you are my destiney~premeer and meet f-f p1 pg 2

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roshaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyyy guys .. !!!

i have not written any f-f in this section so i had this concept in my mind and thought to write an f-f !!

if i get many comments i will continue other wise i will close this topic ! 😛

"YOU ARE MY DESTINEY"

PREM JUNEJA : HE is 23 years old . Extremly handsome. very caring and loves his family alot.

HEER MAAN: SHE is 21 years old very pretty and caring loves her family alot.

PREET JUNEJA: prem younger brother very naughty loves to annoy his dad.

MEHER MAAN: heer's younyer sister very naughty and talkative.

CONCEPT:

heer and mehar maan at a very small age were told that there marriage was fixed to prem and preet juneja there fathers best friend who lived in canada. heer dreamed of prem everyday and waited for him to come and marry her. prem living in canada really wanted to go back to india and marry heer. both soon got marriend but preet and meher were there totally opposite. In prem and heer marrige they both simply told each other that they dont want to marry each other as they dont know each and also didnt liked each others company . fighting was all they do all the time. so they made a plan to stop there own maariage. but as heer said prem was her destiney and meher is also preet's destiney . now is heer right or wronge. find out by reading YOU ARE MY DESTINEY...................................

Edited by sabzz - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

the character sketch and the concept just made me scream w/ joyy and jump likee an idoit ( yea i kno im crazyy) loll 😆 but i LUVEE ITT!!!!!!!!! ii want u to pleaseeee pleasee pleasee continue 😃......waitingg for ur next updatee =D thanxx sabz =]😉 i bet its gonna be extremely funny loll ;;; they both want to break off their marriage haha can't wait to see whts gonna happen..........................😊 =============love Rumsha <3

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roshaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

thank you so much for you lovely comments !!

i will continue soon !😛

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fungrl

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Posted: 16 years ago

I hope to read more soon.........so far sounds great

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 1

It was late night in canada and there was big mansion in which many guests were there . Music was on people were dancing wearing very pretty outfits. It was juneja mansion and people were there for prem-heer reception party . heer was happily married to prem . they got married in india as heer father wanted her to get married in india . after all his first daughter was getting married . prem's father agreed on this but he said that meher and preet will get married in canada . there engajement took place in india with prem-heer. prem-heer got married but meher had to complete her stuides and plus preet had to start working . so there parents said when meher give her exams and completer her studies after that they will get married . heer's father shifted to canada as both of his daughter will be living there.

At the reception everyone was having fun when we see to people fighting holding papers. It was non other then our very own meher and preet.

m: if you mess up with these lines i will kill you preet.

p: if you shut up. like you script is so stupid .

m: its not

p: YES it is!

on the other hand we see two love birds romancing

heer: i love you

prem: i love myself too.. !!

heer: premmmmmmm.... !!!

heer was about to slap prem on his arm when they see preet and meher as usual fighting cominng towards them.

m: didi is loser say kaho to shut up

Preet: loser tum , tumharay baal(hair) aur

m: will you justttt...

prem: shut up you both ... !!

prem and heer knew about meher and preets plan about stopping there own wedding but they also knew they were just perfect for each other .

m: one minute prem bahi .. !!

m: preet look papa is comingg hurry start the drama .. !!

preet: ya ya ... !!

heer and prem were just so confused first they saw both of them fighting like anything and now they were talking like they have been bestfriends for like forever.

prem: heer tum bahi confuse hogi ho ..

heer: ya .. !!

Prem: i think humara romance karna zada acha hai.. !!

heer:nahi !

prem was about to hug heer when they hear preet say very loudly

preet: BAS MEHER BAS BOHUT HOGAYA HAI.....

The whole hall went quiet............

plz do comment hope you guys like it .

Edited by sabzz - 16 years ago