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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
awesum super update
loved it
thankz for pm

Originally posted by: sourpuss

My spot.

I really shouldn't reserve. It makes me lazy. 😛That's why I don't reserve unless I HAVE to leave a long comment - like your Auction shot. 😆

Anyway!

Aww I loved the Raj-Ash thing. I'd say they make such a cute pair, but I need to see more of them first. 😆 But yeah, like someone earlier said, the bit with Preet makes me a little wary. She's gonna come between them, isn't she? When are you bringing in the two of them as a couple anyway? OK I'll come out and say it - YES Ash is going to be a problem and hopefully I'll bring them in soon...next part? Maybe I'll write it today....hmm....or not. 😛

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

My Spot! xx

(BTW, you are SO mean! 😆)

*EDIT ADD*

You made Preet and Meher married already? 😲 And there I was, looking forward to reading about how they fall in love. 😆 Can I beg you to give us flashbacks, hehe? 😳 I guess since they are married it will be even more interesting to see the strength of their relationship and how they overcome any obstacles together. 😳 After reading the update I guess I got what you meant about some parts being quite mature! ☺️😆 You wrote it incredibly well Shabz, hats off to you! 👏

Yea, I got them already married. Yes, I think I might have to put in flashbacks to make sure the VM works at points. LOL - thanks Z, I was really nervous about all of that. 😆

The whole setting was perfect, the way he helped her as if she was a damsel in distress. 😳 I could actually imagine her sitting in the dark surrounded by thoughts of Preet and Meher's engagement feeling pain and jealousy. And you made Rajveer sound so hot *sigh* ☺️ So well written Shabz, the way you set the scene, the tension, I could picture everything- amazing part! 👏 This update had me quite confused, because on one hand I wanted to be angry at Ash, yet on the other hand I couldn't help but feel sorry for her and for Rajveer at the same time 😔 *sigh* You like Rajveer as well? Hmm guess I'll have to keep him positive now, was looking foreward to corrupting him. 😆 JOKE - don't worry he's good. And GOOD - you are confused!

From what I can see she truly loves Preet, and her passionate night with Rajveer was her way of wallowing in sorrow and trying to drown out the reality of her life- the reality that states that her love is unrequited 😔 I wonder how many other times she has used Rajveer in order to forget about her pain! I feel for her really, but I know I will end up hating her soon if she tries to create problems between Preet and Meher 😒 I guess she thought that surrendering herself to Rajveer would make her forget about Preet, yet still thoughts of him engulfed her. 😳 Well that was the first time she "used" him - so far, I have none others planned, but I'm doubting there will be any. 😆 And that last line - I like the sound of it.

The fact is that no matter how hard she tries, the fact is that she loves Preet and not Rajveer, even though the attraction between her and Rajveer is clearly there. 😉 And I also feel for poor Rajveer who probably imagines a future with Ashlesha, yet has absolutely no clue about the love she nurtures for his brother! 😔 I can't wait to see what you have planned, and will look forward to the next part! I enjoyed reading every bit of it! 😳You and your too-death anylasis. 😆 Well Rajveer and Preet are not brothers, but friends, basically raised together. But thats neither here or there. 😆 Thanks for the comment Z! :)

Love Zahra xx

Originally posted by: firza

i really like ur ff...especially the first part where they were all little kids =D...plz add me to ur pm list and continue soon 👏