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Originally posted by: Garima93

Mine! and this time I WILL unreserve it!

*Edit*

Okay first off...you NEED to remind me to unreserve, I feel miserably badd for not unreserving my last comment! Please maaf me! 😔 *kaan pakading* Oh relax your pants, you hit hte "like" button do you not? 😆

Now back to this update! OMG! I"m first AGAIN!! BOOO YAAA!! *does my happy dance* 😆😆 First ot unreserve as well. :)

O-M-G! Did I tell you how much I HATE this stupid Ashlesha!😡 She's such a...a...LOSER! 🤢 Ok, I was gonna use another word..but that's too inappropriate! 😉😆 Why the hell is she trying to steal Preet from Meher?!?! She can go to hell with her stupid mother's saying! She's a good for nothing mother! *sticks toungue out* Hmph! I'm telling you Shabz...mujhe iss Ash ke iraade kuch theek nahin lagrahe! aha thanks for keeping the forum G rated. :) DOn't worry I know no one likes Ash, that's the fun of writing this ff. :)

Anyways back to Meet and Premeer! Preet is such a sweetie-pie! *pinches cheeks* I love how he purposely put the black spot on his shirt!! hehe Naughty Boy! 😆 Premeer are sho cute! haha...Heer feeding Prem apples!! Ahh! So romantic! 😳😆 OMG! Boys go TOTALLY crazy when it comes to cricket! I swear...what do they even see in that game?!!? *Shakes head* I KNOW! Its like someone took their brains and deposited them in a far far away land! It's horriable, I have NO patience for that game at ALL! 😆

The update was awesome Shabz!!! I LOVEDDD ITTT!!! Keep writing! Oh btw...If this Ash doesn't sudhar...then can I PLEASE kill her! *Bats eyelashes* Pweety-pwease! with cherry on top! *chota-bacha waala muh* 😆😆 Okay okay...Im going...ta-ta bye-bye! *waves* Luv yaaa! <333333😳 You too? Radzie di wants to kill her as well. Hmm lets see 'kay? Thanks Garii! :)

Garima

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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
awesum update shabo
loved it
thankz for pm

Originally posted by: rankanrock

hey! cute update......😊😊😊 i hated the preet-ash part.... no offence seriously... the stuff after that was so endearing and funny......😳😆😆......... feeling scared about that last line.....😭😭 please hold the seperation for a few chapters will you??😒😒........ ugh i hate ashlesha!🤢🤢🤢

Cheers,

Maham

Originally posted by: jamune

great part hopefull next part has more MEET romance

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I hate Ashlesha. And I love how Preet was uncomfortable hugging her. And Meher, so insecure. She trusts Preet, I can tell, but I think she may still be iffy about Ash's feelings for her husband. Oh, I hate Ashlesha! I love how you started and edned that with the smae sentence. :) Preet is adorable isn't he? And I plan to slowly make changed with Meher's character. Maybe. I actually have no idea what I'm doing. 😆

I love the whole backstory about Meet's wedding. Meher is too cute. And Preet, how cute was his retelling of it to Ash? (Who deserves to die. Painfully. Then I can - erm, Raj can be happily married to someone else? *eyes dart around nervously*) Maybe I'll just kill Ash and Raj together. 😆 *ducks* What? Why do you care? 😆

I cannot wait for more. *sighs* I got to write.

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sourpuss

So I don't think I've reserved a spot yet, so I'm just gonna comment now.

I hate Ash. I seriously do. How can you write something like this? How, Shabo, HOW? And WHY? Why would you do something like that? Are you trying to torture us? *brings out the theatrics* 'kay How? Dunno. Imagine something the forum would hate and pen it down. :) And Why? Cuz I'm evil. 😆

On another note, awwww Meher panicked before the wedding? That whole part was so adorable! She was convinced that Preet was the king of the underworld?! 🤣 Shabz, you are just...beyond words. Both in a good and a bad way. 😛 I will take that in a good way. So thanks. I think. 😕😆

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😳 I'll edit when I get home! 😳
*edited*

So maybe the next day? 😛 Anyways I'm here now and that's what matters! 😃😳 DUDE! Come back, this morning I forgot you left and was thinking to myself, "Meera will be online." and then I didn't have a PM from you and I was all "Oh yeah..." 😆

I hate Ash....I never thought she could stoop sooooo low!😔 Poor Rajveer! 😔 He doesn't deserve anything like this...give him some happiness, give him the chance to see how evil she is! 😃😳 And then he can go off and find Radz to marry! 😛I'm actually starting to like this couple, Radz adn Rajveer. :) Yeah, I don't think so Meera. :)

I love the way you showed how they were during their wedding! 😃 that had to be seriously the best part of this update! 😳 And you were scaring me! 😆 It was sooo cute! 😛 I love scaring people. :)

I'm just getting a weird feeling in the pit of my stomach now...of what's going to happen as it goes on! 😔 Relax, I havn't written the next part yet.

Continue soon! 😃😳I will! Thanks!

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: premeerrock

nice part.... coninue soon