|| Mohabbat Aapse || Premeer One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: noneeM

Gosh! Me! I was just listening to this song five minutes ago....And I love it! How cool!
My Spot!
Be back...
Big Hug🤗🤗
Love:-Nonee 🤗

Awwww, Me! That was really sad 😭 😭 But so beautifully written. Sorry! 😔 I just loved the song and wasn't in the mood for a happy one!😳

I just fell in love with the lines "This was her destiny. Being surrounded by Darkness" Whoa! Awesome! Loved it! Awww thanks! 😳

And aww...Meet are together. Though I really wish Meher would support her sister more (in the serial, I mean)...Heer is always so loyal and steadfast!!!!!!! Yup...I know what you mean! 😊

And that bit in the kitchen was so sad.... 😭 Sorry! 😔 I don't like making you sad!😳

Actually I can't believe you wrote a PH separation track....Awwww, you must have been so sad writing it. Big hug!! Yeah...torture...actually. I've never written it before! 😔 *hugs back*

I loved it Me! Big big hugs 🤗 And I loved your comments N! 😃
Love:-Nonee

P.S. *naughty wink* I love Preme: (Pre + Me) 😆 Teehee...you could've said Preme I would've gotten it.....that's what Maddy, Radz, Bhav, Shifu, everyone calls 'us'!😉😳

Originally posted by: Garima93

My Spot!

*Edit*

Meeru!!! That was such a good one-shot! I really loved it! As much as you hated separating Premeer, but it still turned out really good! For ur first time separating them, it was written really well! 👏👏 And omg! I LOVE that song! the first time i listened to it, I fell in love with it! Its such a beautiful song!! and it totally suits Prem and heer!! 😳 I loved it Meeru! Keep up the great work!

Luv,
Gari <3333

Originally posted by: munam_13

Meera... *Serious expression* you did it again
[lol]

edit:

*singing* I tried so hard, and got so far.... in the end.....


I had to come back to comment😆... why yaar why?? July is not far... u could have waited....😆 well again you chose one of my fav, I dont know , how that happens... I loved the way you played with the separation track.... Heer's imagination , her love yet her determination of staying bac was fabulously potrayed... and I loved the last part of the shot, when Prem says, he'll always love her😳... that's the chemistry , that's the Premeer bond we miss now.. But I am glad the shots keep it alive😃...

*back to serious expression* YOU did it again * waving index finger in front of you*

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

fablous shot................very nycely wrtn. i really wantd stry to turn up to heer's side i mn is he turn her out frn juneja mansion thn prem shuld suffer all the tym n shuld curse himself every second fr being so henpecked son...............*tears* i knw i m gtng rude but wht to say prem has made me hw can he just...................eeeeewwwwww frgt it but still atlast i want their reunion their luv to win ovr all the evils

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

YOLA!!!!

A serious one eh? Nicely done...don't know the song and got tired of trying to read and understand the lyrics but oh weellls. Loved the rest!!! I mean it made me VERY angry...at Meher, at stupid Prem..and grr...I'm just mad. Heer should have smacked him lmao. But I know you being you; Meera, you could never do that to your Prem. *laughs

Ohh Heer ducking lmao...made me think of a thief ducking in a comedic setting lmao...dunno why. OMG I have SUCH an immature imagination. anyhoo, *hugs! I think this is the most angst full oneshot I've read of yours so far..*claps, good job! -Avi