My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

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Posted: 15 years ago

#621

hey
that was amazing....👏 hope prem is fine...cant wait for the next part...continue soon...and thanks for the PM...😊

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Afreen

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#622

brilliant work
iam dieng to read next part
update the next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#623

the beach scene was nice..additi's idea 2 go 2 beach was awesome they spent sum time 2gethar.additi is very cute+smart just like her mom dad😉

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#624

i feel sad prem was nt well still worked alot bt one thing is surely grt...now heer will realize how much she loves prem as she cant see prem in pain.wow still heer feels prem,dis shows thier true love 4 eachother

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#625

i loved prem's dialouge''excuse me kisi k kamre mein nhi apni biwi k kamre mein tha'' in it prem heer par apna haq jata raha tha which showed thier love n dat they hav right on eachother .

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#626

all prem's dialouges were very sweet n additi's most cute.heer's scoldings were even grt wid love hidden in it.last scene at additi's mansion was very small bt loved it da most and also loved da beach scene wid flashbaks.grt ff👍🏼

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#627

i just loved heer's watever! dats so cute.....the scene where u gave flashbaks one after da other was unbelievable.prem's dialouge ''parwah ka yeh rishta pyaar ka rishta hai'' was lovely it showed prem's confidence...over all like always an amazing part dear.

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Mahum talpur

@Crazy_94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#628

like always the best precap..its da best n cant waiit 4 next prt.plz update it soon.next prt again premeer..wow!

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#629

hey simply loved the premeer scoldings scene n must say aditi is damn cute thanks for pm waiting for next update eagerly

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#630

i loved all prem dialouges n sab se zyada i loved prem dialouges was when he say parwah ka yeh rishta pyaar ka rishta hai its proved dat how much he loved prem its superb.additi is so cute i loved her.da way heer say whatever its so cute.

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