do dil ek jaan (a new FF-prem heer)updated on09/9 - Page 6

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Part 17

Prem smiles and reaches the hotel '''.

Suddenly he sees lot of reporters roaming around the hotel

Prem is thinking oh no jiska darr tha wahi huwa'..

He takes the phone and rings to Aryan'''

On listening to this''..

Aryan:prem aaj muje mat rokhana iss manager ka murder karne se'''

Prem:bhai..is waqt yeh sochna bahut jarori hay'.kyonki heer kuch hi gante mein hospital se hotel shift hone wali hay ab hum kya kareen''''''..

Aryan:thinks a plan''''..ab toh hum unnee hotel mein nayee lejaa sakte hay''..

Prem:toh kya kareen'''

Aryan:ek jagah hay lekin kya who log mane nge''

Prem:kause jagaa bhai''''.

Aryan:dekho prem agar unee hum kise aur hotel pe lejayenge toh who mirchy mera murder karege'''''..lekin ek jagah hay shayad who maan sakthihay'.lekin poochnaa padega'''''.

Prem:yeh toh batana kaha/'''..

Aryan:apna ghar''.

Prem:achaa bhai ''kya baat hay''seedha route sasoral tak'.aap toh mahan hay bhaii''inner lekin bhai'..hum unee toh manayenge ''''lekin ghar mein..kaie manage karlenge''

Aryan:who sab muje par chod do''''.

And he rings to home''..

At that time in home '..one pandit comes to the place''''.

And gayatri and manali invitex them

manali:kya baat hay didi aap ne pandit kokyon bhulaya'''''.

Gayatri:ek khaas wajah ke liye'''''.

Manali:aap betaye panditji mein aap ke liye kuch mangaunngi'..

Pandit:nayee nayee .aap bhi yeha hona bahut jarori hay''''.

Jayanti comes to the downstairs''

Jayanti:dekhye pandit ji''.hamara bachee bade hogaye'..Aryan aur prem '''''aap ne kaha tha ki unka vivah ka yug isse do saal mein hay''''

Toh'''baat yehki dono bhai.ek hamesha ek saath rehta hay''

Prem aur Aryan bachpan se aisaa yeh''.dukh hoo yeh such hoo'''.unki kundali, ya kuch bhi hoo inn doo bhai oo ki kismat bhi ek jaise bhi'.

Aur eh ghar ka neev bhi hay''''.

Is liye koi upaya batein'''''

And he sees Aryan and prem s kundali'.

Aryan:bahut kabil ladka hay''is keliye kuch bhi mushikil nayee hay'''..bahut ii hunaar ladka kuldeepak hay''hawa ki tarah hay aag ugaltha hay.lekin pal mein shanth ho jata hay'''..

Lekin kisi aur ko takleef mein nahii dekh saktha hai'''sab se kul miljaata hay'''is ke bina ronak nahii hay''apne choti maa ka ladla hay''damini smiles''..

Doosra prem'''

Jaisa naam waisa insaaan''..prem bhav''''doosroon ki dard mein iske ankheen nami,ho jate hay''prem'''.satwik 'komal, nirmal'''shaant ladka hay'''.badoo ki sewa karna'''.sab kuch hay sarva gun sampan'''.

Prem'.

Iss dono ki swabhav hi ek doosra ka saath hay'''is ke kuch bhi cheez alag nayee.hay

Isliye inkee shaadi bhi do yesi ladikyonki se kardee jiya jo hamesha saath hoo'.taakikabhi bhi koi uljan inke zindagi mein ayee''''.

Aur haa ek baat kya doulat shourat par vishwaas karthe hay'''

Hamere bavishwani ki unusaar abhi aapka beta ghor vipaat se bahar aya hay'''..aur jis ladki usee bacheeyegi who hi uska jeevan saathi banege'''''

Boora na mane toh ek baat kahoo''..

Waise pechle hafte muje kise kaam se mumbai jana pada''.waha hume singh parivaar se mile

Jayanti:singh parivaar jane mane hasti hay na

Panditji:haa ji bahit name parivaar hay''..

Unka bade bahu damini ji bahut sanskar aur bahut acche loog hay'''.

Unne ka bhi yesi ek problem yeh'.

Unke char betiyaa hay''''''

Unki doosri bahu ki beti aur damini ji apne beti.

Yesi hamesha saath mein rehete hay''''..

Unka bade beti simran ki shaadi hoi gaye hay

Aur unke doosri beta ki beti,.mahi '..jo bade hay

Aur heer unke doosri beti hay,,,,,,,,,dono hi sarva gun sampan hay''''.bilkul inne bhai unki tarah''''..aur sayog dekhya na heer ko kisi exam dena tha is liye who log bhi gurgoun agaye hay'''..

And pandit takes the photograph of mahi and heer''

All looks at the photograph at that time aryancalls '''

Manali:takes the phone.Aryan'

Aryan:chotimaa'''baat yeh hay ki he explains every thing and manali informs all and all are shocked on listening to this'and he also tells his plan'''.

Pandit leaves the place'''

Manali , gayatri all thinking''''.

Manali:didi kya kareen''''

Gayatri:pehle un ladki yon ko dekhe uske baad kuch decision le lenge''''''.

Haa jayanti informs all to not to tell this matter to anyone and she gives permission to do so''''

By that time prem is furious''

Heer looks at him'..

Heer:prem '''ji''.

Prem:no jii.call me prem

Heer:prem''..baat kya hay'''.aap bahut parishaan haa bath yeh hay ki'press wale hotel ki aas pass yeh choti seher hay toh baat asaani se felhe thi hay

Heer:toh kya hum hotel puch nayee pate

toh hum kaha jayee

prem:waise aap ko boori nahii lagtha hay toh'''kya aap mera ghar aa sakthe hay

he is finding words'''.

Heer:aap ka ghar'.kaha hay aap ka ghar''.

Prem:delhi mein eha se sirf kuch gantoo ki safar hay''.agar aap ko aur aapki hot sister ko pasand hay tho''''.

Heer :is there no other route,''

Prem:hota tho koi baat nayee'..

Heer ;teek hay meindidi ko manane ki koshish karunge''..dekhya didi ka decision hi final decision.hay''.

Mahi listens to the conversation and she also understands heer condition''

Where she had also listened to the conversation of doctor andnurse as heer need sa peece environment and she knows there is no other option''

And she agrees whe n heer asks'''.

Prem smiles and also Aryan''''.

Yes'''

Both smiles

Part ends

Part 18

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

hello everyone......

iam sri..........

iam starting a new FF

regarding a love

the title

Do dil -ek jaan............

it is a story of ever lasting love and their trust and belif.........

love is a very great

and every relationship needs trust

a girl should trust the boy

and the boy should trust the girl

it appears to be strange

but this happens to be the pillars of the life.......

the story starts a girl............

asking a old age person

girl:dadaji:....what is love..........and how it happens

why it is so important.........

and why it hurts.......

the old age person answers

beta....

love is devine

it is great

it is blessed with few people

the people who in it

will forget the entire life

and fill with the wonderfull blossom.......

and live in it by leaving all relationships

that trust,belif make s them so strong that they will never separate and at a point of time they becomes

do dil ek jaan.............

kya dadaji mere saath bhi yesa hota hai kya......

kya mein yesa pyar karoongi ki....

kya muje bhi yasa hota hai kya...........

muje is ki baare mein kisise poochana chaiyee........

and she reaches to the maa idol..........

where she asks is my life will be blessed with love

can i be one of the lucky person with love.....

can there is anyone who loves me more than in this world..........

can take me to the world who can love me more than his life

can it happens to me

as do dil ek jaan...............

and winds blow and the girl's listens to a unheard voice from inside saying ............

YES>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

at the same time she remembers dadijis; words

beta:if there is happy there is sadness........

yeh raasta asaan nahi hota

mushikil bhi hota hai

lekin yehi hame majboot banade tha hai

aur hame taaqat deti hai

us mushiqil ko paar kar ke

lekin uske liye

man mein vishwaas,aur lagaan hona jaroori hai

yehi pyaar ki taaqat hai

tum usee taaqat ko pana hai........

samjee meri beti.............

and suddenly some body calls her "HEER"

where are u.........................

and she answers maaa.....................

and the background voice

anjaana do dil

milte hai

do ban jaate hai ek kahanii..........

woh dil mein bas jaate hai

na takdeer use alag kar sakte hai

na jamana ,

jiska ban hey na

woh banjaata hai.............

doorein dil mein hoo yah jahaan pe

par jo likaa hai use badal nahi sakta...........

agar is duniya mein laila hai too majnu us ke liye

hamesha banta hai

aur agar heer hai too uski raanja bhi hoga........

kyonki yeh banate hai ...........

kudhrat aur bagwaan...........

aur unki likana koi nahi tal sakta hai.............

heer hugs his mom.........

and she reaches home with her mother..........

she sees his elder brother and younger sister is sleeping

along with their cousins.........

and heer also goes to sleep...........

as she is thinking of dadiji's words..........

and next morning his father..............wakes up

and they live in abig house..........

and heer father is a farmer........

and he loves his land more than his life

and his wife also very kind hearted ........

and she maintains her famile

and the head of the family is dadajii./.

and beeji is his wife...........

heer and her cousins taken to the mela supposed to be on nearest village..........

where all are busy in the mela

large crowds are all there

meantime heer bumps into baba.........

and baba sees heer face

and says

tum woh ho joo khuda ne tume chuna

tere dil ki kwaish poori hone ko hey

kyon aaj tume tumahra zindagi milega

tum apne jahaan se milogi

joo kahani se badkar hoga

teri zindagi uski aur woh tere bandagi banega

woh hey tere manzil

kyon ki kahani ab shuru hone ko hai

and the baba leavesa

as meantime heer find s that she is seperated from her family..........

and sheis scared

and she cried out her father and others

but no one is sourround.........

she is in so scared and tears are running ......from her eyes.........

and she saw some weird person s coming to her

and start chasing her

as she know there are few people who will take small girls and sold them to the places........

as heer hides in a lonely place

as feels somebody behind her

as she forget that she had came out of the mela

at the point end of the village

and she starts running ...she doesn't know that there is water at that place

andat the point water is so deep and she is above to fall and suddenly a hand stops her and catches her

she sees a boy..............

with a lovely eyes

watching her

and he drags her towards him

and both fall at a little distance......

heer saw him....

the boy saw heer......

boy:why are u running im behind u iam seeing u for the past few minutes i came to help u and ur running

heer:i thought the stranger chasing me..........so ........i

boy:it s ok relax drink water he gave the water bottle to her.........

heer:say thanks........

and they both the mela place where all are searching for them ...........

and a person introduced...........

he also searching for the boy..........

and hecame hug the boy and aske dthe whereabouts about the girl.........

and meantime heer 's father came and he said thanks to the person and also to the boy.......

as they are ready to leave........

heer asked the boy's name

he replied...........

PREM::::::

then they move in opposite directions........

and suddenly winds blow the boy turned

and thegirl also turned

they looked at each other

the STORY BEGINS>>>>>>>>>>>>>

next post

charcters are introduced