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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Actually I pulled an all-nighter. :) Movies, movies and...movie. Going to grab some sleep now.

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

*nods* I wondered why you were up so early, but you're just sleeping really really late! 😆 Sweet dreams then!

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Part 2

Fourteen years later little had changed, though now, certain relationships had a much more defined name such as husband and wife. Prem and Heer were married for 3 years now, both blissfully happy. Preet and Meher had tied the knot shortly after and were approching their first year anniversary. Rajveer, as expeceted had many flings over the years but everyone knew that he now nursed a soft spot for Ashlesha. No one quite knew how they both ended up together, all that mattered was that when there was a party or a gathering, Ash and Rajveer showed up together. Hand in hand. Smiling. Happy.

'But was she happy?' mused Ashlesha. Her boyfriend was great, everything she had ever wanted. But there was something missing. She knew many girls would kill to be where she was today. A sucessful woman who worked along side the Juneja brothers in their empire, a wonderful family, a loving boyfriend and not to mention of course, a killing body.

She rememberd it as clear as ever. She had been working on a report, over a Saturday night, not to unusual for her when her fuse had blown. That night was when she realized...

She jumped because of the sudden doorbell. Wondering who it could be, in this pouring rain, she got up, huddled in a sweater to go answer it, and there stood Rajveer, wet to the bone, with a bag in his hand. Sheepishly, he held it up.

'Maa figured you would be hungry.'

She smiled and thanked him gracefully. He had asked her why she was sitting in the dark with a couple of candles and she had admitted to her having to have no idea what to do when her fuse had blown. He had offered and went over to the next room to where the box was to try and fix it.

She lit another candle and followed him. There she stood, not sure how to help him, but eager to as much as she could. In just candlelight, she observed his face. His face was drawn in concentration as he struggled with the casing, his shirt clinging to his body, very slight muscles pulsing.

Shocked at herself, she took a step backwards. Her movement caused him to meet her eyes and at that moment, she knew what was going to happen. For a few seconds, no one spoke. He slowly, turned to face her. Goosebumps were making their way all over her body even though all he was doing was looking at her. He took the candle from her and set it down, his eyes never leaving hers. Neither spoke.

And then someone moved, Ash couldn't have said who. She could feel the wall behind her, and the feel of his arms around her waist. He was warm, solid and smelled slightly of rain and something she couldn't put her finger on. As soon as they touched, all thoughts escaped her mind.

She reached up, stroking the back of his neck, slowly. She heard him sigh into her hair. He leaned back, hesitated for a second and tentatively brushed his lips against hers. Again. Harder and with more passion. A slow long kiss. Stopping was impossible.

She couldn't remember when they left that room and ended up on her bed. All she was concisious of was the weight of his body against hers. It was she who slipped her hands under his shirt, almost, quietly asking him a question. He slowly met her demands, and asked for his as well which to she replied.

That had taken place the year after Prem and Heer had gotten married, the night after Preet and Meher were enganged. Still Ashlesha had not been able to find the answer to the question that had haunted her while she was with Rajveer that night. Why she couldn't stop thinking about Preet.

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I know it's kinda short but its all I could manage without sleep for about 26 hours now. 😆 The above "chapter" was inspired from a book my friend lent me to read "Bitter Chocolate" which was so good, I spent all night reading it. While watching movies. 😆 Comments or hits of the "like" button are greatly appreciated! 😃

--shabz

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

my spot! 😊 And it WILL be edited shortly...

*edited*

I loved it...and now I wanna read this book, whose the author? I shall get it from the library! 😳

The whole concept of her not sure about the whole thing with Rajveer....was written really well...and I loved the way you showed the progression with them, because of the rain and the whole candles...and just the setting was beautiful! 😳

I hate that whole bit about Preet, but because of your whole ff setting, I'm going to let it go! 😳

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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420366

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

My Spot!!!!Yay!I'm thrilled you updated!!Yay!!!

Be back....

Love:-Nonee

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
my spot! 😊 And it WILL be edited shortly...*grumbles*

*edited*

I loved it...and now I wanna read this book, whose the author? I shall get it from the library! 😳Lesley Lokko or something like that. 😆 Hang on lemme check....yup thats it :_

The whole concept of her not sure about the whole thing with Rajveer....was written really well...and I loved the way you showed the progression with them, because of the rain and the whole candles...and just the setting was beautiful! 😳 Thanks Meera, glad I gave you something to enjoy! 😆

I hate that whole bit about Preet, but because of your whole ff setting, I'm going to let it go! 😳I didn't even do anything! aaage aage dekho...hotha hai kya....😉

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Me too Meera! Hang in there! :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Shabzie, what a master you are at this....creating atmosphere and building up the story...I'm totally enthralled! Can't wait for more...

I loved the way you've written the flashback....the intensity and the moments loaded with sensual feeling....*fans herself* I got caught in it....*blushes*(good thing it wasn't Preet or I would have melted away....😆)

Three sentences that blew me away:
"That night was when she realised..."
"...and at that moment she knew what was going to happen"
"Why she couldn't stop thinking about Preet"

Loved it. Big hugs Shabzie. Amazing stuff. (Although I could ask myself that last question above as well...😆😆😆

Love:-Nonee

P.S. I did it again! Reserved a spot and utilised another one to comment! I need medical help!*Runs off shaking head* Sorry!

Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: noneeM
Shabzie, what a master you are at this....creating atmosphere and building up the story...I'm totally enthralled! Can't wait for more...Awww thanks a ton, master and creater of PTG's. *bwos down*

I loved the way you've written the flashback....the intensity and the moments loaded with sensual feeling....*fans herself* I got caught in it....*blushes*(good thing it wasn't Preet or I would have melted away....😆) Oh calm your pants - and go put those PTG's on. 😆

Three sentences that blew me away:
"That night was when she realised..."
"...and at that moment she knew what was going to happen"
"Why she couldn't stop thinking about Preet"
Loved it. Big hugs Shabzie. Amazing stuff. (Although I could ask myself that last question above as well...😆😆😆Glad you liked it N! Hugs back! 🤗 And we could ALL ask ourselves the last question. 😆

Love:-Nonee

P.S. I did it again! Reserved a spot and utilised another one to comment! I need medical help!*Runs off shaking head* Sorry!No worries, just hope you don't do something dodobrainish on your exams! 😆

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Honey, I'm home! Can you tell I'm thrilled to be back home? Oh, I'll miss Sydney, and especially my cousins, but I've been away from my home for almost two months!

my spot.

*edited*

Tackle? *panicked muh* What? Why? What did I do?? 😆 Apparently, she's supposed to give me a hug from you too? 😆

Shabzie, the part had me wincing. I mean, here Ash has this guy completely smitten with her, who adores her, dotes on her, and what does she do? She imagines Preet when she's with him. *sigh* She's going to be a problem. *pause* Can I kill her? And then get Rajveer all to - erm, I mean, give Rajveer a girl who he deserves and who deserves him?

I love the fact that PremHeer are already married, and so are Meet! *dances* But - Ash. *glares* She's with someone, she should be happy, but she's in love with Meher's Preet? Meher's Preet, not hers. Never hers. So back off you chudail! *pouts* Can I please kill her?

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago