[FF] Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi [Part 4, Pg 14] [21/7] - Page 5

hey,i loved this part!!premeer are adorable.
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wow i loved reading that, it was great and so sweet.

I really enjoy reading your FFs, can't wait for the next part now 😳

Hey

I just started reading this and the concept is interesting Looking forward to reading more

KRISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! *fans herself*

Oh my gosh. Meet and Kris. Now that is pure bliss. *wink* I lurved it - specially how Meher has already spoken to her mother-in-law. 😆 And oh gawd do Prem and Heer need to get out more or what? =]

--shabz

Oh! I'm so happy you're thrilled....KRIS Won! Yay! *Hops around happily*

And as for this part, it blew my mind away.....Oh My God! I am totally in love with this concept and your sterling writing....

Both preet's cell phones were engaged! Well, one was me 😆 and the other was.....me😆 (Cupids can do a lot....he he he)

[Preet eyed her curiously. "Secretary?" he offered.] [Oh! Superb! Loved it]

The way she was looking at him unnerved him. Her head was tilted to the right, and the smile was mostly gone. She was studying him very intensely. Feeling more than a little uncomfortable, Preet shifted in his chair and cleared his throat. [Oh! Killer stuff. Totally wishing I was Meher:) Brilliant writing Bhav]

Meher nodded vigorously. Preet's smile grew wary. (He momentarily wondered whether her head hurt from nodding so much.) [Preet is so cute. Loved this bit as well]

I like the way she observes his hand, I love the way he is uncomfortable with her scrutiny, I just love the way you have described this first meeting Bhav. It's simply amazing. I am going to dream about this tonight....It's so wonderful (Preet dreams 😳)

I love the way Preet keeps waiting for her to give him the message and she doesn't catch on...How sweet is that:)

And I loved this bit - ["Oh!" She nodded. "It was your mother. She says don't forget to have your lunch. Her exact words were, usse keh dena ki agar woh apna lunch nahin khata hai, toh usse dinner bhi nahin milne waala."] Really really well written Bhav. I adore this one already and can't wait for the next part....

Totally Amazing really, I'm out of adjectives here.....Love:-Nonee

That was adorable!😳

woww!!! meet story!!

Hey guys! I know you were looking forward to an update today, and believe me, I had it all written out as well. But alas, my laptop broke two days ago and even though the repair guy came today, he needs to come back tomorow with another part, and if that part isn't availble (*desperately prays that part is available!*), then, next week. For some reason, the LCD on my laptop is now completely dark, so I can't use it.

Hopefully the guy comes back tomorrow with the part and fixes it so I can finally use my baby again (Seriously, I am DYING without it...😕 24 hours with no laptop by choice has NOTHING on this!), because frankly I hate the keys on my dad's laptop. If it gets fixed by tomorrow then I will most definitely update this tomorrow!

So once again (the bloody comma button doesn't work well... -_-" and it's a BRAND NEW LAPTOP...) I am so so so sorry!

Love

Bhav (:

Awwww that sucks Bhav! 😔 I'm sorry...I hope it all works out for you! 😊

Thanks! Don't worry I'm pretty sure it will work out... :D It's just a matter of 'when'...On the plus side he changed the back of my laptop (the part where the screen is) so now it's all SHINY and NEW! WHEE!!!