FF: Come Back To Me 6th Part (Page 7)

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Superb!!! Loved it! Nice concept, but i would LOVE it if the show didnt go this way!!!

Mahrukh

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Mashrupa

@premsONLYmine

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

your FF sounds really interesting....... i want to hear more.....so do continue

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Sarah

@--Sarah--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

very impressive start...and great concept...it is well written too. I hope like preet. prem will be able to gain Heer's trust and faith again and save his marriage

Thanks for writing

Regards,
Sarah

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amu142

@amu142

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

OMG!! u know what? I really liked your approach to the story...and I hope you make Prem stew some more before Heer takes him back...but not without a lot of grovelling and pleading on his part. Heer had done so much for his family, only bcoz they were his...and look what he did to her bcoz of his same dumb family(read G3 & Veera)......
wonderful beginning...hope u continue soon

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

superb part yaar.. i liked dis nihaal.. i'm sooo happy meet's together.. hope prem'll gain heer's trust soon..

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

I absolutely with you ashred! I like this nihaal soo much!! I mean he's actually being the BIG BROTHER and standing up for his sisters here!!! Wish he stays like that !!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahrukh