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Nitty

@Nitty2910

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

this is a wonderful one shot.. but it's little too sad.... I really liked reading it....

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

I'm sorry Sanya, I've let Heer go back WAY too many times...Prem deserves some pain (and I can NOT believe I just said that! 😔)

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urworstnitemare

@urworstnitemare

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Holy Truckings! I CANNOT believe u just said that..though I agree 110% lmao!

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Thanks Nitty! 😊

@avi: *hides face in shame* I know! 😔 He's going to hate me now...

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280866

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
I'm sorry Sanya, I've let Heer go back WAY too many times...Prem deserves some pain (and I can NOT believe I just said that! 😔)

Agreed. 😳

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Which part sanya? What I said...or that I said it? 😳

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urworstnitemare

@urworstnitemare

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

lmao...he doesn't have to see it! Edit girl EDIT! lmao *giggles

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

lmao! I love you Avi! 😛 It's okay...I'll tell him myself, that's why he gets me as a consolation prize! 😉

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Meera! I absolutely adored this shot.

It was so awesome how you wrote Heer as such a strong character. I always feel so annoyed and so ready to bash someone's head in when despite everything that Prem says and does, Heer always takes him back. I mean, I know he loves her, but he doesn't trust her. Not really. And she would have enough, if only she were like the Heer in your fic. I love the fact that you've put in their connection and how they feel for one another, but also the fact that Heer cannot take his lack of trust and being shoved aside so often, only for him to come begging for her to come back. She broke the vicious cycle, and I say good for her!

And I absolutely love the little bit of Meet you added.

Love,
Radz

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Anza

@thesemoments

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Yayy!

OMG 😲 You know this is exactly what I see coming in the future after the Leap. Heer not going with Prem. Our minds think alike. 😆

Well back to the one-shot. I love how you describe Heer's feeling. Beautifully written. Kash Prem Heer ko samage patah. Bechara Prem. He went there to find his Heer and to take her home but I was so happy what Heer did. She walked away. A tragic ending but I still loved it. And i agree with what you said. Prem deserves some pain too. 😵

Write some more okay!

love you

Anza

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