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Posted: 16 years ago
You know, at first, I would have felt sorry for Ash, for being in love with her best friend's husband, and feeling guilty for it. Then that line 'if she were his wife', the fact that she could even think such a vindictive thing, and then go around and smile sweetly at Meher, was so - ergh! I wanna throttle her. Especially considering the fact that she said yes to Rajveer, (poor Raj!) and he's so happy about it. And she's all two-faced. And that bit where she's taking in Preet's form. I don't blame her, but she's engaged for crying out loud! And he's in love with his wife damnit!

Shabzie, I don't know how long you're going to torture us before everything explodes, but I cannot wait till that happens!

Love,
Radz
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛
*edited*

You were so not lying in that disclaimer! 😛 Not that I have a problem with...well I do when it's Ash...😔Why would I have lied? 😆

Anyways....she's already making me super mad...and then course the ever adorable Heer has to go and keep her here until the wedding! 😔 I don't like it...I don't like it one bit! 😔 Yup, there is going to be a TON of crap happening...hopefully. 😆

Stupid ash....(can you believe this is me? I've been a Presha fan for SO long...I blame you, Radz and Bhav for this! *points fingers* *hides from Rinki* She will KILL ME! 😆

But damn...Shabzie! That was HOTT! 😳 I got all warm thinking about it...course in my head it was Prem, but still *shakes head to get back on track* *shakes head* Thanks. 😛

She's making me mad! 😔 But I still want you to continue asap! 😃In about a week, hopefully. :)

Love you,

Meera😳

P.S. Look at the length of that comment? 😛Do you know what I'm thinking? It starts with 'ch' and ends with GRATER!



Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Another nyc updt...... 😊.....i jst luv d way u portray Ash's feelings....N don't 4get 2 add me 2 ur PM list,if u hv one......



Thanks a ton! And yup, just added you! :)

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
awesum super update
loved it
thankz for pm



Hey Poonam, thanks a ton and again no problem! :)

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

Ashlesha makes me soo madd. You have no right to mess up Meets life.😡
I hope you are talking about Ash and not me. 😆
Shabz di what can I say it was ... really gud. I love the writing style you chose👍🏼
Thanks a ton Lily!
Just a request.. plz could you add fluffly meet scenes b4 aslesha thing
Hmmm, actually that might work in my favor! Thanks for the suggestion!
Btw i was a silent reader of your other ffs and they were awesomeeeee.
Aww really? Thanks a lot!
Love Lily



Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

o0hh myy goshhh loll😃

ii just caught up w/ all ur updatess
andd it is the mostt AMAZINGG ff i ever readdd ...hehee u got me addidctedd to thiss ff ...when ii reached part 4 ii was likee o0h noo i wanna read moree partss
so0 im looking forward for more of ur brilliant updatess
oh yea 1 more thing can u plz add me to ur pm list will be waiting for moree
uff yeh ash bhi na...she knows it aint right yes she still drools over sexcii preet .....well its not all her fault Preet toh haiye aisa 😳lollz
keep it upp ur gr8👏
luv rumsha



Hey Rumsha! New reader!! :) YAY! Thanks a ton for reading and commetning! True say woman, preet toh asa hi hai! :) Yups added you! Thanks again! And BTW: Where is your username inspired from?

Originally posted by: sourpuss

OHMYGOD. *is shocked at Ash* *is shocked that you wrote Ash doing that*

*is unable to think of anything else to write*
OHMYGOD.
Love,
Bhav (:



I'm assuming I shocked you? Good. Thanks di. 😛

Originally posted by: jamune

omg

no preet cant do that with meher



Aww don't worry, Preet won't do anything..YET...it's all Ash right now. 😆

Originally posted by: noneeM

Wow! Shabzie *looks at Shabzie, utterly awestruck!!!!* That totally BLEW my mind away.....Aww thanks! :)

I don't blame anyone (even Ash!)for being entranced with Preet. He is so entranceable...[Okay, hit me on the head....this is what studying does....!] Just kidding about Ash! The things I'd like to happen to her...Hmmm! Now, there's a thought😆Honestly, I should thrown in a cameo for you, with you hurting Ash..now THAT would be entertaining.

Loved the opening paragraph! So, Ash totally covets her cousin's husband....Hmmm! What fascinates me is the way this story is moving! Shabzie, you're a a genius! I adore this story and the way you're writing it! I don't even know which way the story is moving in. 🤣 Thanks!

[Hmmmm, If I was his wife (*electrified by shock at thought*) I would comb his hair with my fingers...😆 Sorry, Sorry! Sorry! Ignore....] Ignoring...😆

And how cute is Rajveer, so utterly happy at being engaged*cutie* Isn't he?

*Distracted by sentence where Preet lies bare chested, asleep....sounds of insane person drooling in the background😆* After a while....or a lifetime of sighs....Okay! So, getting back....Oh!My!Gosh! S! this part's written so utterly fabulously...you deserve an award for it. And how am I gonna be able to focus on anything while I'm just wondering what's gonna happen next.....I knew you would comment on that! Aww thanks so much N, honestly your comments are so fab!

Absolutely briiliant S! Have no other words! I loved it. And can't wait to read the next part. You have no words? Shocker!

Love:-Nonee



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

You know, at first, I would have felt sorry for Ash, for being in love with her best friend's husband, and feeling guilty for it. Then that line 'if she were his wife', the fact that she could even think such a vindictive thing, and then go around and smile sweetly at Meher, was so - ergh! I wanna throttle her. Especially considering the fact that she said yes to Rajveer, (poor Raj!) and he's so happy about it. And she's all two-faced. And that bit where she's taking in Preet's form. I don't blame her, but she's engaged for crying out loud! And he's in love with his wife damnit!

Shabzie, I don't know how long you're going to torture us before everything explodes, but I cannot wait till that happens!

Love,
Radz



Your comment looks weird without it's usual color 😆 Hmhm, yup Ash is a HUGE b*tch no? 😆 aha I KNEW you would be heartbroken over Raj. Am I good or am I good? (preens* Yups yups, she's evil. Oh it's not going to explode for a while I'll tell you that. :) Thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Taking the situation in your last update, it's slightly ironic that in todays epi Ash 'supposedly' seduced Prem na??!?!!?

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Posted: 16 years ago
i was talking bout ash first preet now prem😕

Keep on writing
and thnx for taking the suggestion😳
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rakhie_08

Taking the situation in your last update, it's slightly ironic that in todays epi Ash 'supposedly' seduced Prem na??!?!!?



Huh. You think someone on the creatives team is reading my ff? Oh damn, going by that, doesn't seem like the show is going to be very happy. :)

@Lily: Yea true. I'll update hopefully by Tuesday maybe? 😳 The scenes might not come immediately but I have a couple planned. 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
I was proud of the length of my comment! 😳 No need for the grater! 😛 Why a week? *sniff* 😆
Posted: 16 years ago
Cuz I still have to write the part and before I write it I wanna write the shot me and you were talking about; and also I get really lazy when I start writing so it takes me forever to churn out tiny updates. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Updated on page 14! =D
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

salsa! =D

OMG! *fans herself* What grade are you in!?!? 😲 Should you even be writing............... no thinking such............ impure thoughts!!! *mock mothery glare*...................... 🤣 Damn girl, my heart was beating so fast after i read that!!! I was all warm, needed a lot of cold water after!!!! 😳😆LOL - Madz I love your comments. Me has JUST finished gr.10 - turning 16 soon. :) aha good, I got hte right effect.
The way you describe everything Shabz is amazing!! Like seriously, you are too good! 👏 Oh no, poor Rajveer, yes i feel bad for him! He proposed amd Ash said yes............... what is going to happen now!?!?!? They even insisted she stay with them!!!! I dislike Ash to the extreme even in the serial after what happened!! I can't believe her!!! 😡🤢 Thanks M! A LOT! Yups, I feel bad for Rajveer as well, but not enought to give him a happy ending...yet. :) Yea, I've never been an Ash fan, finally ,her true colors came out.
Go ahead and dig your own grave Meher!!! You have me completely hooked!!! 😆 I can't wait to see where you are going with this!!! *thumbs up* This will be my last comment on this one till i come back! 😭 Thanks a ton! Oh is it? Well I might even be done this FF then, depending on how lazy I feel. It will be done before hte end of Augest. 😆 I'll miss you!
Love you! *hug*Love you too! 🤗



@Meera: Thanks. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shabo24







Yup, Meet fic. 😆 Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting! :) I will! 😉



No problem at all Maham, how did they go? 😆 I bet they were not THAT back. Aww thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and maybe there will be hotter stuff, that's what hte disclaimer is for...but not between Meher and Preet. *dramatic music* 😆 Thanks again!



Good. Stay in line. True, but Vegas...*trying ot think of who is in Vegas* Yea...dunt no. 😆

what??? do you WANT to loose a reader? 😛😛😆 yeah they went pretty good😊😊..... you are welcome... just read the 4th part...... the best part was the description of preets body........ 😆..... i am so besharam....... khair not a bad chapter....😉.... update soon....
Cheers,
Maham

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