[FF] Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi [Part 4, Pg 14] [21/7]

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Yes, I am back with yet another FF! 😳 This one's called Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi, and it's inspired by a lotta things: Charmed (the season with Coop!), Good Luck Chuck (which I didn't watch) and Thoda Pyaar Thoda Magic (which I also didn't watch). I think it's a pretty interesting concept, if I don't say so myself. Updates for this one shall be on Thursdays because I like Thursdays. Today's shall begin with a teaser! 😃 Which will be in the next post!

There will be a PM list for this one too, so if you'd like to be on it, do let me know! 😳

Love,
Bhav (:

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Index

Teaser: Page One
Prologue: Page Three
Part One: Page Six
Part Two: Page Nine
Part Three: Page Eleven
Part Four: Page Fourteen


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi

Teaser!

"Jaan," Heer began, absently feeding her husband a grape.

"Yes, jaan?" Prem replied, looking up at her with a serene smile on his face.
"I've been looking around."

Prem sat up sharply, turning to look at the love of his life. Whenever Heer started a sentence with 'I've been looking around', it usually meant work for him.

"And people aren't falling in love anymore. Not like us, anyway." She smiled at him, ruffling his hair.

He made a face and moved away from her. "Jaan, you know I hate it when you do that."

Heer laughed, a tinkling sound that echoed in the heavens. "I know, jaan, but what can I do, your hair is so ruffle-able!" She reached out again, but Prem squirmed and scurried to the other end of the reclining couch. Heer pouted.
"What were you saying, jaan?"
Prem asked in an attempt to pacify her.

Heer crossed her arms, turning away from him. "I'm not telling you. You've upset me."

Prem sighed. He got up and moved to stand behind her, wrapping his arms around her. He kissed her cheek and felt her smile. "Bataao, na, jaan. Please?" he whispered.

"People Down There aren't falling in love anymore. They don't find their perfect matches anymore, and sometimes after they marry they have this thing called a divorce, where they...end their marriage."

Prem frowned.

"I don't like it, jaan." Heer turned to look up at him, a sad look on her face.

"What do you think we should do?" Prem asked her, his hands on either side of her face.


She lit up, smiling. "Call a meeting of the Cupids!"

Prem sighed inwardly. He didn't quite like where this was going.

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Well, I hope that intrigued you enough to make you wait for the next part! 😳 See you next Thursday!
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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My spot...and I don't remember Coop...or wait...never mind this whole thing makes a lot more sense to me.....he's the one who made Phoebe realize all her loves right? 😕

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I loved the teaser! 😛 "jaan" how cute is that!!!😆

"People Down There"😆😆😆 And ooo a meeting of the cupids! 😃 That's going to be interesting! 😳

But ohh I also loved the way you showed the connection between Premeer, way too cute! 😛 And teehee, the way they discussed divorce was awesome! 😆

I simply can not wait for more Bhav! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ohh I liked him! 😳😛

And edited! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh love the teaser =) And I don't watch Charmed or Good Lucky Chuck😆 But I saw the movie! And the teaser sort of reminded me of it =)

Meeting with the cupids? Sounds interesting. And why do I have a feeling that one of the cupids might be Meher or Preet OR the cupids having Meet fall for each other? Those are my predictions😆 Can't wait to read the first part =)

Oh oh oh! Can I be on the PM list? =)
-Ducky
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ooh ooh ooh I want to be on the pm list too! 😃
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😲!!!!!!!!!!!!! Add me on the PM list ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
Posted: 16 years ago
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Add me to the PM list dude. =]

Gosh honestly that made me puke. Jaan? First I was looking at the screen like this. 😳 Then this. 😵 Then this. Then this. 🤣 Like, I honestly expected Heer to stroke his.....thigh or something. This gave CHEESINESS a new level. =]

Hmmm meeting of the cupids? Lemme guess....Premeer are dead and are going to fix up Meet's life? =] I like. *thumbs up*

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Obviously I wanna be on the PM list. And given this storyline, people are going to be alternating between laughing their heads off and sighing dreamily at the computer screen.

Love,
Radz

Weren't you initially calling this Stupid Cupid?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲 u didnt tell me?!!!!!!!!! omg yayayaya another FF 😃 add me on pm list NOW lol😆 loved the teaser...oo meeting of the cupids?..send em my way i could use a lil boost in my love life lol😆😉..did i mention guys are confusing?😆...anyways cant wait till thurs!!...-karen😛

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