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Posted: 16 years ago
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It had been six months now, since Preet and Meher had made the most important decision of their lives, since the day they got married. The awkwardness of the realisation that preet and meher were life partners slowly transitioned into comfort. They trusted one another, and had made their life together beautiful, enjoying each other's company. To their family and the outside world, they were husband and wife, yet in their hearts, they were still unable to place their relationship. Their past, and their feelings toward one another, the unspoken feelings made them unable to understand the importance of the rituals that took place on their wedding day; why it was Preet that filled Meher's maang with sindoor, not Harman.


hi everyone, i know its a short start, but i thought i could ask for feedback as whether to continue, i love MEET and wanted to write a FF for a while now, so please to tell me wat u make of it and whether i should continue



SPOILER: meher and preet will begin to realise their love, when harman, ashlesha and daljeet will return and create problems.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Please carry on it sounds interesting

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy😊
i also LUV MEET hehe
plesee continueee on with it, its a brilliant way to start it hopefully u go on w/ this ff😃 loll
omg the spoiler is scaryyy hehee lmao, but lookn forward to read whts gonna happen.............
----------love rumsha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here's the first real part...

"PREEEET...WAKE UP" shouted Meher for the tenth and final time.
"Meher, its saturday, let me sleep".

Let me sleep, so that's how it's gonna be, Meher thought to herself. She hurried accross the room from her dressing table, and without notice pulled the covers from Preet's clutches. As Preet's reflexes reacted, instead of grabbing the quilt, he gripped Meher's hand, causing her to fall on the bed, her face threateningly close to his. The temperature suddenly rose, and well... the quilt wasn't really needed anymore. Preet finally opened those glistening brown eyes of his, fully aware of Meher's soft hands on his shoulders, and her wet hair falling upon his white shirt. He felt her nervousness, yet in that fleeting moment, could not even bare the thought of letting her go, he didn't want to let her go...but why?
Meher tried to look anywhere except into his hazel eyes, her heart pounded, and the thing that frightened her most was that she thought Preet would hear it, as well as her bewilderment as to why he was having this affect on her. No one managed to do this before...no one.
His eyes studied her for a moment, she had never looked more stunning, more beautiful than she did now. preet's mouth curled into a smile, as he saw her anxiety. Before he knew what he was doing, he raised his hand to her soft skin, and brought her face to meet his.
She found herself looking into his eyes, the very thing she wanted to avoid. It felt as though they had been lying there for hours, and Meher found herself wondering why she wanted to stay longer.
As her long locks moved to tickle Preet's face, he moved them behind her ear, and found himself amazed by her beauty, her simplicity.

NOTE: the story will move on to mention obstacles such as daljeet, ash and harman, but in a few parts.
please keep reading, feel free to criticise, as i hope to continue writing as a career.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow i really like this ff meet scenes were brilliant👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so romantic cant wait for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice chapter!!! 😊😊 the scene was well writtten👏😉 pls continue! n can u pm me weneva u update! thanks!😊😊😊

love,
maham

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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
Loved it!

So sweet! Meet are just great

Looking forward to the next part

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

"Preet, i'll set out your clothes, why don't you go and take a shower?" Meher finally broke the silence, which meant Preet had to move from his current, and very comfortable position...and found himself protesting the idea in his mind. Meher had now reverted her eyes downwards once again, and Preet found himself in awe of her pure innocence.
His hands were gently placed on her waist, and Preet's fingers tingled with a sensation that was unfamiliar, one that somehow created a jolt in his heart. And then another. What was happening to him?
"ummmm...Meher, i didn't mean to..." Preet's voice trailed off as he realised he didn't quite know how to finish his sentence. In all honesty, he was not at all sorry, and his heart was simply refusing his mind's pleads to release Meher from his grip.
"No Preet...maybe i shouldn't have startled you like that" She glanced at him, and gave him her trademark sweet smile, reassuring him that she was not at all upset with him. Her heart was still racing, though she managed to regain composure over her voice.
Preet laughed nervously, with the hint of mischief that never left his face, the laugh that made Meher's cheeks red the moment she heard it.
Finally she rose up, and escaped his grip, whist Preet quietly headed towards the bathroom. Preet was now in the safety of the shower, and Meher facing the heat of the stove in front of her, both lost in the event that occured a few moments ago. They felt a reslessness within them, as well as deep confusion.
"Meher, is the tea coming any time soon" asked Heer, as she enterd the kitchen, wondering what was taking so long.
"Oh, sorry Heer Di, it's ready" With that, Heer hurried back to the Juneja family sitting at the dining table, and left meher to firstly breathe a sigh of relief, roll her eyes due to frustration of her own creation and lastly follow her sister into the dining room.
Preet clambered down the steps of the Juneja mansion, firsty to face the wrath of his bauji.
" Ah...and here comes his lordship, where have you been?, we've been awaiting you arrival for half an hour"
"Sorry Bauji, i was spending some time taking care of my beautiful locks, you wouldnt understand not having any of your own". Preet replied, not bothering to sit down, as he knew his father would be on his heels in a matter of seconds.
And so he was. However, he had not anticipated Meher's entrance from the kitchen, with a tray holding many cups of tea. Before anyone could register what happened, Preet ran into Meher, the tray went flying, and Meher found herself falling rapidly. Until she suddenly stopped. She was quite sure she had not hit the floor, yet had not aquired her balance. Her eyes were shut tightly, as she begun to realise that someone had caught her...and she was sure it was Preet.


This as the others was a short part, ill write a longer one next time- im preparing for exams!!!



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Posted: 16 years ago
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please do continue good luck for ur exam

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