…………Prem had always deleted the msgs………..yesterday was a mess………..he forgot to do it……….and isliye Manav got to hear Preet…………. Manav stood stunned as Preet's msg ended abruptly…………

Just then Manav's cell phone rings………..it was Aslesha………….

Manav picks up the phone……….he hears Ashlesha say--- Good morning Manav………..mujhey miss kiya………… Manav forgets everything and says smiling--- Tum mujhey khud ko miss karney kaa maukaa kahaan deti ho Ash!..............Most of he time tum mere saath hoti ho…………baaki time main phone par tumhaarey saath hota hoon………..aur just in case…………main bhool jaaon kii there's someone called Ashlesha in my life……………toh meri voic machine hai naa…………who mujhey bhoolney hii nahiin deti……….. Ashlesha is all smiles as she says proudly--- Dekha Mr. Manav?..............I care for u soooooooooooooo much!.................waise………..mujhey apney bhaiya se kab milaa rahey ho?............. Manav remembers the ultimatum Ashlesha had given him last night!............He stammers--- Bas……….bas ajj shaam……….aaj shaam ko hii………..chalo abb main office jaa raha hoon………..I'll talk to u later and tell u the time and place…………. Manav remembers Preet's msg………….

He thinks to himself…………Abb toh kisi bhi tarah prem bhaiya ko Ludhiana leyjaana padegaa…………Lekin kaise?.............Yeh main tabhi sochoonga jab mere dimaag mein aur koi tension nahiin hogi………….aur jab tak main Ash ko Prem bhaiya se nahiin milaa deta……….woh mere dimaag ko preoccupied rakhegii……….isliye pehley Bhaiya aur Ashlesha ko milwaana padegaa………….aur phir Ludhina…………Here we come!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kaisa laga?
Jaldi batao..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Di
Awesum update
ooh so ash will meet prem very soon hmm
very curious now hehehe
loved the update

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sheeba
it was amazing...👏 ash and manav are so funny...lol. cant wait for prem and ash to meet and prem to go to ludhiana...so plz update soon and thanks for the PM...😃



love
Afreen




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Posted: 16 years ago
nice update...
hmm... ash is going to meet Prem... seems like things will be sorting out soon...
thanx for the pm...
will be waiting for next part... update asap...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
it is amazing dear
update soon
pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice updaye cant wait fr next part
ash is going to meet prem
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the PM.....I hope you update soon b/c the update was great😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update
continue asap
ash is gonna meet prem now!!!!! KOOL
thnaks for the pm
pm me!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
just finished reading ur ff n it's awesomeeeeeeeee.................plz update soon and plz pm wen u do......................

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