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Originally posted by: rankanrock

hey.....! just read it.... pretty decent start.. i liked it...😊.... i like the way they are always fighting with each other...... 😆😆😆 do drop me a pm when you update again...!😊 Glad you enjoyed it! :) Yea, the fighing is probably going to make an encore - haven't decided yet. Will do! Thanks again!

Cheers,

Maham

Originally posted by: -Anza-

ohh..yea add me to the PM list.

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot!

And add me to the PM list. *check*

And the VM is yours. *ignore*

*edited*

Anyone see the smoke already pouring out of Ash's ears? 😆 I mean, she seems so full of herself (already) that she would not like the attention immediately going to Meher nah? 😆I plan to make it more and more intense as the story progresses.

Oh but I love that Preet and Meher have been best friends for ever, it makes it all the cuter. Childhood love and all that. And Meher slapping Preet for calling her 'motti'? I could so see that happening! 😆 And then Preet kissing Meher, and her screaming, could see that too! This Rajveer na, is one of a kind. He'll be there in the future? As a good guy I hope? I like him already, he seems the casanova type (at 10!) 😆.You know choti Meher being kissed and screaming? That kinda is my interpertation of what BD would be like at a park at that age. 😆 Ummm so far I have no intention of turning him bad. That's all I will say. 😆

And PremHeer, already the lovebirds. Oooh, so so cute! Minor part - warning you already!

Continue soon Shabz. *nods*

And the VM is yours. I maintain that. 😉Kinda a waste of time seeing as you will never convince me but whatever, *ignores again*

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine mine mine mine mine! 😃 And I'd like to be pm'd as well, no idea when it'll be edited though shabzie! 😳 Cholly Added you to the list, and do NOT worry about comments, I already told you that! 😆

This one shot worked PERFECTLY into your FF! 😳 And boy am I glad it did, not that I wouldn't love it otherwise!😆😆Yea, originally it was going to be just that, but I just added a couple of things and voila it worked! 😛

Just the concept of Meet as adorable bff's and then Premeer already smitten by age 9ish? 😛 Crazy! 😆 Wow....go Rajveer! 😛 😆 Relax your pants - this is that only part with young kids. Be prepared for a leap! 😆

Can't wait for more! 😃

And LOVED the vm Radzie! 😃*smirks* Thanks Meera, will be sure to tell her.

Love you,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: noneeM

Oh!My!Goodness! This has to be the most amazing first chapter EVER! It's brilliant Shabzie! I loved it.....Dude. *shakes head at comment*

My Spot! Be back in a bit!

Love:-Nonee

Backkk...
Shabzie.....like I said a few moments ago, what a simply awesome start....I just stared at the screen, feeling all my inner wishes jump right out of my mind and dance across my eyes....😆 Did I make any sense there😆 But seriously, I am a TOTAL sucker for stories that begin when the chief protagonists are little, playing together, growing up together and then.......realising that they just can't do without each other....And you are writing my heart's fondest desire.....such a tale with PREET in it 🤗 This is going to be the most awesome story ever.....I just know it! Wow! S! And I'm totally reading this with my PTG (ignoring the "Moti" bit, of course, he can call Meher that😆😆)
N, you never make any sense! :) OHOH! heads up, this is the only part with them as kids, so you can relish in this parts, but they are all older in the next ones. :) aha don't worry I would ignore the "motti" part as well. 😆 Glad you like it!

And I am fascinated by the way you write. It's gonna be so intense and wonderful, I can just predict. And I loved the VM. That was fabulous! I dunno about wonderful, but I'm going to try and make it intense. *fingers crossed*

@A and @S: Hats off.....an encore!!!!!!!! Amazing VM....Kudos to the 'visualiser' and the 'creator'/'facilitator'....Great VM!!!! me no taking any credit. I just gave her the scenes and the song - she MADE IT HAPPEN! 👏

I simply adore mini Preet....he is just whom I should have met when I was six..... 😍 And I loved the way you have described mini Preet.....the swagger, the smirk, the coolness, the holding out his hands a la SRK...awwwww, I ma so kidnapping mini Preet....Now I need another pair of special glasses.....maybe a 'Age Shrinking PTG' s that I can read this over and over again without feeling like a cradle snatcher....(Kidnapping though is a superb idea😆)Kaash na? We met someone like him then? 😆 LOL - I knew you would like him. Hmm you should open a whole like story - revolving around the idea of PTG's.

And how cute are Prem B and Heer D.....Loved the way you've described them to be loony about each other.....right from the cradle...AwwwwwwYups - childhood sweethearts. 😆

Hmmmm, Rajveer mocking mini Preet.....poor Preet.....talk about peer pressure....oh! you can come kiss me anyday Preet*eeps....runs away, not to blush and die of embarrassment but to try and daydream in peace*😆 I have to go finish some home work actually, these days, because of my tendency to leave LAMBE comments, Shabzie, I'm hardly getting any sleep....not that it matters.....sleep is anyway frequently punctuated with Preet dreams, so at the end of it, I wake up....Pre-freshed😆 Hit me on the head somebody! 😆*ignores the fist part* OMG Nonee, go do your homwork and work! I don't need these gazillion pages of comments. 😆 ts the quality of the comment, not the qunaitity. 😆 Ohhh my pleasure. *hits N on the head*

Sorry, my fingers ran away with me again....!!!!! And I love the way you described the summer being one where the two cuties avoided each other like plague. Very well written!PB throwing rocks into the river....How cute!!!!!And, "You screamed" "I did not!" Adorable!!!!!And the last two words.....'Watching!' 'Waiting!' C'est magnifique!!!!!!Thanks N! LOL< the ending was my fave part as well! :)

Am out of words now.....I loved it totally S! I can't wait for more! And as I have exams coming up in the not so far future😆 I insist you add me on to the PM list...Thanks(Big Hug) FINALLY! 😆 Ohh good luck and STUDY!

Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

My Spot! (and of course, I want to be on the PM list! =D) xx*check*

*EDIT ADD*

What a way to start Shabo! Simply amazing! 👏👏👏 I absolutely loved it! 😳 You knew I was really looking forward to this FF, and you went beyond my expectations! 👏 I could totally see it playing out in front of me, a little Meher and little Preet and their cute little antics 😆 *phew* Glad you liked it Z! I kinda don't have anything written out besides this. 😆 I hate it when you have ideas but can't pen them down.

I love how they see love as something boring and horrible.😆 Just wait until they get older! 😆 I remember the old days when I used to stay away from boys thinking they had germs and even didn't like to touch them, haha! 🤣 Oh I miss being small, things were so much easier then, hehe! 😆 Cooties. Oh we used to give each other the cooties shot and all of that. 😆

Anyway, yeah so it was so cute and nostalgic to read the bit about Preet kissing Meher and her being completely grossed out by it! 😆 Of course, being at that age she can't comprehend feelings of love even if she does have those feelings, so her reaction was totally justified! 😳 And Preet, tsk tsk, boys will be boys- had to go and lay one on her didn't he? 😆 What could he do? His pride was at stake. 😆

Hmmm, so Ashlesha is in this story 🤔 I am guessing she will be the one stirring the pot of trouble between Preet and Meher 😒! One thing I really loved was how Preet didn't give a second glance to Ash and went to Meher as soon as he spotted her! 😳 So sweet! 😳 And I loved Meher's jealousy at seeing Preet with Ash! 😆 Each detail was so perfect, great job Shabz! 👏 I even loved the way you added in how their siblings have influenced them! 😳 Yups she is in here - no pretending about that, lets see how it goes then shall we? 😆 Aww thanks a ton!

It was so cute of Preet to say 'not that I didn't like it' in regards to his peck, I think it was so adorable! 😳 I love the story already and I can't wait to see how you take this story furthur. I am looking forward to see how Preet and Meher fall in love as they grow older! 😳 Oh that's where you are mistaken...*evil smirk* Ready for a leap? 😆

And of course the VM was amazing, great job as always Radz! 👏*claps along with Z*

Continue soon! You must be so relieved now that you've finished school! 😆 Have you already started organising the parties? 😉😆 And if you thought this comment was long then get used to it! 😆 Remember ages ago I said to you that if I had the chance I would have left you long analysis's for HSSH! Well, I will make up for that now! 😆I will - omg TOTALLY! The feeling is like no other - till of course we get our marks back 😆 Awww Z, so sweet, but like I tell EVERYONE! It's not quantity but quality! :)

Love you loads, Zahra xx

(BTW- I even thought the disclaimer was amazing, hehe! 😆 Is that weird? 😕) Not at all. It might even be useful, but there might be parts that are a lil..mature...so I thought I would get that out. 😆