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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

bhangda!!! =) Hey! I like reserving iwth dances!!! *stickes out tongue* 😛Whatever you wish, hehe!

Oh ho ho!!!! G-mom trying to plan something for Premeer is she!?!?!? *wiggly eyebrows* 😉😆 I wouldn't mind if she talks to them!!! 😆 Yes she feels Heer is the perfect girl to be Prem's wife and her badi bahu! But she won't be talking to them so soon, hehe, they need to sort things out themselves first!
OMG, Prem really needs to get his ego deflated a little, it's arrogance with him, not confidence!!!! *shaking head in dismay* I hope Heer doesn't fall for his traps instead he falls for our Heer the way she is!!!! 😳 Go Heer, tell him how it is!!! 😆He certainly does need his ego deflated, his head has reached the ceiling! 😆 Heer won't fall for his little traps, she will see the genuine Prem first then fall for him!
YAY, Preet is coming back, i wonder when the whole Meet thing will come out in the open....... *shrug* I'll wait!!! 😳 Great update Zaza, can't wait till the next part!!!! Yay, Preet is coming back- Meet won't come out in the open so soon! Yes, you will have to wait, hehe!
Love you!!! *hug* Love you too! *hugs back*

Originally posted by: rankanrock

hey gr8 ff! continue soon

Thank you, glad you are liking it so far! Will continue soon! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😃


First of all I loved that you updated! 😃😳 Thank you Meera!! 😳


And I'm very very sorry for not updating my comment on time!😔 Awww, I have said before and I am saying it again, NO NEED TO APOLOGIZE! It really does not bother me- you got here before I updated, that is all that matters! 😃


I like the way Lalit told Gayatri not to interfere and let it all happen the way it's supposed to!😊 One good decision, since I'm scared they'll ruin even whatever's meant to happen between the two! 😃 Yes, I didn't want the parents to poke their noses in and ruin all the progress, hehe!


This made me swoon...actually... "His touch still lingered on her body, rendering her unable to focus. " I was like *sigh* Oooh, glad you liked it, I liked that line too *blush*


Is it hard to actually hate Prem in this story? Because believe me I just can't do it...his schemes make me giggle! 😳 I'll admit my breath got caught in my throat when I read the bit about her wrist getting caught by him! *swoons again* It is very hard to hate him! 😆 His schemes are cute, but too bad Heer isn't going to fall for it so soon! 😆 Yes, I had to make him stop her somehow, so I decided for the grabbing wrist scene, hehe!


Ohhh Preet's coming back!! Whopee! 😃 I can't wait to see what'll happen now! 😃 Yes he is!! Loads of masti will take place, hopefully! And hopefully I'll be able to write it well!


Update Soon Z! 😳 Will do!


Love you all loads, Love you loads too, Zahra xx


Meera😳


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: luv4bb

awesome updates 👏 👏.i just read last 3 parts & these were mindblowing.update next asap.thanks 4 the pm.
luv
Fatima

Hey Fatima! Thank you! Awww thank you for taking the time out to catch up with the FF and drop a comment, it means a lot! No need to thank me! xx

Originally posted by: shabo24

Thanks Meera for telling me about this!

Z, that was a fantastic part - love how Heer is resisting - it's going ot be even more better when Prem finally wins her over. And I love how Gayatri says she will try not to interfere. =]

--shabz

Shabz!! 😃 Yes, thank you Meera! 😛 Thank you Shabo, glad you liked it! Who said he is going to win her over? What if she continues to resist? 😆 You will have to wait and see what happens, and yes Gayatri is pretty funny, let's see where her 'trying' gets her! 😆 Anyway, hope the revision and exams are going well! 😳 Love Zahra xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

huh , naughty Prem....how I looooooooveeeeeeee naughty Prem!! Do continue soon....

Hehe, who doesn't love a naughty Prem? 😉😆 Will continue soon! xx

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

Hey!!!

Amazing update!!
hmmmmm so Gayatri wants Heer as her bahu...soo sweet!
i love how Prem just grinned wen he heard the door being knocked..lol so cute.
Prem's being very naughty..or atleast he is trying to..but Miss.Heer isnt giving in...i love Heer's attitude, and the way she hold's her self back before giving Prem a piece of her mind..
loved the part..
do update wen u get a chance..take care and keep smiling..
~nikki😳😃😊

Hey Nikki! Thank you! Glad you liked it! Yes she would like Heer as her bahu, she feels that she is the perfect girl for her son! Yeah the grinning part was cute! Heer won't give in yet, he has to work much harder to get her to give in! Will hopefully update soon! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey Just started reading this and found it really interesting You have a great writing style Cant wait to read more

Hello Aaliyah! 😃 It's great to have another reader, I'm thrilled that you are liking my FF so far! Thank you so much! xx

Originally posted by: bd670816

Hey!Amazing update!So Gayatri wants Heer as her bahu!!!!
do update when u get a chance.
tc.

Hiya! Thanks a lot- I'm glad you liked it! Yes she wants Heer as a bahu, because she knows that Heer is amazing, hehe! Will update soon! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey zahra!! awesommmmmmmmmeeeee update!!!👏 loved it!! y is prem so sexy????😳😍 i have to give it to heer for maintaining her resolve in front of him!!😆 hehhe!! he's too naughty for his own good! 😉😳cantt wa8 for next one!

love
hiba

Hello Hiba! 😃 Thank you! I don't have the answer to that question hehe, he was born sexy, hehe! 😆 Yes Heer deserves a pat on the back for being so strong willed and not giving in! She has self respect and will -not give herself up to a man who doesn't deserve her- yet! 😆 He is too naughty for his own good, hehe! Will update soon! xx

Originally posted by: meiskan

Hey there! I absolutely LOVE this FF! Its one of my favs!! Please update soon, and plz add me to the pm list!

Hi there! First of all a big welcome to the forum! 🤗 Hope you enjoy it here and make loads of friends! I am glad that you are liking my story so far, it means a lot to me! One of your favourites? Wow, thank you! I will add you to the list! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Magpie_07

Hey Zahra,
I used to be a regular reader of 'Mera Dil..' ...just stumbled upon this FF and read all the chapters...it's great and I'm loving it.....Glad you came up with this.

Prem is a Casanova ! And Heer seems to have been smitten by his charms...am sure she'll set him straight soon😉

Eager to read more.


Meera Di!!! How are you? 🤗 Yes I remember you were a great and loyal reader of my first FF! Plus, you could relate to the storyline, since you were having your first child also! 😳 I heard you had a little boy- that is so sweet! Congratulations, I am very happy for you! Hope you both are doing well! 😳 Lots of love from me! 😳 Thank you for enjoying this FF just as much as the other one! Will update soon! Take Care! Love Zahra xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
lolx yes ur ryt!! hes a very very sexy greek god!!☺️ hehe!! yes heer deserves a very big pat on the back for resisting him!!! thank god em nt in her place else i wld have been all over him (so much for resistance😛😆 ) ahem lets get back to da topic! cant wa8 to see for hw long she'll continue to defy him and him to win her over!! 😳 continue soon cant wa8 to read more!😊
lots of love
hiba
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys! Here is chapter twelve, hope you like it! I don't like this chapter so much, I didn't put enough effort into it, but I hope it is still enjoyed! And oooh, YAY, this FF has crossed fifty pages, I am really grateful for the amazing response I have got, thank you for being such amazing readers! xx
Chapter Twelve

Heer ran into her room and sat down on her bed angrily. The nerve of him to talk to her as if she was an object, she thought agitatedly. She felt the pangs of a headache coming on as mixed emotions swirled through her head. Taking deep breaths in she lay on the bed and hugged her pillow tight to her chest, staring at the ceiling silently. It was only when her lids began to fall slowly that the sudden vibration of her phone alerted her of an incoming message and she quickly sat up sighing, leaning sideways to grab it from her bedside table.

She stared at the message on her phone and smiled. 'Want to meet for dinner tonight? I leave tomorrow :( ! Ajay' it read and she replied with a 'Sure, I would love to!' He told her he would pick her up and take her to the restaurant himself, to which she protested at first, but soon gave in when he sent her a funny picture of himself pouting. She suddenly felt a lot better- Ajay always knew how to bring a smile to her face. It saddened her that he was leaving to go back so soon.

Scrambling off the bed and fixing her tousled hair, she took herself to the kitchen, immersing herself in work as always. She jumped as she felt Gayatri's hand on her shoulder, fearing that it was the one person whose face she did not want to see. She felt a gush of relief to see Gayatri standing beside her. 'How are you beta?' asked Gayatri. 'I am fine, just making Palak Paneer...Maa' she said warmly, and Gayatri touched her cheek affectionately.

Heer continued chopping the spinach leaves whilst Gayatri moved to get a few ingredients from the nearby cupboard. 'Maa...what are you doing? I am here. Just tell me if you need anything, I will make it for you' Heer cut in and Gayatri shook her head smiling. 'No it's okay Heer. I am making Prem's favourite mithai- he loves ladoos' she pointed out. Heer looked down awkwardly and quickly got back to making the palak paneer dish, hoping Gayatri did not notice her blushing. Gayatri inwardly grinned- who better than her to tell Heer about her son's tastes.

'Maa...I wanted to ask if it is okay for me to go for dinner with a friend tonight...' Heer started. Gayatri frowned and asked, 'A friend?' to which Heer nodded. 'You might have seen him at the party, his name is Ajay, and we went to college together. He is going back to America tomorrow so he wanted to meet me before he goes' she said. Gayatri smiled, 'Yes I think I might have seen him. Of course you can go' said Gayatri and continued making the sweets, wondering what Prem would have to say about this dinner rendezvous, not like she was going to tell him about it.

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Heer stood in front of the mirror, fixing the bottoms of her light yellow sequined salwar suit. Putting on minimal make-up and simple earrings, she made herself out of the house to meet Ajay, who was leaning against his car, waiting patiently for her. A big smile spread across his face at the sight of her. 'Hello Ajay' greeted Heer, giving him a small hug. 'You look beautiful' said Ajay, giving her a 'thumbs up' and making her blush. 'Shall we?' he indicated to the car, and she nodded. The drive to the car was spent reliving their college days, laughing about times when they were told off in the library for talking too much, or times when they would fall asleep during class. Heer didn't remember the last time she had laughed so much.

~

'Hello Maa' said Prem, bending down and kissing his mother on the cheek before taking a seat on the dinner table. The aroma of food reached his nose and he smiled, rubbing his hands eagerly. 'The food smells great' he said, reaching forward to grab a plate. Gayatri smiled, 'It's Palak Paneer. Heer made it' she said, watching Prem's face intently. Prem mouthed an 'Oh' and began serving himself the food, his eyes grazing the room, searching for that one person that his eyes craved to see.

'Ummm...Where is Heer?' Prem asked, as casually as possible, raising the spoon up to his mouth. 'She's gone out with a friend. Someone called Ajay...or something...her college friend' answered Gayatri, whilst serving Lallit the food. Prem's hand stopped midair and he dropped the spoon back onto the plate. His jaw involuntary clenched and he pushed the plate away from him. Gayatri narrowed her eyes, 'What's wrong Prem?' she asked worriedly. 'Nothing Maa, I'm not hungry. I think I'll go to my room, I don't feel so good' he said, 'Excuse me' he added, getting up from his seat and walking towards to his bedroom, hoping his incredulity wasn't visible on his face.

Jealous Prem, AGAIN, hehe! What is he going to do? You will have to wait and see! Looking forward to reading comments!

Love Zahra xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
unreserved!
ahem ahem do i smell smoke coming out from sum1's ears???😃 hehe!!! awesome update!!!! awww heer was blushing wen gayatri told her of prem's fave sweet!😳 tht was cute!! tsk tsk gayatri is too sharp for her age😉... heer beter look out if u want to stay away from prem coz gayatri is nt far from making u her bahu 😆 so prem is jealous?? hmmm watch out heer sum1 is ntt going to be very pleased wid u wen u return! 😳 thank god ajay is going to america coz if he wld have stayed for long thn i dun noe wat prem wld have made of him😆😆😆 lovely update gurl!! buh i so hate u for stopping here!! nw i cant wa8 to read wat will happen nex!! u miss are very evil!😉 😃 jus kidding! dunt mind😊 pls continue soon!😊
lots of love
hiba
Edited by premeerrock - 16 years ago

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