FF: Come Back To Me 6th Part (Page 7)

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Around one in the morning, Gayatri Juneja becomes restless. After a few tosses and turns she got up to follow her maternal instincts, which were telling her that her son needed her. She quietly sneaked out of her room and headed towards Prem's room. Even before she reached the door, she heard faint cries coming from his room, confirming that her maternal instincts were right. She gently opened the door, and found her son sitting on the floor and leaning against his bed. He was tightly hugging a picture and shedding nonstop tears. Gayatri quietly sat next to her son and placed her hand on his shoulder. Prem did not attempt to hide his tears. Instead, he let his mother hold him tighter.
"She's gone," he managed to say in between his little cries.
Overwhelmed by her son's grief, Gayatri was no longer able to hold back her tears. "I'm sorry," she said, "you are suffering because of me."
For a few minutes, Prem continued to cry on his mother's shoulder while holding his wife's picture close to his heart. His grieving was interrupted by the noise of glass shattering in the main room. Gayatri and Prem immediately rushed to the main room. There they found Preet, all drunk and struggling to take a few steps. He was unable to maintain his balance and before he fell to the ground, Prem and Gayatri immediately rushed to his aid and grabbed his arms. As soon as Preet was able to process what was going on around him, he rashly pushed Gayatri and Prem away.

"Get away from you two!" he screamed at the top of his lungs, waking up the rest of the Juneja family. "After ruining my life, you are coming to comfort me! Don't even touch me'you two are responsible for everything that has happened'I'll never forgive you"

Once again Preet was about to fall, but this time his father got a hold of him. Fortunately, Preet did not push his father away. Lalit had always wanted to close the distance that was between him and Preet, but not in this way.
"Go back to sleep" he directed to everyone. Following his orders, everyone did go back to their respective rooms. Lalit helped Preet to his room and put him to sleep.
"I'm sorry my son'you had to pay the price for others' mistakes" he whispered before leaving his room. Outside Lalit found Prem and Gayatri waiting.
"How is he?" Gayatri asked.
"Physically, he'll be fine by tomorrow. Emotionally'he's shattered," Lalit said straightforwardly. "Everyone is going to pay for what you two have done."
Lalit left Prem and Gayatri with their guilt. He went to his study where he found some comfort with pictures of him and Balraaj on the wall.

**********************2 years later******************************

It was another Monday at Juneja house. Another day without the morning aarti. Another day where Prem left early in the morning to immerse himself in his work. Another day where Preet was out of town'in fact he had spent more of his time in hotels rather than his own home in the past two years. In other terms, Juneja house had become a morgue'a morgue of joy, laughter, and love. Unable to withstand, Prem and Gayatri's coldness along with Maya and Veera's ploys against her, Heer left the house about two years ago. Meher accompanied her sister to support her. Nihaal decided to leave the city with his two sisters, and begin a fresh start.

A few months later, the whole family learned about the truth. Gayatri sent Veera to her brother's house, and Harman asked Maya to leave as well. Everyone had his or her own way of dealing with the situation. Preet had become angry and detached. Many times he would come home drunk and blame Prem and Gayatri for taking Meher away from him. Over the past two years, Lalit was the only person Preet would confide in. Gayatri was unable to forgive herself for what she had done. For her, Prem and Preet's suffering was the biggest punishment. However, this incident had hit Prem the hardest. As each moment passed without Heer, Prem lost the will to live. He would spend countless nights crying while clinging to Heer's picture, wishing he could turn the clock around. Lalit could do nothing but watch his family break apart. Every day he would pray for a miracle that would end this nightmare. Little did he know, his prayers, after two years, had been heard.
The Bhatias, Junejas family friends from Canada who had recently moved to India, had invited the Junejas to a party. They were welcoming their new business colleagues who had moved from Dubai a few days ago. Although, no one wanted to go, Lalit had insisted that they were obligated since Bhatias are really close to them. Upon arriving at the hotel, the whole family put on a fake smile and pretended to enjoy the party. After talking to a few acquaintances, Preet headed towards the bar where he could be left alone. Unfortunately, Prem hampered him from enjoying his drink.
"Stop it Preet. Don't do this to yourself" Prem pleaded, "it hurts us to see you like this."
Preet gave no response and blankly stared straight ahead.
With a sigh Prem finally decided to be straightforward with his brother, "Preet I want you to be happy. I want you to be the same Preet again'is there anyway we can get past this?"

Preet turned his head to look at his brother eye to eye, "That Preet will return as soon as Meher comes back'it may make no difference to you that you lost your wife because of your mother and sister, but it does to me."

Prem was about to defend his mother, when Mr. Bhatia asked for everyone's attention.

"I would like to thank all of you for coming here tonight. It is my great honor to introduce to you my colleagues from Dubai, Mr. Nihaal Maan and his two sisters Meher and Heer Maan."

While all the guests were applauding to Mr. Bhatia's special guests, the Junejas were processing the names he had mentioned. Their eyes were directed towards the entrance of the hall. Standing in the middle was Nihaal, dressed in a gray Armaani suit with his hair neatly gelled. On one side stood Meher in black dress, and hair partially tied back with simple silver jewelry:

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While on the other side was Heer in a gray dress with her hair, which was a little shorter and had faint highlights, out:

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After the warm greeting, the Mr. Bhatia gradually introduced the Maan children to their guests. The Junejas had gathered on one end of the hall and waited patiently for Mr. Bhatia to guide his guests to them. Everyone's mind was flooding with things to say, but by the time they reached the Junejas everyone froze in his or her spot. Nihaal, Heer, and Meher did not seem as shocked to see the Junejas at the party. Apparently they had prepared themselves for this encounter.

Mr. Bhatia, "I would like you to meet Mr. Lalit Juneja"

Nihaal interrupted Mr. Bhatia, "We know him very well. He is our father's best friend'almost a father to us." The three children greeted Lalit and Gayatri with a warm smile and took their blessings. Mr. Bhatia left them alone, giving them time to catch up. However, the three children immediately started walking away after taking Lalit and Gayatri's blessings.

"Just a minute kids," Lalit said after them.

Nihaal gestured Heer and Meher to go on, which they did obediently. He then turned around and waited patiently for Lalit to continue.

"I am sorry for what happened'"

"That's all in the past'it's best if we forget it," he replied calmly. Before allowing anyone else to say another word, Nihaal left to mingle with the guests.

Lalit, Gayatri, Harman, Kulraj, and Kiran sat in one corner pondering over what to do next. In the meantime, Prem and Preet went out to find their wives.

Preet found Meher talking to a group of lawyers. For a minute he observed her from a distance. Two years had definitely changed Meher a lot. She had adapted a more sophisticated look and most importantly, Preet sensed a new level of confidence in her. After admiring the woman in front of him, Preet approached the group and kindly asked to excused with Meher. He guided Meher to an empty lobby. Before she could say anything, Preet embraced her tightly.

"I missed you," he whispered in her ear, sending chills down her spine. In that one embrace, Preet found himself again'he found his old life back. After what seemed like an eternity, Meher gently pushed Preet off of her and looked at him. He cupped her face in his hands and said, "I'm not letting you out of my sight ever again."

Suppressing her tears, Meher gently removed his hands from her face and replied, "I have to go'my brother and sister are waiting." She headed to walk back in the hall, but Preet grabbed her hand.

"You are coming home with me Meher," he stated.

"My home is with Nihaal bhaiya and Heer didi."

"And what about me? What about us?" Preet questioned.

"Preet this is already hard for me'don't make it harder" Meher choked out while controlling her tears.

"Meher we know the truth now'you and Heer bhabhi can come back"

"It's too late Preet"

This was the last response Preet had expected from Meher. He let go of her hand and allowed her to go back while still trying to fathom what had happened.

At the same time, Prem wandered around the hall looking for Heer but found her nowhere. However, he did hear about her success in Dubai while filtering through the guests. Eventually, his eyes fell on a gray figure in the balcony of the hall. He quietly opened the door leading to the balcony and stood there, admiring his beautiful wife who was staring at the stars. Her physical appearance may have changed, but she still retained the innocence and purity that Prem saw in their first meeting.

"I can see that you still aren't fond of huge parties," he said snapping Heer out of her thoughts.

Hearing his voice after a long time made Heer's legs go weak, but she immediately regained her composure. "What are you doing here?" she asked while still staring at the sky.

"I'm here to talk to my wife'to ask for her forgiveness," he replied.

Heer had not expected this response. She turned around, so Prem can get a better view of her confused look.

"After you left'we found out about Veera and Maya did, I'm sorry"

For a moment, Heer wanted to run into Prem's arms and hold on to him forever. She saw the love again in his eyes and the guilt. Unfortunately, she stopped trusting her heart a long time ago.
"As Nihaal bhaiya said, it's all in the past we should just forget it," she said in an indifferent tone. Prem wasn't sure what to make out of this answer. Did it mean that Heer had forgiven him and was ready to come back to him?
"Now if you'll excuse me'I have to get back" Heer claimed and walked past Prem. When her arm brushed against his for a brief moment, Prem regained that will to live again. Realizing that Heer was walking away from him, Prem rushed after her and grabbed her arm before she could make it to the door. Prem was about to pull her towards him, but Heer was faster than he was. She swiftly turned around and gave him a tight slap on his face. This was one reaction that Prem had never expected from Heer. He had expected her to scream at him or give him a silent treatment, but he had never thought that Heer would raise her hand at him. It was then Prem saw an immense amount of anger in her eyes'she did not show a hint of regret for hitting him.

"Don't ever touch me again." Although she spoke calmly, Prem could sense a storm beneath the surface. "You have lost that right."

Without giving Prem a chance to say anything, Heer returned to the party. Prem unconsciously touched his left cheek which was still aching from the slap. "What have I done to you, Heer?" Prem whispered.

By the time Preet and Prem had returned, Nihaal and his sisters had left the party. Her sons' faces said everything to Gayatri. She realized that it wasn't going to be easy to bring Heer and Meher back.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting start.. cant blame heer, but meher? poor preet.. do continue soon..
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This is intresting and different.. Do continue!!!
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it was so cool i was thinking the same story line few days back post next part soon
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Although the first meeting with the Maan children was disappointing, the Junejas did leave the party with some hope. Kulraj and Kiran managed to get the address of their new home, and the Junejas decided to meet Nihaal and his sisters the next day.

The Maan residence was far more luxurious than their previous home. It was located on the outskirts of the city. There were a few houses located within a 5 minute driving range. The Junejas parked in front of a huge, white two story building surrounded by a beautiful garden, housing a variety of flowers, and a few fountains. They were warmly greeted by the head mistress of the house—Mrs. Francis.

"Welcome," she said joyfully. "I recognize you from the picture," she said to Lalit and Gayatri. Mrs. Francis guided them to the main living room. All the Junejas were awed by the beauty of the house. There was a nice cool breeze circulating in the room. It was decorated with the elegant furniture, paintings, flowers, and statues. Lalit's eyes immediately fell on two big pictures hanging on the wall. One was of Balraaj and Teji with a garland around and the other was of Lalit and Gayatri. Gayatri felt even more ashamed of herself—the Maan children still gave her respect despite all the wrongdoing she had done to them.

Mrs. Francis kindly asked the family to sit down while she informed Nihaal, Heer, and Meher about their arrival. There was a dead silence in the room after she left. Some of the members were still admiring the house, while the others were pondering over what to say when they met Balraaj's children.

The silence was broken quickly by Meher. Preet immediately turned towards the hallway from where the sound was coming from. Within a matter of seconds, he spotted Meher, talking on the phone and heading towards the living room.

"Senor necessito esos documentos rapidamente. No tengo mas tiempo" she said over the phone.

"When did she learn Spanish," Preet wondered to himself.

It was after finishing her call that Meher realized who else was in the room. She stood in front of the family a few feet away. Before she could inquire about their visit, she spotted her brother and sister descending down the staircase with Mrs. Francis following them. Nihaal and Heer stood next to Meher.

"Mrs. Francis, could you get some tea and biscuits," Heer asked, "and you could you put less sugar in one of the cups?" Prem was touched to see that Heer still remembered everything about his family. She still remembered that Lalit was asked to cut down on his sugar intake.

After Mrs. Francis left, Gayatri walked up to Nihaal, "Nihaal, I am sincerely sorry for what happened to you and your sisters. What Veera did is unforgivable. I am ashamed of the way I treated you and your sisters. But please, I beg you don't punish the family for this. There hasn't been a single moment of joy in our house ever since Heer and Meher have left. It is as if our family has been cursed."

"You did what every mother would do for her daughter. I don't blame you for not believing me. However, I won't lie to you…I wish you hadn't dragged my sisters into this mess. Anyways, it's all in the past. I'm glad that all misunderstandings have been cleared. Please don't beat yourself over this," Nihaal said with sincerity.

"Nihaal, we've come to take Heer and Meher back," Lalit claimed.

"I'm sorry, but my sisters are not going anywhere" he refuted.

Preet had lost his patience by then. He approached Nihaal and pleaded, "Nihaal, what happened was wrong but please don't give us such a big punishment."

"Preet, I have no problems with you. You have been a really good husband. Meher told me that you two faked to break up. You've been there for my sister, and if she wants to come back to you, then I have no objections," Nihaal said, and then while looking at Prem he said, "as for Heer—her home is here. She's been through enough, and there is no way I am going to be stupid enough to send her to a place where she can get hurt again."

It was now Prem's turn to defend himself. Everyone moved to the side, while walked up to Nihaal. "I know that I have hurt your sister a lot, and I am sorry for that. I really love her Nihaal and want to start a fresh new life with her"

"Two years ago you said that you really loved her, yet you forced her to leave the house. Heer did so much for you and your family, and this is how you repaid her. You didn't bother to try and learn the truth. You just sided with your sister. If you thought Heer was wrong, you could have tried to make her see the truth. But you didn't. Instead, you made her pay for mistakes that she never committed! She trusted you to do the right thing and find a way, and you broke that trust"

Before Nihaal could continue, they were interrupted by Lalit, who had fallen to the ground. He was struggling to breathe, and turning pale.

Lalit was quickly taken to the hospital. He had suffered a small heart attack. Fortunately, he received treatment in time before any serious damage could have been done. The doctor instructed the whole family that Lalit needed to take extreme precautions. He had to watch his diet, begin exercising, and most importantly, avoid stress. The next couple months are critical to his recovery.

After gaining consciousness, Lalit asked to speak to Nihaal in private. Nihaal sat down on the chair next to Lalit's bed. By then, a stream of tears were trailing down his cheeks.

"I'm so sorry," Nihaal said.

Lalit managed to give a small smile despite his condition. "My son, you have done nothing wrong, and you shouldn't be apologizing…there is something I want to ask you"

Nihaal gave a nod to Lalit's request.

"Nihaal, for the past two years I have seen my family break apart. I want to see my family happy again, and this is only possible when Heer and Meher return. They are the soul of this house. Please, give them back to us"

Nihaal tightened his grip around Lalit's hand, "I assure you that whatever you want will happen."

Later that night, Nihaal asked Prem and Preet to come over his house. When the two brothers arrived, Nihaal was waiting in the main room with Heer and Meher.

"Babuji asked me to let Heer and Meher come back home," Nihaal said, "Taking his condition into consideration, I agreed to his request."

"Thank you, this means so much to us" Prem said gratefully.

"I'm not done yet," Nihaal snapped back. Prem and Preet did not say anything else and gestured Nihaal to continue. "I'm allowing my sisters to go with you until Babuji has recovered completely. If after that point, Meher wants to continue to stay in that house…it is her choice. Heer, on the other hand is going to come back."

"What is this—a joke?" Preet responded.

"No—it's your brother, here, that has made a joke out of my sister's life. I love Babuji just as much as you do, and I want him to get better. But I don't want Heer making anymore sacrifices, especially since they are not valued."

Prem now looked straight at Heer, "Heer, is this what you want?"

Heer, who had been quiet throughout this whole time, gave a soft nod. Prem never wanted Heer to force herself to live with him. He wanted her to be with him because she wanted to. However, he did not have much of a choice since it was a matter of his father's life.

Lalit, along with the rest of the family, was elated to learn that Heer and Meher would be moving back right away. Upon much insistence, the doctors agreed to discharge Lalit and send a nurse to help with his care.

By the time Prem, Preet, and Harman brought Lalit back from the hospital, Heer and Meher had already arrived at Juneja house. After nearly two years, the whole family gathered in one room, had dinner together, and exchanged jokes with each other.

After dinner, all the adults were sipping on coffee while watching Kulraj's children engage in an intense game of carom. Lalit diverted everyone's attention when he spoke to Heer and Meher.

"I'm so glad that you two are back…now everything is going to be okay," he said joyfully. "I was thinking, why don't you two join the business also?"

Heer and Meher exchanged looks, which didn't go unnoticed by Lalit. "Is there a problem?" he asked.

"No, it's nothing like that. If you don't mind, we would like to continue working with Nihaal bhaiya. We are still in the process of establishing the business here, and he doesn't have that much help," Heer explained.

Lalit gave his usual understanding smile, "That's absolutely fine…Nihaal could use you more…In that case, you guys should get some sleep since all of you have work tomorrow"

It had been a tiring day for everyone, so no one protested to Lalit's command. After entering their room, Preet guided Meher to the balcony of their room. Meher immediately recognized that he was disturbed.

"What is the matter?" she asked.

Preet couldn't help but give a small chuckle. "You still know me too well…I was just thinking about Prem bhaiya and Heer bhabhi…I know what Prem bhaiya did was wrong, but is this a just punishment for him? For the past two years, there hasn't been a moment where he hadn't thought of Heer bhabhi…he loves her, Meher. He won't be able to live without her."

Meher understood where Preet's frustration was coming from. She placed her hand on his shoulder, "I know that you are concerned…but try and understand Heer didi's point of view. She was shattered when Prem bhaiya gave up on their relationship…she's just scared to open up her heart again…all we can do is pray that over the next couple months, she realizes that she does not have a life without Prem bhaiya. If Heer didi decides that she doesn't want to leave this house, then Nihaal bhaiya will not object."

"And what about you?" Preet asked. "Are you going to leave me again?"

Preet's eyes clearly dictated how scared he was—scared to lose her. Meher cupped his face in her hands, "Preet, I left because my sister and brother needed me. They were alone. I never wanted to leave. At the party, I told it was too late because I never expected Heer didi or Nihaal bhaiya to think about taking a step in this house. That night it was a sister you left you. Today, your wife is back, and I promise I won't leave you."

Preet's joy had no boundaries. He gave his wife a tight hug and kissed her cheek. "Welcome back, Mrs. Meher Preet Juneja." Clearly, Preet's jovial personality had returned.

While Preet and Meher were celebrating their reunion, Prem was dragging his feet to his room. He didn't want Heer to feel as if he was invading her space, but at the same time he didn't want Lalit or Gayatri to suspect what was going on between them. After much debating, Prem decided to enter his room. By then, Heer had set up a bed for herself on the couch and was in the process of putting her things away.

"Heer," he said to get her attention. Heer was too engrossed in what she was doing that she did not notice Prem entering. "I'll sleep on the couch, you sleep on the bed."

"It's okay," she said calmly. "I'm fine where I am…good night." Not giving Prem a chance to object further, Heer crawled underneath her blanket and shut her eyelids, pretending to fall asleep. Prem turned off the lights and tried hard to fall asleep, but couldn't. His thoughts kept on drifting back to what his marriage had come to. He cursed himself for failing as a husband. In the end, his tired body and mind gave into sleep.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I must say, this is very very impressive!!!
You have very good writing skills and this is a fresh concept!!!! You have crafted the characters and their point of view really really well!!!!!
It's very easy to relate the the characters and i can't wait to see if Prem is going to do anything to save his marriage!!!!!
It's great!!!! Really good so far!!!
Please continue!!!!! =D
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hey
awesum update
that was fantastic
loved it every bit of the update...
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Love It Good Story Line Please Carry On Writing Doing A Great Job

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