My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 64

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PART45 (a)

Heer slowly took steps inside the house. She had her arms around Prem's shoulders n Prem had all her support. Heer's right arm was around Prem's shoulders n with her left arm she held Prem from his stomach. Prem moved slowly n that also with Heer's support as he was unconscious. It took little long than usual but finally they reached upstairs in Heer's bedroom. Heer opened the door n they moved in. Additi was peacefully sleeping on her side of bed. Heer placed Prem on bed n lovingly looked at him. Heer had tears in eyes n her tears fell on Prem's cheeks. Prem was in state of unconsciousness n Heer was terribly worried for Prem.

Heer immediately opened the drawer of the table beside the bed n took out her diary which had all necessary numbers. Heer called the doctor n told him to reach her place as soon as possible. After ending the call with doctor Prem's cell started ringing. Heer took out his cell from his shirt pocket n answered it. Preet was on the other end.

Conversation between Preet n Heer

Preet: hello PB

Heer: preet

Preet: bhabi aap? bhaiya aapke saath hain?

Heer was worried for Prem n she couldnt answer back

Preet: woh theek to hain na?

Heer: preet prem ko bohot tez bukhaar hai, woh is waqt behosh hai

Preet got worried on the other end

Heer: maine doctor ko phone kar diya hai woh bas aate honge. Tum chinta mat karo woh theek hojaayega

Preet: haan bhabi main chinta nahin karoonga kyunki aap unke saath hain

Heer with worried expression looked at Prem n said: haan preet jab tak main prem ke saath hoon use kuch nahin hoga.

Preet weakly smiled n the conversation ended

Heer went near Prem n sat beside him. He was burning hot in fever. She placed his head on her lap n touched his face with both hands. Finally the doctor arrived n Heer stood up from bed. The doctor checked him thoroughly n stated that he has high fever n due to low energy level his blood pressure decreased n he became unconscious. The doctor told Heer that he have not taken any medicines n since morning he have not eaten anything. It seemed that along with lack of medicines n food he worked hard whole day so he even had work stress which took a toll on his health. The doctor advised one day complete rest n strongly recommended light homemade food.

Doctor: inke sar par thande paani ki patiyaan rakhein aur dawaaiyaan time par dein. Inhein care ki bohot zaroorat hai.

Heer: jee doctor, agar zaroorat pari to main aapko call kardoongi

The doctor left n Heer went in kitchen to fetch cold water n white cloth.

Heer covered Prem's forehead with white cloth soaked in cold water. From time to time she kept on changing the cloth. This went on till nearly 5am. The level of Prem's fever decreased n he was in sleep. Heer felt dizzy while sitting on bed beside him. She then shifted to the sofa n laid there for a while. At 7am she woke up n touched Prem's forehead he seemed fine. She covered him with blanket n went back to sleep on sofa. At 7:30am Prem woke up. His head ached as he got up n sat on bed. He saw Heer infront of him sleeping on sofa. He got up from bed n went near Heer n gazed at her for sometime. Bangs of hair were on her face n Prem placed them behind her ear. He smiled n went back to his bed. Prem felt contented that he took the right decision of coming over to Additi's mansion. In room he was with his wife n daughter thats all that he wanted: to be with his cute mini family. Prem laid down on bed n then went back to sleep. At 9am he woke up n didnt saw Heer on the sofa. He got worried n thought that he might have had a dream of Heer being with him in same room. "heer might be in some other room", he thought. He then saw the bowl of cold water with some used cloths on the table beside the bed. It was clear to Prem that Heer took care of him at night n slept on sofa. Additi was sleeping beside him, Prem got up from bed n headed downstairs.

Premeer in hall

He saw Heer in mandir doing pooja. Prem walked towards her. He stood beside her n with pressed palms prayed to be with Heer always. Heer prayed for Prem's health n his wellbeing. Heer gave aarti to Prem n they had an eyelock session. Prem came near Heer n Heer surprisingly looked at him not knowing what is he upto. Prem with his finger touched the area below Heer's eye. There was a small tear which then rested on Prem's finger.

Prem: meri ek keemti cheez tumhare paas reh gai thi wahi le raha tha

Prem closed his hand, the tear was now safe with Prem

Heer said in heart: main bas yahi chahti hoon ke yeh aansoon tumhari aankhon mein kabhi na aaye

Prem said in heart: meri aankhon mein sirf tumhari tasveer basi hai

Additi came running downstairs n was pleasantly surprised to see her papa

Additi: papa aap

Additi came running towards Prem n hugged him

Additi: papa aap abhi aaye hain?

Prem: nahin beta main raat ko aaya tha

Additi: raat ko? phir mujhe kaise nahin pata?

Heer: woh is liye kyunki aap so rahi thi

Additi: to phir aap ne uthaya kyun nahin?

Heer: kaise uthaati? aap gehri neend mein thi aur agar utha deti to aapke papa ke saath aapka bhi khayal rakhna parhta

Additi: mama! She playfully hugged Heer.

Additi: papa i'm very happy ke aap aagaye maine aapko bohot miss kiya

Prem: maine dono ko bohot miss kiya

He winked at Heer, she after staring at him went away.

Additi: papa aapko hamari itni yaad aayi ke aap raat ko aagaye?

Prem: nahin beta actually meri tabiyat kharab hogayi thi

Additi: oh! to phir mama ne aapka khayal kiya?

Prem: zaroor kiya hoga

Additi: papa aap aaraam karo main masi ke paas jaati hoon

Mitali's room

Mitali was working on some files on her desk when Additi entered in.

Additi: masi aapko pata hai papa aayein hain

Mitali: itni subah subah?

Additi: subah ko nahin woh raat se yaheen hain

Mitali looked confused

Additi: unki tabiyat kharab thi is liye woh yahan aagaye

Mitali: oh to isi liye additi itni khush hai

Additi: haan khush hoon bas ek choti si problem hai

Mitali: kya?

Additi: aaj mama ne school ke liye uthaya hi nahin aur school miss hogaya

Mitali: to us mein udaas hone ki kya baat hai?

Additi: main apne cousins se nahin mil saki na is liye

Mitali brought Additi near n said: additi jo hogaya so hogaya ab aap is holiday ke din papa ke saath enjoy karo

Heer entered in room n told them to be at dining table for breakfast

Mitali n Heer in kitchen

Heer was taking out fresh orange juice from juicer for Prem when Mitali entered in kitchen.

Mitali: main kuch madad karoon heer?

Heer: nahin sab hogaya

Mitali noticed that there were aloo parathas, french toast, yogurt, halwa, tea n juice.

Mitali: aaj do tarhaan ka nashta kyun?

Heer: woh...doctor ke kehne par prem ke liye alag se nashta bana hai, ramu kaka ne banaya hai

Mitali thought: main jaanti hoon heer yeh nashta tum ne doctor ke kehne par nahin balke apne mann se banaya hai

Ramu kaka entered in kitchen

Heer took breakfast n headed out of the kitchen. When Heer left then Mitali asked Ramu kaka: kaka prem ke liye nashta aap ne banaya hai?

Ramu kaka: nahin bitya, aaj ka poora nashta heer madam ne banaya hai main to rasoi mein abhi aaya hoon

Mitali thought: heer tum chaahe kitna bhi chupana chaaho tumhare dil mein sirf prem hai

Breakfast time!

Additi brought Prem to the table n said: papa chalo hum nashta karte hain

Prem n Additi settled on the table while Heer served them breakfast. Heer placed parathas in Additi's plate. She gave her a glass of juice n a smal bowl of yogurt. Heer placed french toast in Prem's plate. There was halwa n a glass of juice for Prem.

Additi: mama mera aur papa ka nashta alag alag kyun?

Heer: additi chup chap nashta karo

Additi: pehle bataiye phir nashta karoongi warna main nahin karoongi

Heer: kyunki tumhare papa ke liye yahi sahi hai, parathe unki sehat ke liye ache nahin hain

Additi: aur halwa kyun?

Heer: kyunki unka energy level low hai is liye unhein iski zaroorat hai

Mitali joined the rest on the table

Mitali: tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai prem?

Prem: ab main theek hoon thanks

Mitali: i hope meri dost ne tumhara acha khayal rakha hoga raat bhar

Heer gave Mitali a serious look

Mitali tried to change the subject by praising the breakfast: additi yeh nashta to bohot tasty lag raha hai

Additi: haan masi nashta bohot tasty hai mama ne jo banaya hai papa ka nashta bhi mama ne banaya hai

Heer: additi tumse kaha na maine chup chap nashta karo

Additi became quiet n took a small piece from parathas for a bite. But as she touched the paratha she shrieked: ouch! garam hai

Before Heer could reach there Prem kissed Additi's little finger. He took that piece n covered it with yogurt n then she ate it.

Prem: garam garam parathe ko thandi dahi mein dubo kar khaane se...

Additi completed the sentence: khana aur bhi tasty lagta hai

Heer smiled, she was impressed by the cordination between father n daughter.

Heer: prem jaldi se nashta karlo uske baad tumhein dawaai khaani hai

Additi: mama aap ne dawaai ka keh ke papa ka mood kharab kardiya, ab to unhein khana karwa lagega

Prem: heer main bilkul theek hoon

Mitali: haan heer prem looks absolutely fine

Heer: kuch fine nahin hai, prem maine kaha na tumse nashte ke baad tumhein dawaai leni hogi

Additi touched Prem's forehead n said: mama aap khud hi dekhlo papa ko bukhaar nahin hai

Heer came ahead n touched his forehead n felt that Prem doesnt have fever

Prem gave a pleading look to Heer n she couldnt decide whether to give him medicine or no

Heer: acha theek hai main doctor se pooch leti hoon

Heer gave a call to doctor n asked him that Prem is feeling much better than last night so how many times in a day should he have medicine?

Doctor: agar prem mein itni jaldi improvement aagayi hai to use sirf ek baar medicine do dopahar ke khaane ke baad

Heer ended the call n told Prem: tumhein dawaai khaani paregi lekin lunch ke baad

Prem had his breakfast n he made his daughter eat her's.

After that Premeer and Additi played hide n seek in hall. Additi had loads of fun with her parents.

Juneja house

Juneja family members were having breakfast, it was a quiet n peaceful atmosphere. The kids have left for school n Gaya3 was gone to mandir. Prem was not home since morning.

Lalit worriedly asked Preet: preet teri prem se koi baat huwi? woh kal raat se ghar nahin aaya? woh theek hai na?

Preet: bauji meri prem bhaiya se baat huwi thi woh bilkul theek hain, kal raat se woh heer bhabi ke saath hain unke ghar par

Lalit: yeh prem bhi kamaal karta hai, are jab un dono ke beech sab theek hai to woh heer ko ghar kyun nahin la raha? heer ko yahaan laane ke bajaaye woh khud heer ke paas pohonch jata hai. Jab dono ek saath hain to yahan is ghar mein kyun nahin rehte?

Preet: bauji in sawaalon ke jawaab to sirf prem bhaiya hi de sakte hain. waise aap PB par itna gussa kyun hain?

Kulraj: preet bauji actually apni poti ko miss karte hain. Isi liye woh chahte hain ke heer aur additi is ghar mein aajayein.

Lalit: additi is pariwaar ki beti hai aur heer bahu. Additi ka poora haq hai is pariwaar ke logon ka pyar aur saath paane ka. Kab tak woh bachi apne hi pariwaar se door rahegi?

During this conversation Meher stayed quiet n looked at Preet n the rest of people, something was bothering her.

Preet n Meher's room

Meher was standing near window, she looked upset. Preet entered n went near her.

Preet: kya baat hai meher? tum itni chup kyun ho?

Meher: preet tum ne bauji ko kyun nahin bataya ke prem jiju ki tabiyat kharab hai?

Preet: meher agar bata deta to woh pareshaan ho jaate jaise ke is waqt tum pareshaan ho. Waise bhi prem bhaiya ab bilkul theek honge kyunki heer bhabi unke saath hain

Meher stayed quiet n looked lost in thoughts

Preet: kya huwa? kya soch rahi ho?

Meher: tumhein pata hai preet aksar log apne beemaar hone ki baat apnon se chupaate hain taake unhein takleef na ho.

Preet: insaan apna dard bardaasht kar sakta hai lekin yeh nahin seh sakta ke uski waja se uske apnon ko dard ho

Meher: lekin main aisa nahin maanti preet

Preet looked at her, Meher had a diffrent point of view.

Meher: dard baatne se kam hota hai. Humein apne pariwaar ke saath mushqilein baatni chahiye isse unki mushqilein barhengi nahin aur naahi unhein dard hoga. Jab ek pariwaar ke log saath hon to woh har mushqil ka saamna kar sakte hain

Preet tried to change the subject: meher tum ne kabhi hamare pariwaar ke baare mein socha hai? hamari cute mini happy family!

Preet came near her for romance n Meher moved him away

Meher: preet har waqt romance. Kitne shetaan hote ja rahe ho tum aaj kal

Preet: sorry par abhi tum koi bahana nahin bana sakti. Waise to har waqt bachon ka bahana banaati ho

He came ahead n kissed her

Meher: tum kabhi nahin sudhroge

Preet: meher tumhein avi ke sudharne ke chances lagte hain?

Meher: nahin

Preet: bilkul baap par gaya hai

He hugged her n scene ended

Premeer n Additi in playroom

Prem was sitting on sofa n reading newspapers while Heer put oil in Additi's head. Prem mischieviously smiles at Heer.

Heer: additi aaj tumhein chutti milgayi isliye tumhare baalon ko ache se oil karte hain aur phir nahaaenge

Additi: okay mama. Papa thank you aapki waja se aaj mujhe chutti milgayi.

Heer: seedhi betho additi

Additi: mama dekho papa smile karte waqt kitne cute lag rahe hain

Prem: not more than you my princess

Additi laughs n moves her head

Heer: prem plz thori dair ke liye chup raho main additi ko oil laga rahi hoon

Additi: mama mere papa ko kuch mat kaho

Prem: thats like my princess, bilkul mujh pe gayi hai

Heer: exactly tumhari tarhaan jab dekho shetaani karti rehti hai. Naughty papa ki naughty beti!

Additi: papa mama ne aapko naughty kaha

Prem: kehne do beta, bohot dinon baad aaj unki aankhon mein apnapan dekha hai

Heer tried to avoid: dekha additi oil se baal kitne ache hogaye hain

Additi: haan! papa plz mujhe bear family utha ke do

Prem: kyun beta?

Additi: meri baby bear bhi oil lagaayegi

Heer: no additi aisa kuch nahin hoga

Additi laughed: mama aap gussa mat karo main mazaak kar rahi thi

While Additi laughed Premeer were lost in a flashback

Premeer flashback

Heer enters in the room n Prem drags her, she now is in Prem's hug.

Heer: prem agar main gir jaati to?

Prem: main tumhein girne nahin deta

Heer: acha!

Prem: ji haan. Kitna waqt laga diya tum ne aane mein kabhi apne bechaare pati ka bhi socha karo. Tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahin guzar raha tha

Heer: are wah aaj bare romantic mood mein ho

Prem: jiski itni pyari biwi ho woh bhala aur kya kare siwaaye romance ke

Heer: romance ke ilawa aur bhi kaam hote hain jin mein kho kar insaan waqt guzaar sakta hai

Prem: kaam to bohot hain heer lekin un kaamon mein mera mann nahin lagta

Heer: to phir aapka mann kis mein lagta hai?

Prem: filhaal to meri pyari biwi mein aur...

Heer: aur? tumhara kisi aur mein bhi mann lagta hai?

Heer released her from Prem's arms n asked in a strict tone: prem sach bataao

Prem: heer main apni beti ki baat kar raha hoon

Heer sighed n Prem hugged her from back n said: mera mann kehta hai ke main apni patni ke saath rahoon aur jab meri beti aaye to uske saath kuch khate meethe pal guzaaroon. meri zindagi tum dono se shuru hoti hai aur tum dono pe khatam.

Flashback ended n Premeer were lost in an eyelock session

Precap: Premeer in hall in a romantic mood. Heer confesses to Prem that she loves him a lot. All the differences and misunderstandings are over n they experience a beautiful hug which consist of their unconditional love. Finally Premeer are one n together!!!

Originally posted by: tasnime

Hey ! Just read ur FF in a row .. I must tell u, u r an excellent writer .. Plz update soon and do PM me whenever u update :)

Originally posted by: yasu09

hey,
this ff is rely awesomeeeeeee.......................
can't wait for the next part............
so plz update soonnnnnnn.............

Yaz
😃

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
amazing update...👏 additi is so cute...😛 cant wait for the next part...continue soon and thanks for the PM...😊


love
Afreen

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeee

great part

loved it

love prem and heer and additi scenes

continue soon

thanks for mailing

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

Awesome update

abt precap is it prem LOL

Originally posted by: nuptalie

I think it's a puppy.......😆

A nice part.
thanks for updating.
Update the next part soon too.

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey, i read ur ff now. it was awesome.
update soon plzz