My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149

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Mahum talpur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

hey zehra again it was brilliant...loved it

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#612

loved da way of heer scolding prem...poor prem he always gets scoldings bt still there is love hidden in her scolding.additi is too cute,love premeer and additi.you hav described each character in an awesome way.

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Rehma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

plz update soon i cant wait.u had done a gr8 job,loved premeer n additi scenes its awesomes parts.

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#614

wow again its excellent part,i loved it.dialouges n scenes r superb.loved premeer n additi scenes in beach.

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

additi is cute,heer scold prem dat so bad but loved is hidden in scolding.u describe beautifully n i must say u r great writer.dialouges n scenes r very nice.

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

precap sound interesting its mean now will see premeer scenes becos prem is not well n heer will take care of prem.plz update soon now i cant wait.

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amazingneira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

wow nice they are coming close.. gud one

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Rehma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

premeer r one its true aaj heer ne sabit kar diya dat how much he loved prem dat why she thinks dat koi apna problem main hai its means how much she loved prem