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jamune

@jamune

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

me toooo yeah u finally started writing it please add to pm list

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jamune

@jamune

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

please update soon and also please add me to pm list love th first part

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

My Spot! (and of course, I want to be on the PM list! =D) xx

*EDIT ADD*

What a way to start Shabo! Simply amazing! 👏👏👏 I absolutely loved it! 😳 You knew I was really looking forward to this FF, and you went beyond my expectations! 👏 I could totally see it playing out in front of me, a little Meher and little Preet and their cute little antics 😆

I love how they see love as something boring and horrible.😆 Just wait until they get older! 😆 I remember the old days when I used to stay away from boys thinking they had germs and even didn't like to touch them, haha! 🤣 Oh I miss being small, things were so much easier then, hehe! 😆

Anyway, yeah so it was so cute and nostalgic to read the bit about Preet kissing Meher and her being completely grossed out by it! 😆 Of course, being at that age she can't comprehend feelings of love even if she does have those feelings, so her reaction was totally justified! 😳 And Preet, tsk tsk, boys will be boys- had to go and lay one on her didn't he? 😆

Hmmm, so Ashlesha is in this story 🤔 I am guessing she will be the one stirring the pot of trouble between Preet and Meher 😒! One thing I really loved was how Preet didn't give a second glance to Ash and went to Meher as soon as he spotted her! 😳 So sweet! 😳 And I loved Meher's jealousy at seeing Preet with Ash! 😆 Each detail was so perfect, great job Shabz! 👏 I even loved the way you added in how their siblings have influenced them! 😳

It was so cute of Preet to say 'not that I didn't like it' in regards to his peck, I think it was so adorable! 😳 I love the story already and I can't wait to see how you take this story furthur. I am looking forward to see how Preet and Meher fall in love as they grow older! 😳

And of course the VM was amazing, great job as always Radz! 👏

Continue soon! You must be so relieved now that you've finished school! 😆 Have you already started organising the parties? 😉😆 And if you thought this comment was long then get used to it! 😆 Remember ages ago I said to you that if I had the chance I would have left you long analysis's for HSSH! Well, I will make up for that now! 😆

Love you loads, Zahra xx

(BTW- I even thought the disclaimer was amazing, hehe! 😆 Is that weird? 😕)

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey fab ff luv da concept god its going to be fun ash jelous already wow

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Anza

@thesemoments

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Haaq! ohh...i already love the title!

reserved. 😛

Eeepp! How cute is the start? Absoultly cute. 😳

Prem and Heer always stare at eachother. hehe. Prem and Heer are always together.

haha Preet called Meher motti 😆. He'll never change. Always messing with everyone. Rajveer teasing Preet about having a girlfriend. how cute. Preet and Meher are so cute. Meher says Ewww!! 😆

The first part was really cute shabo!!! I liked it. 😳

Continue soon!

Love you

Anza

Edited by -Anza- - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

mine mine mine mine mine! 😃 And I'd like to be pm'd as well, no idea when it'll be edited though shabzie! 😳 Cholly

This one shot worked PERFECTLY into your FF! 😳 And boy am I glad it did, not that I wouldn't love it otherwise!😆😆

Just the concept of Meet as adorable bff's and then Premeer already smitten by age 9ish? 😛 Crazy! 😆 Wow....go Rajveer! 😛 😆

Can't wait for more! 😃

And LOVED the vm Radzie! 😃

Love you,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey
wow that was awesum
loved the concept and title of ur ff
add me to pm list too

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jamune
me toooo yeah u finally started writing it please add to pm list

Originally posted by: jamune
please update soon and also please add me to pm list love th first part

Thank you!! :) Yups will add you now!

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey fab ff luv da concept god its going to be fun ash jelous already wow

Glad you like it! :)

Originally posted by: -Pooji-
hey
wow that was awesum
loved the concept and title of ur ff
add me to pm list too

Hey, thanks for the comment - glad you liked it! Adding you now! :)

@Z, Meera, Anza : Thanks for reserving guys! :) Can't wait to see your comments and Meera - don't worry about it! 😛

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Anza-
Haaq! ohh...i already love the title!

reserved. 😛

Eeepp! How cute is the start? Absoultly cute. 😳 Thanks! :)

Prem and Heer always stare at eachother. hehe. Prem and Heer are always together. Janonom ki saathi na? 😆

haha Preet called Meher motti 😆. He'll never change. Always messing with everyone. Rajveer teasing Preet about having a girlfriend. how cute. Preet and Meher are so cute. Meher says Ewww!! 😆 LOL, you highlighted all my fave parts!

The first part was really cute shabo!!! I liked it. 😳

Continue soon!

Love you

Anza

Thanks Anza, I will! :)

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

hey.....! just read it.... pretty decent start.. i liked it...😊.... i like the way they are always fighting with each other...... 😆😆😆 do drop me a pm when you update again...!😊

Cheers,

Maham